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Hello guys so I am back again to crisp your minds...first of all I am very happy with the way things are going on with me now a days as I have received a good response and totally opposite to my expectations the OS has also done really well and many people have read it and liked it. I hope I am able justify whatever expectations you all are keeping up with me. So without further ado let us go back to update (Please bear with spelling and grammar mistakes as my English is not good as your all)

Part – 7

After finishing dinner cum snacks Sharon went up to swayam who was chatting with few boys who liked their performance and was guiding them with some steps.

Sharon: Umm excuse me guys can I talk to swayam alone please...

Guys: oh sure why not... and great performance you were fabulous on stage.

Sharon: Thank you so much for your nice words I am really glad to know that you guys liked the performance. Swayam please come here for 5 minutes.

Swayam: yes Sharon what is the thing?

Sharon: Swayam I think we should try to leave for Mumbai as early as possible as the weather is not good outside and we have to travel a long journey back and it's already 6 in the evening now it will take minimum for hours for us to reach Mumbai.

Swayam: ok chill don't panic I guess we should leave in 5 minutes let us meet Jiana and bid her bye and leave than.

Sharon spoke to herself ek to itna acha weather hai usme ye Jiana ki baat karke kyu mere mood KO dull kar raha hai.

Sharon: ya swayam I guess you are right let's meet Jiana and leave

Than both of them started to search for Jiana who was standing in the corner with her father.

Sharon went ahead and called Jiana.

Sharon: Jia babes please come here we need to talk to you. Hello Uncle how are you? I hope your health is better now and you are taking proper care of yourself and your diet now.

Jiana's Father: Yes beta I am fine and taking proper care of myself darling. How is Gautam? I haven't seen him from long now.

Sharon: Ya Uncle Papa are fine and he is out of India from last 2 months for a concert. May be he will come back next week.

Jiana's Father: Ok good carry on your conversation with Jiana and please enjoy the party.

Sharon: Sure Uncle. Come Jia

Jiana: Ya Sharon what is thing you want to talk about?

Sharon: Jiana actually it's getting late so I and swayam are planning to leave for Mumbai as soon as possible.

Jiana: oh ya you are right you both should leave early as weather is not good outside and swayam has to self drive the car to Mumbai so it's not safe for him drive late hours.

Sharon's Mind what the hell why is she worried about my swayam? I am there Na to take care of him. I have to keep her away as much as possible. Because swayam has actually left an irresistible effect of himself on her and I have to make sure she doesn't anyhow fall for Swayam.

Sharon: Ya Jiana you are right but I am there with swayam and we will manage it ok.

Jiana: hey its ok babes I was just saying casually as I was worried for both of you.

Swayam who was standing quietly finally spoke up.

Swayam: Ya Jiana that's so sweet of you that you are worried for us but don't worry I am a tuff guy and I can take care of myself and Sharon very well.

Sharon's Mind: OMG did he just said that he can take care of me and himself to Jia. Thank god swayam finally has shown his true colours.

Jiana: ok swayam you are one hell of sweet guy I have ever met yar come give me a hug before you guys leave.

Swayam and Jiana hugged.

Sharon was furious: what the hell why did she demand a hug from swayam? And why is swayam even hugging her? Arghh swayam you are so gone for doing this.

Swayam: Jiana its ok now I guess we should leave.

Sharon and Jiana hugged each other and bid good bye to each other.

Sharon was now angry at Swayam and was not looking at him.

Swayam's Mind: Beta swayam kasrat karne taiyar hoja ye siren ab gussa ho gai hai isse pure raste aise nahi dekh sakta main.

Swayam saw a flower shop nearby parking lot and rushed there. He bought some Red Roses for Sharon and came back to parking lot where Sharon was waiting for him and gone furious because he was late in taking the car out.

Swayam came to Sharon with roses hidden behind his arms.

Swayam: Sharon VO ye tumhare liye laya hun main please accept this...

Sharon: but should I accept this?

Swayam: Because we just gave a rocking performance and you were just an amazing partner.

Sharon's Mind: OMG he is so sweet how he knows that I like this type of gestures to be done with me after all my good performance and Rey also used to this. How did he know this? Ye sachme mera Mann pad leta hai kya?

Sharon: Ok... Thank you...

Swayam: Pleasure was all mine miss... and by that I mean pleasure of dancing with the hottest girl on the block and then to get your token of appreciation accepted by that same girl is not usual thing so pleasure is all mine Miss Rai Prakash. Dancing with a stunning girl like you made my day very special today.

Sharon's Mind: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG somebody please pinch me did Swayam say those lines for me? I mean how sweet this to say such lovely lines for me was. Oh how can I be angry with such a sweet guy for so long...? But don't forget he was not with you when you needed him most...

Sharon: Ok Mr. Shekhawat I am glad to see that you had pleasure. (with full attitude she sat in the car and mind you she was blushing with that also because effect of those line had not gone from her mind)

Swayam's Mind: You rock my evil mind that trick really worked look at her she is so happy to see the flowers for her. Now focus swayam get back to the mission abhi bahot kam baki hai remember abhi bhi iske dimag mein kahin muje lekar ek doubt to hai hi...

Swayam sat in the car and started driving...

The weather outside was like this... the clouds had covered full sky and a cool breeze was flowing. It seemed like dark night in the evening where it was just 6:20. And then it was just damp enough to make the weather full romantic.

And in the car Sharon was anxious to feel the weather...

Sharon: Swayam can you please stop the AC and open the windows

Swayam: As you say my dear boss "Your wish is always my command" (and opened the windows) feel the lovely romantic weather outside today.

Sharon: Hmm weather is just perfect for a long drive today

Swayam's Mind: did she just say ke the weather is perfect for a long drive. That means she wants to be with you dude to enjoy this weather. Sharon tum chahe mujse kitana bhi naraz ho jao pyar to tum mujse bahot karti ho that is for sure now.

Sharon's Mind: Did I just give him a hint that I want to be with him. Oh no he is so sharp he will understand this that I want to spend time with him. I have to maintain my attitude otherwise he will make out that I have soften towards him.

Just than little drops of rain started flow from sky and weather just turned into a perfect weather for a long drive. And swayam decided to talk something about the dance to Sharon.

Swayam: Sharon what do you say did we rock the dance today?

Sharon: Absolutely swayam did you observe the way people appreciated us.

Swayam: Ya I saw people enjoyed every bit of our dance and they liked our chemistry also.

Sharon: Ya I guess they liked our pairing very much that's why they enjoyed the dance.

Sharon's Mind: pairing to acha lagna hi tha Na Sharon ke sath swayam se zyada acha kaun lag sakta hai.

Swayam: Yup akhir kar swayam Sharon se zyada acha kisike sath dikh sakta hai kya?

Sharon's Mind: Did he just spoke what I thought. OMG he can read my mind.

Sharon blushed slightly

Swayam's Mind: Oh God not again blush ye karti hai aur breaths meri heavy ho jati hai. Shit dam main isko itna zyada pyar kyu karta hun.

Swayam: Sharon do you feel that we connect to each other better without saying a thing

Sharon: ya I guess our silence speaks more than what we speak to each other. I guess you can read my eyes well and we were able to coordinate with each other.

Swayam: Partly right Sharon, we were coordinated because apart from me reading your eyes very well, you also understood what my heart communicated to you very easily. I can bet Sharon no one in this world have understood my heart the way you have understood.

Sharon was blushing like hell with these words of swayam and could not think anything beyond his last few words.

Sharon's Mind: so he means to say that I am the only one who can understand his heart. Ya he his right I am the only one who can understand his heart and I won't allow anybody to understand his heart more than me. Swayam Shekhawat whatever the fights we have but it doesn't take away this fact that you are too sweet.

Sharon: Hmm I guess because your hearts knows whom to trust and who to not so it trusts me more than any body...

Sharon's Mind: Ab bolo Mr. Swayam Shekhawat kabse aisi line marke muje blush karva rahe the Na tum...let's see ab tum kya karte ho.

Swayam was just stunned to hear this and he looked there at Sharon and was lost in her eyes until he heard a horn and light coming from front towards his car and he took the car in side.

Swayam's Mind: oh my god isne abhi abhi jo bola vo kya tha did she means that she has to be the only one who should have access to my heart. But my love you are the only one who lives in this heart it's all yours.

The strings of thought of swayam was broken by a loud voice of Sharon

Sharon: muje ghurana band karo and concentrate on road warna hamara accident ho jayega.

Swayam: Kya karu " KYA KARU YE NILI ANKHEN ITNI GHEARI HAI KE INKI GHERAI ME DUBNE KE BAD AUR KUCH NAZAR HI NAHI AAATA PARI"

Sharon's Mind: what he said this lines for me oh how sweet of him yar. And did he call me angel oh god why he comes up with this words that makes me blush.

Swayam's Mind: Dude you have rocked the show once again dekh VO blush kar rahi hai that means your lines have worked. Way to go buddy way to go.

Both of them were lost in each other's thoughts just than swayam thought of hitting the radio and he hit the radio guess what the song played there was...

"TU MERI ADHURI PYAS PYAS TU AA GAYI MAN TO RAS...(2) HAI GUSHARISH HAS DE TU TO ZINDAGI CHAIN SE CHUT KE HASEGI MOTI HONGE MOTI RAHON ME HON HO HO HO..."

And instantly a smile came on lips of swayam as this was just what his heart wanted at that moment a smiling face of Sharon.

And guess what Sharon was smiling at once from open heart...

Swayam's Mind: Oh god finally ye ladki ab dil se hasi... God ye kitni khoobsurat hai ki iske hasne se badal bhi khush hoke aur zor se Pani Girane lage aur wind bhi aur strongly blow karne lagi hai. Her smile has this charm; it can really captivate anyone's heart to its last beat. Kisi KO bhi zinda mar sakti hai ye smile.

Just than passing by swayam saw a ice cream shop and remember that Rey had told him that barish me ice cream khana bahot pasand hai Sharon ko. So he just stopped the car.

By all of sudden stoppage in car made Sharon wonder that why has he stopped the car.

Sharon: Swayam kya hua suddenly car kyu stop kar di tumne?

Swayam: Sharon VO...

Sharon: Kya VO swayam car kyun stop ki?

Swayam: VO Sharon there is an ice cream shop here and I love to eat ice cream when it's raining. I go out in car and listen to radio and eat lots of ice creams when it's raining around. (In mind ye sab tum bhi karti ho I know that Rey has told me and tumhe ye sab karne ka saukh bachpan se tha but your papa being protective towards you never have allowed you to go out so it's the chance today enjoy your childhood dream and its fulfilment today.)

Sharon's Mind: Oh god isse bhi ye sari hobbies hai, acha hai finally aaj papa bhi nahi hai and mai ghar pe bhi nahi hu today I will enjoy every bit of this rains today.

Swayam: Sharon kya mai ice cream lekar AAU car mein ya tum sath chalogi? I wish tum sath chalo because aisa maza tumne pehle kabhi nahi kiya hoga.

Sharon's Mind: car mein kyu even I want to enjoy this. I will come out.

Sharon: ok let's try this also today.

Finally aane ke liye man gayi. Aati kaise nahi akhir iska childhood dream Jo pura ho raha hai...

Than swayam got the car parked in front of the ice cream lorry and both of them got down from the car and went to the lorry.

Swayam: Which flavour would you like to have?

Sharon: Belgium Rich Chocolate in candy of course

Swayam: ok

Swayam asked the lorry owner to give two Belgium Rich chocolate candy please...

And both of them of started to eat chocolate. Swayam was a bit speedy in eating that of course he liked eating ice creams a lot.

Both of them were enjoying the ice cream but where they had stopped to take the ice cream was the place near a open playing football ground. So a football came to swayam at rocket speed and his ice cream fell on the ground.

A boy came there to take the ball from swayam.

Boy: Bhaiya please ball de do Na galti se aapko lag gayi.

Swayam: I will give you the ball but only on one condition

Boy: Which condition?

Swayam: tum muje bhi apne sath khelna doge...

Sharon smiled at this cute demand of swayam and so did that little boy.

Boy: ok Bhaiya AA jao aap bhi khelna ke liye

Swayam ran behind the boy kicking the ball and Sharon to follow them...

Swayam was playing with boys so he took out his shirt and kept it on a bench there... and rains have completely made swayam wet... two three drops of water were lying on the front inch of swayam's hair and his hairs were stacked around his eyes he was constantly taking his hairs off from his eyes and smiling and kicking the ball and playing with the children and having fun time there. It seemed like swayam was living his childhood again as the way he demanded penalty kicks and tried to off balance other players by tricking them... it was all cute fun going on...

Sharon was observing swayam and thought...

Sharon's Mind: Just look at his physic he has strong built and he is having a physic of 4-pack abs I guess because uski wet white t-shirt se uske abs dikh rahe hai. He looks so hot when his hairs are falling on his eyes. OMG his smile his so cute. He is having so much fun. He is doing all these things that I dreamt of doing when it was raining outside but I never got chance to do it.

Just than swayam asked Sharon to join them...

Swayam: Sharon tum bhi AA jao Na khelna bahot maza aa raha hai...

Sharon: No swayam I am ok here you guys enjoy...

Swayam: Please AA Jao Na...

Sharon: no swayam...

Swayam called all the kids and asked them to call Sharon...

The kids went there and called Sharon

Didi please chalo Na humare sath khelna. Humien bhi angel ke sath khelna hai...

Sharon: what? Angel aur main?

Kids: Han Didi vo Bhaiya ne bola ye pari hai isse khelna bulao yaha pe...

Sharon was blushing like hell and looking at swayam...

Swayam just smiled and went on his knees holding ears and then requesting Sharon to please come and join them...

(Ok this is it ye bahot bada update hai...aage Sharon Ha bolegi ya Na ye next part mein...more surprises to come in next part. I Hope you all enjoyed this part. I have enjoyed myself fully writing this part actually most. I hope you all will also enjoy reading this part. I hope I was able to show cute and romantic SwaRon moments with good effect. If anyone found this update to be long and boring than please accept the apologies... and I promise you all to make next update more entertaining. Thank You for all the support and love you have shown while reading my works. I cannot explain this but I feel so good when you all like my work. I am nowhere near a perfect writer nor do I ever want to be a writer this is just to enjoy the feel of writing something. I was always told to be a bad story teller but the responses of all of you have proved something to me that I am actually not that bad at telling a story...I hope you all are enjoying your time. I know D3 current track is very dull that's why many of you are refraining from reading any works on SwaRon and I truly understand their feeling. Considering the thing I have tried to sent pm's to everybody even non readers also hoping that for once they will read this. But for those who have been reading this regularly I am so obliged to see all of you reading my updates regularly. Thank you very much guys for supporting me and motivating me to write more. Will try to say this for my friends that ya I have become nearby an average writer according to the standard of SwaRon fan fictions have been set by some of extra ordinary writers here. I hope you all are happy to hear this from me now)

Thank you for your time and patience for reading a big update like this.

Regards and Love

Pratik

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys do hit the like tab if you like the update and please leave all your precious comments because it means a lot to me to know how you felt after reading the update. so do leave your comments however they are good or bad that doen't mind me but i want to know what you thought about update. And ya next update will be after minimum 30 likes, if this does not reach to 30 likes than no updates further...enjoy the update and have fun time on IF...

Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res
unres
amazing update bhai.. 👏
loved it..
the whole chapteR was a treat to read,but what caught my eye is:
swayam bringing tflowers for sharon,cz she was pissed off
then swayam fulfilling,sharon's childhood wish of having icecream in the rain
swayam asking the kids to let him play with them
swayam calin sharon an angel
swayam bending on his knees and asking sharon to join them
isn't he is the most adorable guy ever!! 😳
sharon drooling over shirtless swayam☺️
sharon's monologues
Brilliant piece of writing!!👍🏼
Thanks for the pm😃
p.s:u are not an average writer😳
Edited by cuteswayu - 13 years ago
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RES...UNRES..what a cute update!!I sooo loved it!Loved the way Swayam got flowers for Sharon because she was pissed off with him..it was a cute gesture..then i just loved the way Swayam fulfilled Sharon's childhood wish of having icecream in the rain..and the update was filled with killer lines!Mostly it is Swayam who comes up with killer lines making his diva blush but this time even Sharon left her loverboy dumbstruck with her lines!And I liked the part when Swayam thought that he keeps making Sharon blush but in the process his breathing gets heavy...typical Majnu line!I really hope Sharon joins Swayam and the other bachchas for football..And Swayam told the kids that Sharon was an angel...awwwiieee!!Another part where I found Swayam really adorable was when he told the boy that he will give the ball back on the condition that the boys will have to let him play with them..Isn't he the most adorable guy and the cutest boyfriend ever!Girls can kill for boyfriends like this!:P..Maddy, this was the most cutest update ever!waiting eagerly for the next update!I hope Sharon haan karde khelne ke liye!
Edited by idiot_box - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING update...just WOW...i don't know from where to start...Sharon's jealousy ...its epic...i am loving her more with each update of yours...ans Swayam...wo toh apna hero he...loved sharon's reaction when he said he can take care of both of them...then comes the ping pong game..u score ...i score...lovely ..these two are the cutest thing ever...the flower part...our majnu knows how to pataofy the diva...Swayam at his best :

Swayam: Pleasure was all mine miss... and by that I mean pleasure of dancing with the hottest girl on the block and then to get your token of appreciation accepted by that same girl is not usual thing so pleasure is all mine Miss Rai Prakash. Dancing with a stunning girl like you made my day very special today.

Sharon's reaction:

Sharon's Mind: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG somebody please pinch me did Swayam say those lines for me? I mean how sweet this to say such lovely lines for me was. Oh how can I be angry with such a sweet guy for so long...? But don't forget he was not with you when you needed him most...

The weather part...loved it ...sharon's smile and rain...awesome 👏👏

Swayam's Mind: Oh god finally ye ladki ab dil se hasi... God ye kitni khoobsurat hai ki iske hasne se badal bhi khush hoke aur zor se Pani Girane lage aur wind bhi aur strongly blow karne lagi hai. Her smile has this charm; it can really captivate anyone's heart to its last beat. Kisi KO bhi zinda mar sakti hai ye smile.

Finally the ice cream date...cherry on the cake...sharon drooling over our majnu boys wet feature ...4 pack abs ...can't get better them this...swayam in wet hair look....loved the way swayam called her angel in front of the kids...loving this FF...can't wait for the next part...😊


P.S- U r not taking my dhamki seriously 😡...fine ...u have to face consequences😈...ye mat bolna ki warning nehi diya...bandar sena will take care of u ...😆😆


Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update pratik !!
fantastically written 👏
pura update only SwaRon . i liked it
its really fun reading abt a jealous sharon and after that she talking to herself 😆
the swaron conversation was beautiful .
swayam ne sharon ko pari bulaya . awwieee 😃
Its awesome how swayam always manages to make sharon blush like beet root ☺️with his romantic lines
i loved the dialogues of swayam , u are fabulous at writing dialogues i must say ⭐️
SwaRon ice cream date ❤️
the last part was nice , i hope sharon answers with a yes .
totally loved this part , it was damn romantic .
eagerly waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the PM

P.S - kya hua tere suspense ka ???? darr gaya kya mere dhamkiyo se ???😛

Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow this update was sooo cute n romantic! Just loved it! Swayam is soo damn cute! Haaye! He actually rembered about Sharon's childhood wish! N he called her a pari!! Awww! N even Sharon was damn cute! She kinda told Swayam indirectly about her feelings for him! I hope we get to reaf more sich fun stuff in ur next update! N i hope Sharon says yes! That'll be awesome!!

Update soon! N thnx for the pm! :)
Edited by Neeti96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
perfect dialogues loved it
do update soon
maybe next i wont be able comment but plzz do pm me

regardx
sweetcherry
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it!
thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

lovely update

perfect dialogues loved it
do update soon
maybe next i wont be able comment but plzz do pm me

regardx
sweetcherry



hey thanks for liking the update...and will surely pm you next when i update...

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