OS: Rishi-Zara-Malik Khan meeting - in my way

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rishi-Zara-Malik Khan meeting... My OS starts from precap scene after Zara comes with Indu in her arms and scolds Rishi.

Zara "kaise baap hain aap, you cannot take care of your own daughter"

Rishi just stands staring at Zara as if he is in his illusion.

Rishi thinks 'my Indira came alive for me' he cannot believe his eyes. He did not hear a single word what Zara said until Zara places Indu in his arms.

Rishi immediately reacts "Indu, Indu are you ok open your eyes Indu" he panics to see his daughter unconscious for a second forgetting about Zara/Indira. Zara cools down alittle looking Rishi panic state.

Zara "relax nothing to worry, she just got unconscious. She did not get any injuries"

Rishi turns to look at Zara with Indu in his arms. He is about to say something, but hears a bullet sound near them. Someone shoots over Zara. Zara makes Rishi bend and shoots the guy.

Zara "take Indu and go from here, it is not safe for her and you"

Rishi "what about you Indira ji"

Zara gives a confusion look for a second then turns back to the goons shoots at them.

Rishi "you left me once, I am not going to leave you again" thinking she is his Indira who came from death for him. He is in illusion, a beautiful illusion in which he want to stay forever.

Zara "I will be fine and it is normal for me to fight like this, you just go with Indu" at the same time Rishi sees some one is about to shoot Zara and back, Rishi shouts "Indira" before Zara can turn the bullet realizes from the gun.

At the nick of the moment someone pulls Zara and shoots at the goon, the goon falls flat when the bullet hits his chest. Zara and Rishi turns to see Khan standing with his gun, his one hand around Zara's shoulder. Rishi gets angry to see Khan holding his Indira. Khan and Zara checks their either side to see if anyone left, satisfied that all goons are dead,

Khan says "are you alright Zara"

Zara "yes aap yaha"

Khan "yes, I am assigned to this assignment long back. I came to know you are send here for the same assignment. I am your Lead now."

Zara immediately salutes him "yes Sir"

Khan smiles "goons are dead so we are off duty no need to salute"

Zara smiles a little and turns towards Rishi and Indu. Then khan notices Indu in Rishi's arms unconscious.

Khan "Indu"

Zara gives a surprised look "do you know her"

Khan "I am staying as Rishi's house, I got information that Indu has some important information for which goons are trying to kill her, so I took Rishi's house for rent"

Rishi "tho aap be police mein hain"

khan "undercover cop hu aur-" looks at Zara says slowly "Zara's husband Mr. Malik Khan hoon"

Zara smiles as yes, goes and takes Indu into her arms.

Zara "let's take her to hospital"

Rishi feels like his world shattered again, for a few seconds he felt his shrimati ji is back but the dream shattered as soon as it formed. Khan puts his hand on Rishi where Zara walks away with Indu. Khan takes something from his pocket and returns to Rishi.

Khan "your wifes photo, I am sorry I don't know that she is your wife who just looks like my Zara. I felt you are some wrong person carrying my wife photo as target so I took it from you. When I came to know she was you wife, I felt to return the photo. I am sorry for your loss"

and leaves Rishi standing shattered looking at the way where Zara came along with Indu, in few seconds Rishi's life came back to square one, he got his shrimatiji and lost her in matter of few seconds.

Note: No bashing please... this is purely an OS written with my imagination.

Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very good one👏 I loved reading it... quite logical and everything well justified in line with the story.
The best i liked was... Khan justify why he took Indira photo from Rishi wallet. That is really good writing which throws apt logic and justifies action. I hope CVs read your OS to see how bloopers can be avoided if thought from every angle of it.
Well done preeti.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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To say u the truth preeti,I too sometime think may be Malik is not a terrorist,may be he is some special officer appointed in this case
Edited by MultiPAULOMI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww di...lovely one...you know even i was writing that scene...just a imagination...wish it could come true...i wanted it to be grand...and i wish ki usme wo teri liye waala song bhi include ho paata ...i dint completed but still sharing with you...🤗...

Zara-( in anger ) kaise baap hain aap, you cannot take care of your own daughter. You know if i haven't been that at the right time...what could have happen ?
Rishi stands still in a shocked condition not knowing what to do how to react in the situation he was in . His life was standing in front of him and was scolding him
for not taking care of his daughter . He get lost in all the memories where he din't behaved nicely with indu and just the line you cannot take care of your own daughter was revolving around him . His memories shift to the last scene where indira is lying in his hands and in background ...the dialougue hamare pyaar ki nishaani ko bacha lena. He immediately comes out of memories with the line . Till that time zara is continuously taunting him unaware of the fact that he wasn't listening a word . Rishi speaks:

"Mujhe maaf kardo...main indu ko kabhi nahi apna paya kyonki mujhe isme hamesha aapki parchavi dikti thi makanmalkin ji ."
Zara tries to speak but he interrupts her in between ...main bas indu ko khona nahi chahtha tha...sach maniye . Zara is shocked ...she wasn't getting what rishi was speaking . She put indu down resting her back on a large stone while rishi continued ...Makanmalkin ji ...iske liye aap mujhe jo saza dengi woh kabool hain mujhe...par please mujhse naraaz mat hona...mujhe chodkar mat jaana . Main aur nahi jee paunga aapke bina .

to this zara shouts...What the hell ??????? who the hell is makanmalkin ji...I am Zara ...Zara malik khan...Remember we have talked ????
Rishi gets back with the shock...all the memories of time spend with zara surrounds him... unable to stand at his current place...he steps back ...while this time zara continues...
Rishi ji...Are u fine ??...going near him...holding him and making him stand straight ...and then explaining.Your daughter life is in danger . I got her picture in a terrorist cell . That's the reason i am here to protect her ...i am sorry i am unable to comprehend whatever you just said .Right now we need to be with indu . With this zara rushes to indu...she finds water there and throws it on indu's face . Indu's awakes and hugs zara out of fear . Zara as a person consoles her and say ...indu...tujhe kuch nahi hoga...jab tak main zinda hoon tujhe koi haat bhi nahi laga sakta .

Rishi is standing still not able to believe what is happening . His heart eventually melts seeing the two hugging each other .Zara's words just make him believe even more that she indira only .He isn't able to believe zara ...and once again sticks to his openion and continues coming near to them . He comes with having all the memories of inshi together and put his hand on zara shoulders . Zara turns back and see a shocked rishi .

zara- don't worry she is alright...nothing will happen to her .
indu hugs rishi seeing his condition .
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Edited by Surbhi123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice and logical,PD!👏
Surbhi-I liked your OS too!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Surbhi its shrimatiji and its malik khan not hayath khan

by the way,I,too think it'll be just like as u said
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MultiPAULOMI

Surbhi its shrimatiji and its malik khan not hayath khan


by the way,I,too think it'll be just like as u said

haan ab shrimati ji...pehle makanmalkin ji tha...bhool gayi...
and malik khan...sorry...i dn't know kaise hoga...i want bahut saari waali memories...mujhe nahi lagta cvs denge...and ye waala sing...tere liyeee...waise it surely can be entry of malik too...because he is there for some reason...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woh...preethi amazing👏i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys for loving my OS 🤗

Sur - your version is superb 👍🏼
Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice post preetiji n agree with u malik khan returning the wallet photo to rishi wala scene exactly the same way i was thinking...cause i guess this way he he will taunt rishi that she is not yur shrimatiji n zara is his wife...as rishi will be delighted to see her back so he will remind him this way

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