AR FF : D3-Dil Dosti Aur Dard

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Angel_of_hearts

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Posted: 13 years ago

😛😛Hai everyone!!! Dis is Angel.. Iam a silent reader n this is my first FF so I need all ur help n guidance in middle if iam struck at any point of the story.This story is based on a true incident but i have changed some parts for ur convenience. This is a story of 8 couples n this story doesnt revolve only on the concept love but it consists of love,romance,sacrifice,pain,enjoyment n last but not the least one main concept which binds all couples that is FRIENDSHIP.I hope you enjoy this FF.

Dil Dosti Aur Dard

Character Sketch

Ridhima Gupta: She comes from an orthodox family. She is apple of her parent's n shez very naughty, demanding, and lazy but has golden heart. Shez sensitive,nervous but doesn't show it n very hot tempered girl. She is inherited with traditional values. Her parents Shashank Gupta n Padma Gupta are very strict in the matter of friends n enjoyment. They believe that friends should be up to particular limit, they are not the life. They are against the word LOVE. They love ridhima very much but are scared of losing her in the name of love, friends n enjoyment. She has a past which will be known later in the story.

[Shilpa]

[Jennifer]

[Sukirti]

(You can choose anyone among them as your ridhima for me its always jennifer)

Armaan Mallik: He is also apple of his parents. Hez flirty ,intelligent n topper of the class. His parents Vijay Mallik n Ananya Mallik are too cool.He believes in god very much. Hez very sensitive in some cases. Hez a prankster but doesn't hurt anyone badly.

Rahul Grewal: Hez same in DMG. Fun loving, kind hearted n lovable guy.

Muskaan Chadda: Shez same as in DMG.But shez very sensitive n sometimes takes things close to heart..

Geet Handa: Shez same as in GEET sweet,simple, bubbly and relative of maan and rahul..(Here both muskaan n geet are very different and are not at all identical)

Atul Joshi: Same as in DMG. Fun-loving guy. Loves his plants alot.

Anjali Saxena: Same as in DMG. Bold n beautiful, straight forward.

Abhimanyu Modi: Same as in DMG.very hot tempered n egoistic. but have a golden heart.loves his friends alot.

Nikita Malhotra: Same as in DMG. Very cute girl, soft natured but have a bit ego. Loves her friends alot n can do anything for them.Her dad will be out of country becoz of his job. She stays in hostel.

Mayank Kapoor: Same as in MJHT. Very studious n intelligent. Kind hearted.

Samrat Shergill: Same as in MJHT. Samrat is famous for his pranks, games n extra curricular activities.

Nupur Bhushan: Same as in MJHT. She has a twin sister younger than her gunjan. She is fan of SRK. She likes bollywood,films etc etc. She doeant like to study.

Gunjan Bhushan: Same as in MJHT. Kind natured, innocent,bubbly n very intelligent girl.Younger sister of nupur but both are of same age n same class. Shez a good singer.

Maan Singh Khurana: Hez very good but have short temper n a bit same as in GEET.(hehe i changed his dusht danav image into a very good boy as now hez a college student😛😛). Hez a prankster but doesnt extend it very long as he couldnt see anyone hurt. Loves his friends alot.

Angad Khanna: Hez same as in KYPH. A bit arrogant but have golden heart. He doesnt compromise for anything. He loves his friends alot n he plays another major role in the life of ridhima. How?? you will know in the story..

Kripa Sharma: Shez same as in KYPH. Soft natured girl with many ambitions. Shez cool, sweet n caring.

Kirti Shah: Lecturer in Sanjeevani Medical College. Shez very strict n same as in DMG(Hilter😛😛). But very sweet from heart. Cares alot about her students.

Shubankar Rai: Hez also one of the lecturers in SMC. Very friendly n same as in DMG.

More description abt characters or more characters will be added in middle...

Edited by Angel_of_hearts - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-1

It's a beautiful morning where we hear gayatri mantra in a house. The house is full of smoke due to the dhup sticks. And we see a girl who is sleeping with a frown.

Padma(Pad): Ridhima beta utho. Dekha aaj bhi tum late uth gayi tumhare papa ko pata chala toh who bahut gussa honge utho beta. Aaj tumhara college ka pehli din hain

Still we see the girl sleeps by covering her ears with her pillow. Padma gets irritated as this is everyday drama. She took a glass of water n stood near ridhima's bed

Pad: Agar tum 1min mein nahi uth rahi toh mein tumhare oopar paani daalungi utho.

Ridh: Kya hain mumma tumhe aur koi kaam nahi hain kya meri neend kharab kar rahi ho raat bhi theek se sone nahi diya badi badi lectures de rahe the dono tum aur papa aur subha subha lecture urgh mujhe sona hain

Ridhima scolded her mom n again tried to sleep.

Pad: Ha lecture diya hum tumhe kyunki tum toh ek baar hume sharminda kardi hume darr hain ki tum phirse wahi karoge isiliye diya humne tumhe lecture. hum tumhare maa baap hain tumhari bhalayi chahte hain aur humari society mein kuch izzat hain hum who khona nahi chate hain tum samajh rahi ho na. ridhima utho ab college jaana hain tum tumhare papa ko promise kiya ki tum unhe phirse niraash nahi hone dogi toh ab utho.

Ridhima's past was again taunted by her mom n by the time Padma finish speaking ridhima was crying silently with her bedsheet coverd over her face. Her mom knews she shouldn't remind her the past but her daughter is still the same lazy n naughty after happening so much in her life.

After her mom leaves she gets up n goes near window n looks out thinking about her life how it changed with one mistake. She came into world with the noise of her mom shouting from kitchen n she goes to get ready for her college.

It's her first day to college but shez neither nervous nor excited she just want to make her papa proud. After getting ready she goes near pooja mandir where her mom was doing aarti n her dad standing doing prayer. She stood by joining her hands n started praying

Ridh(Praying) : "Bhagwaan ji!! Mein ne galti ki hain aur ab use bhoolna chahti hu please mujhe itna shakti dijiye ki mein use bhool jao aur apne maa papa ko kush rakhu. Mein aur problem create karna nahi chahti hu. Who mujhe pyaar karte hain aur yeh mera farz hain ki mein unhe khush rakhu. Aaj mere pehla din hain apne college mein. Mein ek nayi shuruwaad kar rahi hu mujhe aapki aashirwaad chaahiye please bhagwaan ji".

After praying she took blessings of her mom n dad.

Shas: God bless you beta. Tumhe pata hain na tum mujhe ek promise kiya ki tum mujhe proud feel karwaouge. Mujhe meri beti par poora bharosa hain ki who apna waada nibhayegi.

Ridh: Papa mein apni waada poori karoongi. Mujhe maaf kijiye ki meine aapko aur mumma ko bahut dukh diya. Mein bahut buri hu papa.She started crying saying this . Thanks papa mujhe ek aur chance dene k liye.

Shashank n Padma too got tears in their eyes but they controld themselves n consoled ridhima n cheered up her.Later they had their breakfast n ridhima left for her college.After ridhima goes

Pad: Bhagwaan ji!! Please meri beti ki raksha karna is baar hum nahi seh paayenge please uska yeh decision use bhool nahi jaane dena..

Shas: Padma tum kyun itna chinta kar rahi ho. Mujhe meri beti par bharosa abhi bhi hain. Ha who badi galti ki hain par who uski naadani hain. Mein bhi chahta hu ki who phirse wahi galti na kare par hume apni beti par bharosa rakh na hain.

Here Shashank n Padma were worrying about ridhima future but her future is going to be changed by two persons

A boy gets up smiling n goes to jogging n comes back n get ready for his first day of his college.Hez none other than our hero ARMAAN MALLIK. After getting ready he goes to pooja mandir n prays to god

Arm(Praying): "hey god ji!! Kaise ho aap?? Aapko pata hain na aaj mera pehla din hain college mein aur mein bahut excited hu. Aaj mein apne manzil ke raaste mein ek aur milestone pe khada hu. Mujhe ek bada neuro surgeon banna hain aur mein bahut padhayi karunga. Mujhe kuch nahi maangna hain bus mere mummy daddy ko kush rakhna aur mujhe achese dost de na iss college mein".

By the time Armaan completes his pooja(:P) ananya his mom prepares breakfast n sets the table.At dining table

Arm: Hey beautiful!! Good morning!!! N hugs his mom

Anan: Good morning beta!!!!!!

Vij: Armaan!!! Mein bhi hu yaha

Arm: Sorry dad Good morning!!!

Vij: Good morning beta!! Toh ready ho na apne first day ke liye???

Arm: Yes dad. Iam very excited u know new college new experiences new friends n new subjects

Anan: Beta jaldi khana finish karo late ho raha hain aur please apna dhyaan rakhna

Arm: ha mom don't worry aur dekhna is college mein bhi mein hi top marks laaunga.. says with a dreamy smile

Ananya n vijay smiles at their son n feels very proud of him later he goes to his college.

Like this everyone gets ready for their first day of the college n are very excited n nervous too.

Edited by Angel_of_hearts - 12 years ago

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Angel_of_hearts

@Angel_of_hearts

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part - 2

SANJEEVANI INSTITUTE OF MEDICAL SCIENCES

The prestigious college which is famous for its teaching about all kind of medical studies. Principal of this college is Anurag Mehra. Hez very strict from outside but is very soft natured person. His first n most priority is discipline among students. This college is built in vast area with numerous classes, a large library, a very big canteen, etc etc., Every student will be concentrated on studies as well as their extra curricular activities n sanjeevani got many prizes. Atlast its best college among all over india'

At 9.00 in morning a bike comes from no where n stops infront of the parking area n a guy removes his helmet very stylishly. All girls were drooling over him. He smirks on seeing this n start going into campus after parking the bike. While going we see all girls were fida on this guy but he smiles n continues going where while taking a turn he bumps into a girl n both falls down.

Boy: Aahh!! Dikhta nahi hai kya!!

Girl: (without seeing the girl) Iam sorry I was late dats why I didn't see

Now both see eachother n gets shocked

Boy: Tum???

Girl: Tum???

Boy: (Hugs her n say) Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???

Girl: Main iss coll mein student hu aaj hi meri first day hain

Boy: Oh Kripss!! Iam very happy that u joined this college. I thought we wont meet again.

Kripa: Ha angad iam too very happy to see you atlast koi toh hain iss college mein joh mein pehchanti hu

Yes, they are angad n kripa n they know eachother very well actually they are very good friends in their high school.

Ang: Btw seems like we both took same subjects chalo class mein chalte hain

Kri: Ha yaad dilaya tumne chalo chalo already late hogaye hum.

Edited by Angel_of_hearts - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

😭Hey i dont know whether you guys are liking this FF or not so guys whatever your feeling like or dislike plzz comment so that i can make changes...

Next part will be given after recieving comments from you😭

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Angel_of_hearts

@Angel_of_hearts

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part - 3

At sharp 9 there enters a lady wearing a pink saree.

Lady: A very good morning to all! Welcome to SMC. This is a prestigious college known for its discipline n students. So I hope you concentrate on your studies only. Well let me introduce myself. Iam Kirti your Anatomy lecturer n class teacher bhi.

Girl: Excuse me Ma'm!! May I come in??

Kir: You are?

Girl: Iam Ridhima Gupta first year student.

Kir: As this is your first day iam excusing you.Come in.(She turns towards class) As I said SMC is known for its discipline n I wont spare anyone who comes late to college. You are Medical students n you shld know the value of time. Anyways I will give brief intro to your subjects.

"The course of MBBS is five and half years including one year of internship. The first year consists of one year teaching basic science subjects ' Anatomy, Physiology and Bio-chemistry with some learning of Community Medicine. The first two semesters or term consist of first year. The first two semesters (approximately 240 teaching days) will be occupied in the phase I (pre-clinical) subjects and introduction to a broader understanding of the perspectives of medical education leading to delivery of health care."

And you will have weekly tests starting from next month n based on your performance in that your grade will be decided. Now introduce yourself n your ambition etc., lets start with last bench boys.

Boy 1: Iam Rahul Grewal. I want to become a cardiologist.

Boy 2: Iam Samrat Shergill. I want to become a successful doctor.

Boy 3: Iam Abhimanyu Modi. I want to become a Neurologist.

Boy 4: Hai! Iam Armaan Mallik. I want to become a top Neurosurgeon.

Boy 5: Hello Everyone. Iam Atul Joshi. I want to become a Pediatrician.

Boy 6: Hello! Iam Maan Singh Khurana. I want to become a Pathologist.

Boy 7: Hai. Iam Mayank Kapoor. I want to become a Top surgeon.

Boy 8: Iam Angad Khanna. I want to become a Neurosurgeon.

Later all boys introduced themselves n meanwhile kirti is doing some work in her register n listening to the intoduction

(Note: Boys and Girls were sitting separately now in four rows like 2 rows boys n 2 rows girls)

Ridh: Hello Everyone!! Iam Ridhima Gupta. I want to become a successful doctor so dat I can fulfill my parents wishes n make them proud of me.

All in the classroom looked at ridhima n even kirti who was doing her work looked up n saw ridhima.

Arm(thinking): Wow! Nice ambition

Noticing that all are looking her ridhima felt very nervous n askd kirti

Ridh: Maam can I sit??

Kir: (Smiles) Yes. Next.

A girl stood n was about to introduce herself they hear a bell ring.

Kir: Ok students! Your first hour finished n remaining introductions will be continued later. Have a great time.

After kirti went all were introducing themselves with eachother. Some are making friendship already.

Atul, Armaan, Abhi are from same school so they know eachother from starting.

Atul: Arey Armaan!! Hum sab phirse same class mein kitna maja aayega na.. He gives a tight jappi to Armaan.

Arm: Abey champ! Chodo mujhe mein mar jaaunga chodo mujhe

Atul: Sorry sorry.. n he turns to other guys to make fraaandship with him.

After making frndship all became good friends except 2 boys Maan n Angad as Maan always concentrates on studies n angad never care.

Here girls side a girl came near ridhima n asked

Girl: Hey ridhima!! What a pleasant surprise. You here??

Ridh: Hey muskaan! Ya iam surprised too..

Ridhima n muskaan are from same class in +2 but they never spoke with eachother.

As we know ridhima is so soft n nervous girl she spoke very less to muskaan n was like if anyone comes n introduce then only she will reciprocate else she sits silently.

Meanwhile muskaan introduced herself to everyone in the class n got to know that nupur n gunjan also twins. Later slowly ridhima made friendship with nikita, nupur, gunjan, muskaan, anjali, geet.

After second hour there enters a man. Hez smiling very cheerfully

Man: Good morning guys!! Iam Subhankar Rai. Iam your Physiology Lecturer. N I know you are very nervous n I also know that you got bored of giving introductions about yourself. So I have a plan I mean a game.

Listening to the word of game all faces were lighten up.

Shu: Smilingly. So the game is you all take a piece of paper n write your details like name,place,hobbies,achievements and guys please don't write any ranks or percentages of your previous classes I just want to know about your personal not your studies. Is it ok with you???

All: Yes sir!!

Shu: So start writing I will give 20mins for you all. Time starts now'

After 20mins

Shu: I hope you wrote everything. So now fold your papers n make them as chits. Quick.

Everyone were confused but did as shubankar said.

Shu: now all of you put your chits on this table. One by one please.

After everyone kept their chits Shubankar mixed all chits and asked each student to come n take one chit. After students taking chits.

Shub: Now open your chits n you have to introduce the person whose details were written in the chits. I want both the persons on the stage. Come on start.

Some students introduced eachother now its our gang's turn

Atul: I want Anjali Saxena to come upon the stage please.

When atul saw anjali behind him violins were playing like in Main hoon na. Love at first sight 😛 😛

Atul: Well, Shez Anjali Saxena! Her hobbies are chatting with friends. Well achievements she didn't write anything. Isn't it great guys!!

All were looking at atul weirdly n anjali toh not at all looking at him as if she cares.

Shub: (Clearing his throat) Yes atul its great now you can go n sit

Anjali: Wait sir! Actually I shld introduce Atul as I got his chit.

Listening to this atul's heart was jumping in joy

Atul: (Thinking) "Haaye!! Yeh kitni beautiful hain. Aur iam sure yehi hain who ladki joh mere life partner banne ka layak hain warna kyun bhagwaan hum donon ko ek dusre ko introduce karne ka chance deta. Meri anjali.. Haaye meri anjali sunkar toh bahut accha hain meri anjali."

Edited by Angel_of_hearts - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys iam back!!! Sorry for late update😭. And i really want to know whether you guys are liking this story or not if you want any change in the story please tell me i will be glad to know that😊. Next part will be posted within two days. I hope you like this FF.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part - 4

While atul is in his dream lands shub was trying very hard to make atul come out of his dreams in this process he pushed atul a bit hard that atul sliped over anjali n both were on ground n atul on top of anjali n both were having a beautiful eye lock

Both atul n anjali's hearts were doing dhak dhak

In background song was playing

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
ho Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saansen
teri woh hawaien hai -2

Ayee aisi raat hai jo
Bahut khushnaseeb hai
Chahe jise door se duniya
Woh mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Phir bhi hai dil mein
Saawal kahee
Sapno mein jo roj kaha hai
Woh phir se kahun ya nahi

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
ho Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko jo banade jo patang saanse
Yeh teri woh hawaien hai

Tere saath saath aisa
Koi noor aaya hai
Chand teri roshni ka
Halka sa ek saaya hai
Teri nazaron ne dil ka Kiya jo hashar
Asar yeh hua

Ab in mein hi doob ke ho jau paar
Yehi hai Dua

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
ho Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai

Dil ko jo banade hai patang saanse
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

Both were staring eachother n shub again disturbed them n asked them to go n sit in there places

Shub: So next?? Hmmm let me choose one among you... Ya you miss??

Girl: Riddhima Gupta sir.

(She stand comes and opens her chit and saysss )

Rid: Its Angad Khanna.

(Sorry guys its not arman :P )

First time angad noticed this girl when she called his name n he was spell bounded by the beauty of riddhima. When he came near ridhima he felt some connection between them.

Riddhima: Hello everyone this is Angad Khanna. His hobbies are playing basketball n bike racing. His birthday is on December 3^rd. That's it sir.

Shub: Thank you ridhima you can go (after ridhima goes he turns towards angad ) So angad right whose chit you got my boy

Angad: (opening his chit he felt like crying as he expected someone special's chit but got...) ah its Armaan Mallik.

Listening his name our hero got up showing his killer smile n dimples n came near shub n angad

Angad: This is Armaan Mallik. His hobbies are same as mine playing basketball n bike racing. His bday is on Jan 1^st.

Shub : Wow Armaan lucky man your bday on jan 1^st.

Armaan: (shys) Thank you sir.

Angad didn't like that he got a competitor in his class having same hobbies like his. He immediately went to his place and shub shrugged off his shoulders with angad's behavior.

Shub: Ok Armaan now open your chit and call the person.

Armaan: Its Riddhima Gupta.

Hearing riddhima's name by Armaan, angad felt jealousy, anger n etc etc but he controlled his anger n concentrated on ridzi's details

Ridz went and stood near Armaan

Armaan: This is Riddhima Gupta. Her hobbies are reading books, playing volley ball and dancing. Her achievements are she won many awards for her dance n her bday is on 24^th January.

Shub: Oh wow we got a dancer in our class btw ridhima what type of dance you can do

Rid: Sir, actually I used to dance previously but I left it 5yrs ago maybe by now I must have forgotten some steps too.

Shub: Its ok riddhima our college hav extra curricular activities facility wer dance also is one of d activities you can learn here.

Rid: I hope so sir thank you so much

Shub: Good you both can go n sit in your places.

Angad remembered each n every detail of riddima n he was liking her even more now.

Edited by Angel_of_hearts - 12 years ago