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Thanks to all IL stalkers in last thread who helped me complete the thread. It coz of you gals that sometimes i give update stealing time from my schedule.
Thanks for giving your love to this FF.
Also sorry for delay. Got completely busy with family.
Next part - enjoy
--Anu
Part 31
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"Dinner invite is not important for you, I know but it means so much to me coz I will be going with you, it is important for me. We both together are going to dinner."

Geet did not say anything more, but Maan felt there were many things hidden between those lines. He had to figure out.

Maan immediately held Geet's hand in his, "Geet tell me everything, many things are going behind your mind and I don't like it. You have to be open with me as you always have been, Hmmm"

Geet just looked down "Have I left you alone to face many things" there was deep concern in his eyes, somewhere pain too for being so careless and leaving this innocent soul to face things on her own when he was supposed to take care of her innocence.

But the fact of life is also that, as we grow up we face new things and facing those things start bringing maturity in person. But Maan was not ready for that. Her innocence, her childishness, her care free nature was as if an asset to him and he was in no case going to loose it.

He hold her face between his palms and a slight tear in his eyes. Geet Immediately hugged him

"Maan I love you, It will be my pride to go with you." Maan himself restless, rubs her back "Pagli when did I say, I will not go with you. I am here only for you. But you have to tell me things going in your mind."

Geet did not know how to tell him and thus she leaves him and goes little far away and stand facing her back to him

"I am not going to tell you anything, you don't deserve to listen" Maan knew he had to pamper her and he was loving to do it. He went near her, held both her palms in his and entangled their fingers, leaned down on her shoulder and kissed her cheeks. Geet shivered and blood rushed from top to bottom in her body. Maan felt inner peace feeling her soft skin.

He turned vulnerable Geet towards him, she kept her for head on his chest

"You don't speak anything, why should I" she said in low voice, still in shaky state. Being so near to him, her heart was going out of control.

He lifted her chin from his finger to make her look at him but Geet looked down..

"Nazren Milaoo na, phir kuch bolun" Geet's lips were again shaking. She was cursing her lips, why can't they even for once be stable when he was so close. Not able to look up, she just shaked her head in NO.

Not being able to take this innocent torture anymore, to Geet's surprise Maan left her chin and held her waist by encircling his hand around and pulling her closer.

"Ok, but promise you won't run away in shy hearing that from me.. promise" She didn't say anything and for few seconds just stayed that way, testing Maan's patience.

After a little while when she got in control "you took so long, simply saying won't work." And she looked at him with baby face

"I want it to be very special, just like a fairytale" Maan pulled her even closer, feeling overjoyed she her back in her own self. It was Maan and his pampering, how could Geet not come back to her old self

"Ok. It will be special, how I don't know but I promise But before that you have to be a good wife and tell you husband everything"

Geet's belly tickled hearing husband and wife for them from his mouth. He was openly accepting.

And she felt his grip loose and slipped from him, running in happiness which she did not want to show him- her craziness' She ran "let me see how you make me say everything" she laughed and ran in the garden.

Maan ran after her and after a while caught his flying butterfly by her hand and pulled her. But due to her speed, he stumbled and fell on ground along with her. He hit the ground and she on top of him.

By reflex, Maan held her waist for her support. But soon tightened his grip on her'

Geet Made baby face ' Maan laughed on that "You know making this face will not help at all, this will only encourage me to not leave you."

"Dhatt" and she hid her face on his chest, which made her mind go more insane, his fragrance; he was so close to her, being with her.

While both were lost in the new sensation they heard someone cough. Maan immediately left Geet and turned around to see Vicky standing and Geet soon straightened her self.

Vicky had come to Garden looking for two when he found Geet lying on Maan's chest. He had to cough to gain their attention.

"What are you doing here" Maan asked trying to make a straight face.

"I am sorry Bro" Vicky said with smile "Well bro I was in impression that everyone forcefully tied you to this relation" he teased Maan.

"You are talking too much. Is this the way to talk to your elder brother and why are you here?" Maan was trying to be as straight as he could but nothing was working on Vicky.

Vicky looked at Geet "Geet, you should have told me na that the Garden this side was reserved today tou main aise.." Maan looked at him in anger, though it was not anger actually, he was directly caught by his younger brother.

Geet just ran away from there.

"Don't add and multiply things" "Ji Bro" Vicky looked down still smiling at his Bro's condition.

Maan left to walk but stopped "Listen, you were not here." "Ji Bro"

But Vicky was really happy that Maan had accepted the relation as he was very worried for Geet.

Whole day after that both avoided each other and also family got them busy. Knowing Maan was staying for a week in this unplanned vacation, everyone was on top of mood.

But by evening, they were just dying to be alone with each other in their room, so many things to talk and this new feeling- just like a nay nawele dulha aur Dulhan (newly married couple).

After dinner they were having family night walk in their elegant garden. Maan was there and so whole family had just decided to manage their work from home, except Annie who had to attent college.

Winter was just entering, soft cold breeze were touching their body and making them little shiver but it was pleasant weather overall.

But in all this and the beautiful weather there were two bodies who were dying to get the warmth within each other embrace but were separated between the families.

Geet was pushed in women's group and Maan in other group.

After a while, Maan could take no more and excused himself, their eyes met and Maan signaled her and left.

But Vicky whose eyes were on the duo got naughty idea.

After Maan left, Geet was eager to leave but Vicky make sure to involve her with everyone and raised some questions that everyone attention went to Geet and the more she wanted to go she was not getting chance.

Geet knew this was all Vicky's trick. At last she saw him with pleading eyes

"Mom,We should let Geet go now."

Soon his mom realised "Ohh humbhi na,Maan is here after so many days and we are holding Geet here.Beta bolna tha na "

Geet didn't say anything. Annie said "abb jaa bhi"

While on the other hand Maan was pacing in the room eagerly waiting for her, wondering what was taking her sooo long.

This time all the thought of her being a kid and responsibility were gone; he was now crazily waiting for her' his wife, his beloved.

He heard the door clicked and Geet felt a sudden pull as she entered the room and soon the door was closed and she was pinned to the wall with her both hands down entangled with Maan and she as captured between his full body and wall.

Her heart was beating fast, first with sudden jerk and then with this closeness but before she could gather herself . he brought his face very near hers, filling her whole face with his warm breath "Itna intezar, itna" but Geet was all lost and somewhere scared with the intensity at which he looked at her. There was no softness, just demand'demands from a lover. No where she was a kid and he the guardian, they were partners, jus partners- Husband and wife.

She was lost, could not say a word, he lost his patience and nuzzled his nose on the side of her neck, his lips touching her shoulder. Geet lost the track of everything, she was just drowning in the situation, the cool breeze where touching them, making the closeness even more pleasurable. Maan just stayed there like that for long while "Bolo na Geet" and his moving lips brushed her skin, unable to bear, she tightened their entangled fingers.

getting too long, so Hubby wifey talk in next part. It was getting too long and I was getting lost in Maaneet. Hope you don't mind it.

Hope You like the update.

Precap 1: Hubby wifey talk

Precap 2: Saying ILU in fairytale style- Maan. Kaise hoga?

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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ossum update dear
waiitng fr hubby and wifey talk
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it ilu in fairytale style



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superb update
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