Kriyaansh SS - The Torture.(teaser-pg 43)

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kriyaansh.reyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys this is my second ss ... On kriyaansh ... I wish u guys like it ...
It 'll hv only 4 or 5 parts ...

Introduction :

The story line is same ... Its jus tat taani nd rey r already a couple nd there is no shivam ... Swaron still r goin through there mu's ( dont worry they 'll soon bcum one )

Part-1

A new mornin ,

Every1 reach the venue of THE DANCE CAMP ,

Everything went similar to the d3 ... Every1 gets to know sharon's real name - sharonjeet

Swayum : (shouts) i know sharon ... Y always me ...y always me
Mujhe lagta hai ki mai hi tumhare zindagi ki galti hoon ...

Nd swayum turns away nd sharon goes away ...

After sumtime every1 comes to there alotted room ...

Girls in their rooms ,

Simmi : sharon ... R u ok ...???

Sharon :(shouts) kya main tumhe teek lag rahi hoon ...

Rinni : sharon tension mat lo kissi koh bhi pata nahi lage ga...

Sharon : par tum sabko to pata chal gaya na...!!

Neha : sharon , hum sab tumhare frends hain ...

Sharon : guys jus leave it ... Plss mujhe kuch der ke liye akele chod do ...

Simmi : par ...

Sharon : plsss...

Rinni : ok ...

So the girls leave nd go down ... They find the boys gang nd taani...

Girls : hi guys...

Boys : hi...

Swayum : umm ... Simmi .. Voh

Simmi : voh akele rahna chahti hai ...

Rey: kya hua guys ... Vese sharon hai kaha ...??

Vicky: voh dude ... Nd he narrates the whole story ...

Rey: kya ... Guys hume use akela chod na hai ... Voh kud todi der ke baad neeche aayegi ...

Swayum : guys mai todi der mai aata hoon ...

Rey : swayum tu kahin nahi ja raha ... Chal ab ... There is a welcum party chalo sab chaltein hai ...

Swayum : par

Rey : chal bas ...

Swayum : ok ..

Whole gang reaches the party place ... Every1 ver exited ...

Nil : dude this seems like an osm party ...

Vicky : i know hot chicks ...( smirk on his face )

Neha: babu wat u talking ...??

Vicky : are tumse matlab ...??

Neha becums sad ... Swayum goes nd tells her

Swayum: chill kar neha ... Woh jaldi man jayega ...

Neha : mmh ...

Rey: Guys lets take tat table out der ...

All: ok ...

Nd they go settle down der ...

(The seating arrangement is sum wat like this - its a round table - swayum rey taani neha simmi rinni amar bharat nil aur vicky )

Nil : dude check out tat girl ...

Vicky : i know she's hot ...

Amar: tu sahi keh raha hai...

Bharat : are yaar yahan sab ladkiyan meri beja uda rahein hai ...

Reyam : despos ...

Rey : guys ... Yahan hum ladkiyan check out karne nahi ayein hain ...

Swayum : haan guys ... Hum yahan dance camp mein perform karne aayein hain ...

Nil : haan haan pata hai ... Dude check tat chick out ... Tat black dress ...,

Vicky: FREAKING HAWT...

Amar: haan ( in dreamy mood)

Bharat : are apni chehra toh dikha ...

Nil : haan turn turn...

Vicky : palat palat ...

Reyam: inka kuch nahi ho saktha ...

All the girls ver fuming...

Nil : dude her sexy back... God turn ...

Vicky : turn ...

Vicky, nil, amar, bharat : palat ...

Nd tat girl turns ...

All four : what the **** KRIYA...

Reyam heads shot up listening to her name ...

Every1 looks at tat girl ...

All : kriya ...

Rey's heart skipped a heart beat ...

Reyam became numb seeing her ...

Neha: kriya..., yahan ... Aur voh itna hot...

Simmi : i know... Par voh ladka kaun hai uske saat ...

Rinni: kahin uska ...

Rey:(in mind ) kriya ... Kriya ... Haan voh kriya hi hai ... Voh yahan ... Voh phirse meri zindagi mai vapas kyun aayi ... Jab sab teek chal raha ta ... Jab maine use bulakar taani ke saat aage bada ... Y the hell is she back ... Aur voh ladka kaun hai whose holding her by waist ... Kahin voh ,... Are rey tumhe phikar nahi padna chahiye ... She used you dude ... Par ... Kriya ... Meri BAATCUTTER ... nahi tum ab kriya se nahi taani se pyar karthe ho ... Kriya jus used u... Now she's already moved on ... Kya sach mai kriya move on kar chuki hai ... ( rey was goin through mixed emotions while on the other side ...)

Swayum : ( in mind) kriya ...kriya... Haan voh kriya hai ... Meri best frend meri best frend... Kitne din ke baad tumhe dekh raha hoon ... Kahan chali gayi thi ... Kriya... Mujhe us se baat karni hai ... Haan mujhe us se puchna hai ... Woh ese kyun chali gayi ... Par voh ladka kaun hai ... Kahin ... Are mai toh bhul hi gaya ... REY...

Swayum then looks at rey who was still staring at her ...

Every1 ver jus shocked to the core ...

Neha: neha wanting to meet kriya ( nd she gets up from the chair )

Swayum : nahi neha abhi nahi ... Jab time aayega mei jake baat kartha hoon tum bet jao ... Plsss...

Neha : par...

Rey cums out of the confusion ...

Rey: voh ... Yahan ... Kya kar rahi hai ...???

Every1 then luks at him ... Then understands wat he is goin through ...

Taani kept a frowning luk ...

Swayum : rey pls...

Rey turns away with an angry luk nd holds taani tightly ...

Taani then smiles a little ...

On the other side...

Yes tat girl was kriya ...THE KRIYA GHAI ..

She had come with her gang ... A gang of 6ppl...- 3boys nd 3girls including kriya - Their names - arjun, kriya , dhruv, shanaya, rohan, riya ...

(The guy holding kriya's waist name is arjun )

Arjun : kriya ...Babes can u go get me a drink ... Mei tab tak koi table dundtha hoon hum sab ke liye ...

Kriya : mmh ... Nd she walks away to the bar counter ...

Swayum thinks this is the right time nd walks near the bar counter too ...

While others jus watch from their table,

At the bar counter,

Kriya : umm .. Give me two drinks ...

She then rests her elbows on the counter,

Swayum cums next to her ... Kriya was lost in her thoughts so she dint notice him...

Swayum then clears his throat... But kriya was lost in her thoughts ... He again clears his throat...

Kriya cums out of her thoughts ... She turns to see who it is ...

Kriya became shocked to see him ... Swayum ... She dint know wat to do... Hug him or ...

Swayum : kriya...

Kriya then suddenly pulls him into a bone crushing hug ...

Tears start rolling down her eyes...

Swayum- tears were rolling down his cheeks

Swayum : kriya tum kaise ho ...

Kriya then suddenly pulls back from the hug she wipes her tears,.. Nd she sees in the direction of arjun ... She sees tat he is not visible anyver ...she pulls swayum aside into a corner so tat no one sees them ...

In the corner,

Swayum : kriya kya hua ,...

Kriya: shh... Nd she peeps out ...

Swayum : kriya...

Kriya suddenly hugs swayum nd starts crying ...

Kriya (crying) : swayum *sob* swayum i missed you ...*sob* Mujhe yahan se le chalo... Swayum mujhe is narak se nikalo ... Plsss ...*sob* Swayum mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai ...*sob* Mai yahan nahi rahna chahti ... Swayum voh mujhe bahut martha hai *sob*... Mujhe uske saat nahi rahna ... *sob* Swayum plss mujhe bachalo ... *sob* Plsss swayum mujhe yahan se le chalo ... *sob* Plsss swayum ... *sob* Plsss

Swayum trying to console her ...

Swayum : kriya... Kriya ... Chup ... Chup ... Ho jao ... Kaun tumhe martha hai ... Kriya rona bandh karo ... Teek tarah se batao ... Kriya ... Kriya...

Kriya : voh ...*sob* voh ... ARJUN ...

Swayum : arjun ...???

Kriya : haan voh ...( Then kriya realises ... )

She rubs off her tears nd straightens herself...

Kriya: huh ... Swayum .. Mujhe abhi jana hoga ... Voh mujhe dund raha hoga ... Mein tumhe call karthi hoon ... Jab free hoon tab ... Plsss tab aajana ... Mujhe abhi jana hai ... Mei tumhe sab bata doonga ... Aur haan agar mei tumhe iss party mai phir se mili toh ... Plsss mujhe pehchana na mat ... Plsss
Apna number do ... Jaldi ...

Swayum : par kriya ... Pehle batao ... Toh..(but cut by kriya )

Kriya : plss swayum ...

Swayum : acha teek hai ... 987...

Kriya then runs away frm der nd goes near the bar counter nd walks towards her frends ...

Swayum then comes out slowly fully confused ... He was hell scared for his frend ... He was wondering wat was goin on ... He then goes to the louins

Vicky : dude woh tujhe kahan le gayi ..??

Nil : dude sab teek hai na ...

Swayum was still in tat confused state ...

Rey curiously asks... Which was enough for swayum to cum back to senses ...

Rey :dude ... Kya hua ... Voh tumhe kahan ... I mean woh teek toh ... Ummm ...

Swayum : guys voh kisi mussibat mai hai ... Nd tears started rolling down from his cheeks ...

Every1 get up from their seats nd stand

All : matlab ...??

Nd swayum narrates the whole story ...
Swayum : guys woh puri baat toh nahi bata payi ... Par mujhe yah pata hai ki maine kriya ko kabhi bhi is tarah daari hui aur itna rota hua nahi dekha hai ... Kuch toh gadbad hai ...

Rey :( in mind) kriya itni ro rahi thi ... Kriya daari hui thi ... Yeh toh meri baatcutter kabhi nahi thi ... Kya woh koi mussibat mai hai ... Kya hua hai kriya ke saat... Voh teek toh hai na ... Aur kaun hai yeh arjun ... Aur voh kriya koh martha hai ... Feel like breaking him to pieces ...

Everyone were hell confused ...

On the other side,

Arjun : hey kahan yeh kriya ..?? Huh ... Voh rahi ,..,. Kyun itna time laga ...

Kriya : voh voh ... Drinks banane mein der lag gaya ...

Arjun : acha baito ...

Kriya : huh...!! Voh mujhe kuch dizzy feel ho raha hai ... Mai room mai jake so jati hoon ... Aap log enjoy karo ...

Arjun: kyun kya hua... ???sab teek toh hai na ...??(in a suspicious tone)

Kriya: haan ... Haan voh bas meri tabiyaat ...

Arjun : acha teek hai ... Riya tum iske saat jao...

Riya : hmmm...

Kriya : nahi mai akele hi ...( cut by arjun )

Arjun: ( harsh tone ) : chup maine kaha voh tumhare saat jayegi ... Bas ...

Kriya :(scared ) hmmn...

Nd den kriya nd riya go away to their rooms ... Swayum nd the gang sees them going ... They decide to follow her slowly...

Kriya nd riya enter their building ver their rooms are alotted ... The louins stand out...

After 10min ... Swayum gets a call from an unknown number...

Swayum : hello ...

..: swayum ...??

Swayum :haan ...kriya...???

Kriya: swayum tum kahan ho ... Kya tum...( but cut by swayum )

Swayum: mai tumhare building ke neeche kada hoon ...

Kriya: teek hai ... Mai abhi aayi ... Tum akele ho na...??

Swayum luks around ... The whole gang was der... But he says

Swayum : haan mai akela hoon ...

Kriya : teek hai mai abhi aayi ... Nd she hangs up ...

Swayum : guys aap logon ko hide karna hoga ... Kyunki mai ne kaha ki mai akela hoon ... Plss mai jab tak nahi boltha ... Koi bhi bahar nahi aayega...

All : teek hai ...

Nd every1 hides ...

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Yeh tah part 1 ... Toh kaisa laga guys ... Shud i continue or jus forget about this ss... Do tell me... See ya for now ... Plsss comment karo aur like karo ...

index

part1- pg1

part2-pg6

part3-pg13

note -pg18

part4-pg30

teaser-pg 43

Edited by kriyaansh.reyam - 12 years ago

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Maneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome start
loved it
WHT iss arjun ki itni himmat vo kriya ko maare
eager to know the reason behind this
update soon and plzz pm me..

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Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome dear...

i really wanna read the next part soon...

jaldi update karna plzz

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REDWINE

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg its really awsm

plz update soon

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Misha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Luvd d first part...

Really interesting..

Do update d nxt part soon...

N please pm me...

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shalini saroha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oossomm start!!! Loved it:-):-) do continue nd pm me...early want to knw d reasn behind kriya's sadness... Waitng 4 nxt chappy... Update soon

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..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was really intresting...

i luvd it..

waiting 4 the next part..

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madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow. . .wow and wow. . . . . . . . .
Awsome part. . . .
Lovd it. . . .
WTH...arjun kriya ko maarta hai,i jst feel like going and killing him. . . .
Uski itni himmat. . .
Urrggh i hate him to the core. . . . . .
Jab kriya swayum ko rote rote bata rahi thi,toh i also startd crying. . .
Nw,eagarly waitng 4 the truth. . . .
Vaise egarly waitng 4 the nxt part. . .
Update soon. . . .
And do pm me wen u update nxt. . . .