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Posted: 12 years ago
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V well written n a v nice start.add me to ur pm list continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi suk i am confound by ur writing,,👏pls update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow really nice update.

Pl PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all i am going to have change it from os to ss soon
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pls put an index too... :)
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nice ss
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OMG wow awesome concept.

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The next morning Madhu brings coconut water with lime for RK his head was throbbing he had not drunk in over 6 months, "this will help RK " as she gives him the drink, Rk takes it from her "thanks", he then has a flash back of how he got home, madhu & Bittuji holding him, n just before he went to sleep he told madhu " he loved her", RK looks at Madhu who is about to leave, "biwi how did I get here last night? I don't remember a thing", Madhu takes a deep breath "Rk bittuji & I brought you home " RK nods his head looks at Madhu n gets up.

Dips is having breakfast with sikko, he tells her "darling you are so tired these day I barely get to see you these days", " Sikki you are not working, your father's business is gone, so what are we suppose to live on" ? Sikki looks at her" darling that day will come when I become a superstar very soon" Dips looks at him " sikki that day came & went you can never become a superstar like your brother". Sikki looks at her angry..

Rk and Madhu walk into the dinning room " sikki I am meeting my good friend Trishna now for coffee its late I better get going" Rk n Madhu both look at Dips, " good morning jiju & bhabi ji" madhu says, both look at her, just then Radhaji comes in, Madhu beta come and eat, madhu goes up to her n touches her feet & Radha blesses her, RK looks at them both but does not say anything. "Biwi I will be going fifteen minutes , by then your breakfast will be done", Madhu nods her head. " Rk will you not eat" Madhu asks, he looks at her n shakes his head " I have eaten enough after seeing you and the aurath who gave birth to me doing your sass bahu drama" he leaves. Dips smirks and also leaves.

Sikki follows hers like a sick dog .

Dips meets Trishna at Caf Express, Dips smiles I have been wanting to me meet madhus sister for such a long time, I knew in my heart that you would be just as beautiful as Madhu, Trishna smiles " step sister", Dips asks "what would you like to drink?", "water plse" trish replies. "if you don't mind me asking why have you called me?" Trish asks, "didoo that's what madhu calls you? I am working on two films one is with rk n the other is with a south indian director, I need a second lead as Rk will not let madhu act, I thought if you were like madhu then why not ask you'', Trishna looks at Dips ''why are you doing this?" Dips thinks I have tried everything to separate Rk and madhu nothing has worked that mukhund turned out to be spineless, so why not get a worthy adversary , "Trishna madhu and I are friends as well as sister in laws I know she has wanted you to be a actress so I have come to help you with your dream." Trish smiles Madhu has come through for me she thinks to herself.

Both get into deep conversation from family n friends n how both enjoy dancing dips listen to trishna carefully, then she asks about Malik, so Trishna tells her how malik became their father, n how Takhar Balraj Chaudry their father wanted to kill them how malik n roma tricked them into thinking we were dead, Dips smiles n says" if only Rk knew about what the real story with malik was he would never have insulted malik or your mother like that. Trish says "that is the past, we have moved on".

Dips and Trishna part with kissing each other n dips promising her soon she will be a big star. Both part ways. Bittu ji was on the other side of the road watching Dips he then calls RK who he dropped at the studio earlier.

A few months went by, Malik came to see Madhu and RK, "RK the remainder of the money" Rk looks horrified how come this man can pay this so quickly, what Rk did not know was Malik had land he was given to him by his father he finally sold the last lot. RK looks at Madhu "you are free take your things and leave" Madhu looks at him "I came with nothing I will leave with nothing" she fights back her tears, Malik looks at Madhu he knows something is wrong, he holds her hand n takes her out of the door, Going down the elevator Malik asks "Madhu whats wrong?" "Malik I cant leave he married me even though I have not married him our marriage rasams are not complete I am still married to him" "Madhu you love him? " madhu looks at Malik she nods her head. "Malik I cannot leave" Malik hugs Madhu The elevator door opens madhu n malik walk out they don't see the men, one hits Malik on the head and the other grabs madhu n drag her out.

Malik tries to give chase but passes out, some people help him get to the hospital. A few hours later padmini calls Rk " RK where is Malik and Madhu?" ahh sassa ma oh I cant call you sassa ma any more Malik took your daughter a few hours ago" "Rk are you drinking" padmini asks . Bittuji comes running in Chief chief, Bhabhi ji was taken away by someone n her father Malik is in hospital" Rk quickly gets up n asks which hospital Bittuji? Chief it's the memorial Rk tells padmini to meet him there," she puts phone down n panics telling Trishna that they need to leave now.

At the hospital Malik is conscious but doctors were stitching him up, the police was there, Malik shouts "my daughter has been kidnapped?" RK and padmini and trishna arrive, padmini asks what happened, Malik tells Padmini that "Madhu was staying with RK " RK looks at him shocked", Malik looks at him "our daughter loves you".

Padmini mobile rings "Biwi apki beti Madhubala looks just as beautiful as you" All these years i thought you & my daughters were dead" Padmini screams " Balraj dont hurt Madhu".

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow and wow such a lovely update... plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow gud update
cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
and write third chapter soon

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