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@jyothi , thanks dear.
@hemvb and ashred , thank you.
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This would be the last part of this FF and thanks to everyone who read it and to all of you who took time out to put in regular comments that could at least get this thread to 30 pages and give me something that wasn't my own opinion 😊.
A special thank you to Cherry and Pri (you guys know why 😊)
Good luck to everyone and God bless.
Cheers
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thanks for the pm and i loved the update LD

Nikki <3
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loved d part Pra. it was so hot. But wait, what? the end? No reunion of Nikki n his father? 😕
Anyhow, loved ur ff a lot.
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Aww congratulations on a successful ff so many writers start and then abandon them!! really enjoyed reading this one and any more you care to write ?
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thats it ? Pra ... i want to keep reading it...

You are talented writer :) you pick up things and make them into such a natural scene... I loved reading through this one.. Because it dealt with N's past in such a different way... Yes even at the end of FF A doesnt dramatically tells N about finding everything out.. nor N tells him about her past but they move on... The unspoken understanding.. Thats AN.. they sometimes understand each other.. and sometimes misunderstand but their love keeps them together and lets them lead normal life (dont wnat to say happy because life is always mix of happiness and sadness) and thats what i liked about this FF.. the end is not about happily ever after but the current happines.. :) Great job.

Oh and they are going to Lakshdweep for honeymoon.. :) Thats where i had gone refusing the option to go out of country that time :) :) so that scene i felt as if i had lived it through ... :) There were so many moments in this ff that i felt like i have lived them :) So thats another reason i felt so connected and was able to relate to AN emotions.. :)

You have to keep writing... whether AN or anyone else.. i would like to read anything from you :)
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@Nikki , thanks sweetie and thank you for regularly leaving comments.

@Trish , thanks a lot my dear . Yes , I was in my better and cheerier moods when writing this part and maybe that's why they are so dreamily romantic and as you say hot😊. Anyway , you are right . This wasnt the end and I had forgotten that today 2nd Oct is a holiday . SO I am dragging my bored self to edit the last 2 parts and wrap this FF better .

@Rucha , thanks sweetie

@Missy , thank you , though I seriously had no idea that you had been following the FF so regularly .

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Originally posted by: anotheranfan

thats it ? Pra ... i want to keep reading it...

You are talented writer :) you pick up things and make them into such a natural scene... I loved reading through this one.. Because it dealt with N's past in such a different way... Yes even at the end of FF A doesnt dramatically tells N about finding everything out.. nor N tells him about her past but they move on... The unspoken understanding.. Thats AN.. they sometimes understand each other.. and sometimes misunderstand but their love keeps them together and lets them lead normal life (dont wnat to say happy because life is always mix of happiness and sadness) and thats what i liked about this FF.. the end is not about happily ever after but the current happines.. :) Great job.

Oh and they are going to Lakshdweep for honeymoon.. :) Thats where i had gone refusing the option to go out of country that time :) :) so that scene i felt as if i had lived it through ... :) There were so many moments in this ff that i felt like i have lived them :) So thats another reason i felt so connected and was able to relate to AN emotions.. :)

You have to keep writing... whether AN or anyone else.. i would like to read anything from you :)

Pri , thank you very much for this extremely sweet comment . I am glad you liked the FF and could relate to it . And abt the ending , well like I said before , the original end was meant to be on the part when A and N meet in their house after their fight/argument . But then , I ended up writing three more episodic parts with just AN and some light moments between them . It wasnt an extension of my original story or anything but I still wrote them .
I actually like you say did not want to write abt the big dramatic reveal of N's past or A's meeting with her dad, but thanks to some indirect inspiration from Cherry , one evening , I sat down and wrote the part when that would happen , though the part needs a lot of editing and like I told you before , I havent really been in a good state of mind to do that.
But today is 2 OCtober holiday and I have set down with to do it and post the two parts . Nothing dramatic , nothing explosive , so I hope you like these two parts . Yes , AN like all of us will not have a happily ever after . Life is anything but that . But I am sure they will make it work :)).
Thanks once again Pri . I am so glad you found so many moments in this FF that you could connect to . That is what I personally look for when writing or reading stufff , that feeling of getting lost into the words . I am really really happy and Lakshadweep for honeymoon😃 , I already told you , that is some real good taste you have 😊.
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