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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Amy--

You should take ideas from me!!! That will help you to write more lovey dovey stuff😆😆

And Yeah I prefer a jealous Khushi than an understanding one!!

Understanding will lead us nowhere but when she will be jealous,She will realize her feelings for Arnav!!!😛



hehe

acha acha relax!! u will love the next update!!!

so now leme write 😛 (yes i havent written it yet)😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sias2

read your story and its truly amazing..v cute love story between two adorable beings!
please update soon and please pm.



aaww...
thanku so much and welcome to the ff dear!

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Posted: 13 years ago




YOU, ME AND UR "DAUGHTER" - chapter 19

Arnav:LAVANYA

Lavanya: ASR..

Both said each others name out loud, one in surprise the other in joy. With that lavanya ran and hugged anrav tightly.

Khushi who was just behind them could not register what was happening, one moment she sees this unknown beautiful girl calling out for ASR and in that instant she lands in his arms. WHY? Much to her surprise arnav hugged her back with the same intensity. Pure love could be seen in their eyes and ACTIONS for each other. Khushi couldn't pin point on what was happening to her, she felt like puking and her head was spinning maybe because she had a bad flight, no she perfectly remember sleeping in arnavs embrace and she was perfectly fine until she saw this sight. Cant be jealousy, how can she be jealous of arnav being with another girl. It didn't matter to her did it?


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Arnav: lavanya' my.. my.. baby' how?when?why didn't u tell me?

"LAVANYA MY BABY" the hell, mr raizada just got himself into some deep shit ' wait why am I being so possessive. I am the one who teaches and preaches the theory that all men are like this, unfaithful piece of scums'

Arnav had tears in his eyes seeing lavanya like this infront of him.

Ok now this is serious, why r they looking at each other like this.. whats wrong, why do they have tears in their eyes. Are they in love'. WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON.

Khushi: care to explain mr raizada.

Khushis voice brought arnav out of his trance and he wiped his unshed tears and with circling his arms around lavanyas waiste he turned towards the others.

Arnav: guys meet lavanya' my daughter.

Khushi: WHAT!!! ARN-

Arnav: khushi before u say anything and kill me by those looks, relax ... everyone.. I can explain.

Akash: arnav why didn't u ever tell me about this. EVER

Arnav: akash I can-

Akash: akash I can what?

Nk: hey hey chill bros, can we go to the hotel first and then talk please.

There were two cars waiting for them. One that arnav had called for and one was lavanyas Bentley, eventhough arnav gestured khushi to sit with him in lav's car she coldly refused and walked to the other car with payal ands akash. Arnav, lavanya and NK came in lav's car.

The cars stopped in front of a tall building, that was their hotel in canary wharf. The entire area was surrounded by river Thames and no doubt it was a breathtaking site.



Canary Wharf, London, UK Stock Photo - 9197198


Everyone got down from the car and started walking towards the reception. Arnav only had one thing in his mind "clear khushis misunderstanding". He didn't know why he was bothered because he was just too "bothered to be bothered enough to know the reason behind it".

Arnav: arnav singh raizada, akash malik and nand kishore.

He just had to say the names and the keys were given to them.

Khushi: our room?

Arnav: remember we decided that payal will be staying with akash so they get to know each other.

Khushi: but that was before' but wait where will I stay then?

Arnav: with me *he said with a straight face*

Khushi: WHAT! NO! WHY?

Arnav: because we are getting married.

Khushi gaped at that, she wasn't expecting this as his answer. They are supposed to be on a business trip not honeymoon and did he forget she was mad at him. Before she could complete her sentence lavanya launched on her and hugged her tightly.

Lavanya: I finally get to meet u khushi!!! Dad told me so much about u'

Arnav: wait.. u talked to dad.

Khushi was confused whom she called "dad" until arnav spoke and cleared he confusion.

Lavanya: everyone knew I was coming to London to meet u guys and this was a surprise for u.

She said with a sweet smile.

Khushi: but that still doesn't mean im staying with u.

Before she could talk more arnav grabbed her hand and started moving towards the elevator.

a. He wasn't talking to her

b. He had so much to tell her

c. She was mad at him but it looked the other way round.

Lavanya: I guess we should leave those two alone for some time. ill be waiting for all of u in the caf, refresh yourselves and come down.

Nk: ill accompany you lav.

With that these two left leaving payal and akash behind staring at each other. Not to forget they also had a fight a while ago.

Akash: umm.. payal.. aarm, I can get u another room if u r not comfortable.

He said softly.

Payal: akash I know we just fought and it's the start of.. well.. something, so why not give it a try. If ur willing.

Akash gave her a genuine smile, he knew his limits around payal, even if he was Casanova this girl was still different. He loved how she confidently made a decision for them yet asked him for his consent too.

Akash: yes please.

With that they walked to their room.

Khushi: arnav leave my hand.

Arnav

Leave my hand for gods sake' stop being so stubborn.

ARNAV

And with that khushi quietly stood by his side with her wrist in a firm grip in arnavs hand who was obviously giving her the silent treatment. She felt angry but not scared, she felt annoyed but not irritated, she felt sad but not disgusted. These questions were running crazily in her mind and she had to clear her head, which means she needed a walk.

The moment she stepped inside the room she couldn't help but admire it. It was a presidential suite and it was simply breathtakingly beautiful.


(INSIDE)



(OUTSIDE)


Arnav: there are two 'separate' rooms, choose yours.

Khushi: arnav i..

Arnav: nk texted, they are waiting for us downstairs. U will get the answer to all your questions once down. Ok.

With that he moved outside giving her some time to digest whats happening. TIME.. its all she needed right now.


It had been 20 minutes since everyone gathered downstairs and were waiting for khushi who was nowhere to be seen.

A frantic arnav ran towards his room when khushi refused to pick up her phone. She wasn't responding to anyone and now her cell was unreachable. Only horrid thoughts came in arnavs mind, only one person came in his mind RODGER'..

The moment he saw an empty suite he felt as if he couldn't breathe, as if someone had sucked his life out of him. All he could think of was khushi and that 'he failed'.

HE NEVER FAILED!!!

He ran downstairs avoiding the elevator and pushing through people. He stood infront of NK and akash.

Arnav: shes missing. *he said while panting hard*

The horrified expression on the trios face was very disturbing for the girls. They knew nothing of what was happening.

NK: lets go search then.

Arnav: payal can u please take care of lavanya in the meanwhile.

Payal: sure arnav but what happened? wheres khushi? Why r u so worried?

Arnav: payal do u trust me?

All payal could manage to do was nod in a yes.

Arnav: I will get her back ok!

With that they all left.

By every passing second arnav could feel his life drain out of him. Where was she, no no nooo, NOOO way in hell would he ever let anyone touch her, come near her. Arnavs eyes were red with anger, the vain on his forehead was about to pop any minute, he kept running, here and there as far and as long his legs allowed him to go.

Suddenly he saw a girl fully drenched in a black jumpsuit sitting near the pavement of river thames.

Arnav: OH NO SHE DIDN'T!

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Ok that's it guys!!! So this is a veryyy long update!! I was very happy with the response and ARSHI WEDDING!!!

Now please I need a reward!! Long comments "EVERYONE" HEHE'

I hope u liked this update..

Pssst: spoiler alert!!! Arshi drenched in rain, arnav falls ill, di tells khushi 'something' and and and ahem, lovey dovey but between arshi this time!!!


Edited by tabbyj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lavanya is ASR's daughter!!! OMG what was I thinking??🤣

I'm a little confused...Arnav is not her father that I know!! Arnav's father is her Dad maybe she is adopted or something...Oh whatever it is I'm happy they are not dating each other!!I wasn't expecting this twist at all😆...I love you for this!!!

Arnav isn't talking to Khushi still giving her the silent treatment!!! Looks like he is mad at her but for what?? For annoying him during the flight or for feeding him the sweet cake??😆

Payash are staying together...He softly asked for her consent and she agreed!! I always found them cute...

Arshi are also staying together because they are getting married...This was also unexpected!!! I'm so happy..staying together all alone...

She goes missing at the end but Arnav saw her,she was sitting near the pavement of the River...What was she doing there???

Precap is awesome...Arshi drenched,Arnav ill!!! I'm so looking forward to it!!

All in all amazing update...loved it!!!

One question:Whats Lavanya's age??? I want to know that...

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

PS:Finally I'm first🥳
Edited by --Amy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!!

a little confused though...but loved the way he made it clear that they were getting married!!

cant wait for the lovey dovey moments!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved how he explained to her why they will be in one room...waiting for the next part to witness their romance! Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavbarun

awesome update!!!!


a little confused though...but loved the way he made it clear that they were getting married!!

cant wait for the lovey dovey moments!!!



hey i can understand ur confusion, i myself has put it there...
it will be solved in the next update!

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, i think the romance will be coming soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazinggg update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TINA!

wow, i think the romance will be coming soon



yes!! its been 19 chps now, i think the 20th one deserves romance to be in it 😆

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