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Posted: 13 years ago
Maddy please convert this ss into ff..I know we all are very sad about SwaRon but it is through fan-fics like this we are able to connect with the SwaRon we love..so don't end this ss and make it a ff..and please jaldi update karo!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pratik wow you update is a perfect blend of love, intensity and laughter. Yaar pratik, swayam ko zaroor pitwadegi sharon agar swayam ne jiana ke chakar mai pad gaye tho. Swayam is a so mischievous, and making sharon jealous of him and jiana is very nice move. Pratik you know how to captivate the readers thru your writing. Well done yaar , the whole drive was vivid and totally engrossing. The convos between the three superb. Jealous sharon is a treat, Loved the whole update. Fantasticcc👏 Aur jaldi update karo ji.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do convert this SS into FF, Pratik.
I would be really haapy if this turns to be a FF!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jiana looks super hot and want more of her with Swayam so that Sharon would be way too jealous and mend her ways...

We would love it if u convert this SS into a FF, m always for Swaron, if not onscreen atleast we can revive them and be happy in the wonderful FF's which u wonderful writers read. :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes yes convert it into an FF would love to read n
update fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
A swaron ff sat to frm an amazing writer why not..
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Posted: 13 years ago
I will enjoy reading SwaRon no matter what so I would love to see this SS turn into an FF so that I can read more !! Plus, your storyline is very entertaining, so I'll definitely enjoy it even more as an FF !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all I am up with one more update now. I am glad to say that from now on this SS is now converted to FF and this will be Fan Fiction which will contain at list 24 parts minimum as the plot and story I have is stretched up to there but if will find any more inclusion in that will do that. Now this is turning into FF mainly because of Tanukaswaron aka Tanuka and Luvsd3 aka Himani as both of them were after me for a long time to convert this into a FF. They believed this plot is really interesting and will be liked so finally I had to ask all of whether you all want to see it as FF and as far as replies goes everybody wanted it to be a FF so here it goes than from now on this is Swaron FF: Love is the happiest feeling. (note: please ignore spelling and grammar mistakes as I did not had any time to check it)
Part -6
So after Jiana left SwaRon conversation started regarding dance form and song.
Sharon: I think we should continue with salsa and the song as I guess we have finished the maximum choreography of this one.
Swayam: No I won't do salsa with you. You know which form I want to do when you are dancing. And we have prepared that also if you remember.
Sharon: swayam pagal ho Gaye ho kya tum no way Paso doable aur yaha pe us song pe are you kidding me. It's too much intimate choreography and we have small kids in the audience to.
Swayam: we can adjust that don't we, as far as song goes I think we can select a different song with same types of bits hitting and ya we can change some steps or say we will go with the flow on the stage you will just look in my eyes and I will look in your eyes and we will dance with beats our heart rates go.
Sharon: are you sure swayam it's a very risky thing to do on stage and plus we have never danced it actually in front of live audience. So we really don't know how we will adjust to ourselves.
Swayam: ok Sharon you don't adjust anything you will lead the dance and I will follow you ok but we are doing Paso doable for sure.
Sharon: it's risky but I guess considering the time we have we can manage this only.
Swayam: Great then, shall we select the song first? And then adjust steps according to the mood of the song.
Sharon: ok nice idea how about Ramta Jogi?
Swayam: Not bad Sharon even I thought of this song first.
Sharon: perfect than we shall go ahead with this song and I think this song has a perfect tempo that is required for Paso doable.
Swayam: ya you are right, you know what Sharon let's play some thing with Paso doable.
Sharon: What are you trying to say?
Swayam: I am saying this that traditionally in Paso doable we end it like bull surrenders or dies to the matador's efforts.
Sharon: ya so what it's the basic nature of the form.
Swayam: Ya I know it's the basic nature and I am going to alter that as in the end bull will not die but it will bull will survive and will follow the human instinct and become the servant of the matador.
Sharon: umm...ok thik hai not bad idea...(In mind he is really genius in short what he did is that he has made the dance form to go in the happy ending mode with aggressiveness. No wonder prabhudeva has so much love for him)
Sharon: ok than how will we start the dance than? I guess if ending is different than start should also be some what different from traditional start what say?
Swayam: seems like you have already cooked up something in your mind. Tell me what's it?
Sharon: Umm ya I mean I guess how about this I will enter on the stage sitting on your left shoulder if you can manage.
Swayam: (manage kya tumhe apne pass rakhne ke liye I can manage anything) yes Sharon no problem I can manage as you are very slim.
Sharon: (a sudden smirk came to her face as swayam complimented her by saying slim) ok good so now we will hit the floor and go with basic steps of Paso doable but will mix it with some variations of Latin forms how is this for a change.
Swayam: ok I guess inclusion of Latin is important to stretch the performance.
Sharon: ya song is long its about 6.5 minutes.
Swayam: and Sharon trust me you can hear my heartbeat you know that right. You can hear me through my heart and we will co ordinate like that only on the stage.
Sharon: umm yes I know and you also know that you can judge me well as when I want to change or I will jump and my timings as you can read my eyes I will speak to you from my eyes and you will speak me through your heart beats.
Swayam: (haay kash ye sab kuch aise hi chalta rahe zindagi bhar maine socha nahi tha subah jab hum pune ane nikle ke mera itna bada dream pura ho jayega) yes Sharon all the best and I know we will rock the dance today.
And the announcement goes like this:
Ladies and Gentlemen as it was promised to you that an international Latin style dance will be presented to you as complimentary performance. So it goes the dance presented by Mr. Swayam Shekhawat and Miss. Sharon Rai Prakash students of St. Louis College Mumbai and our special guests for today's function. So here goes the dance...
Jiana was waiting eagerly as how this dance goes...
The lights go off and two spot lights and one red back drop light flashes on stage.
Swayam was ready for dance wearing Red pant and Red full size coat open fully showing his chest and his very sharply built in physic of 4 pac abs.
Sharon on the other hand was wearing Black inner top and black shorts and was wearing a traditional Paso doable long open skirt.
Now the song hits and Swaron enter the dance floor:
Swayam holding Sharon on left shoulder and entering the stage walking slowly and steadily as what dance form requires and after entering the stage he just throws Sharon on the dance floor and Sharon sharply turns around on the floor and takes position for next beat
(the song was played in the background like this NA JANE DIL VICH KI AAYA EK PREM PAYALA PI AAYA MAIN JI AYA AYA PREM PAYALA PI AAYA MAIN JI AAYA...OYE RAMTA JOGI HOYE RAMTA JOGI HOYE HOYE HOYE...MAIN PREM DA PYALA PI AAYA MAIN TERE DIL VICH JI AAYA SARI MADHUSHALA PI AAYA MAI PREM PAYALA PI AAYA...MAIN JI AYA MAIN JI AYA MAIN PREM PAYALA PI AAYA...)
Now Sharon and swayam both stand up rightly facing each other take their hand up and stretch and bending from ankle...and start tapping their feet on the floor and walking close to each other with everytap...after that swayam pulls Sharon up straight and Sharon moves to his back side and swayam takes full rounds of the stage moving 360 degress with in himself and moving across the stage holding Sharon on the back side...and then Sharon by for forcing her legs upwards comes up facing up swayam in eye to eye and swayam hold Sharon by waist and throw her in the air and Sharon land on the floor and both of them looking in each other in their eyes with anger filled all around it and Sharon eyes blinked a lil suggesting swayam that she will come running towards him so he gets ready for that...
(All this while the song playing lyrics were TU PREM DA PYALA PI AAYA AYE TERE DIL VICH KI AAYA TU PREM DA PYALA PI AAYA AIYE TERE DIL VICH KI AAYA (FEMALE PART), SARI MADHUSHALA PI AAYA MAIN EK PREM PAYALA PI AYA MAIN PI AYA MAIN PI AYA MAIN JI AAYA...TU RAMTA JOGI HOYE HOYE HOYE..., TU RAMTA JOGI TU RAMTA JOGI OYE HOYE OYE HOYE (FEMALE AND CHORUS)...THAN MUSIC BEATS BLAST IN WHICH ALL THE HARD MOVEMENTS WERE PERFORMED)
Sharon from the one corner started running towards swayam and swayam was ready to hold her on waist position...sharon just few inches away from swayam jumped on to swayam and swayam held her tightly on waist and both of their eyes met to each other and their face were so close that they could feel each others breath and Sharon just loosened herself and her head went towards floor swayam still holding her at waist and both of them moving rounds after round crazily and in the process Sharon holds up and jumps of the higher portion of stage and stands there...mean while swayam picks up red cloth dances around latin style holding cloth and moving both feet in sink and typical doing typical salsa type walk towards the bottom of the stage where Sharon was standing...
(All this while song playing in the background lyrics were YE JOG LIYA KIS KARAN...YE ROG LIYA KIS KARAN...(WERE FEMALE LINES), EK JOGAN JASI MASTI MEIN EK MAUJ UTHI JO BASTI MEIN...HO HO HO EK JOGAN JAISI MASTI MEIN EK MAUJ UTHI JO BASTI MEIN DIL BHI AAYA MAIN PI AAYA EK PREM PAYALA PI AAYA MAI PI AAYA MAIN JI AAYA MAIN JI AYA MAIN PREM PAYALA PI AAYA...TU RAMTA JOGI TU RAMTA JOGI TU RAMTA JOGI (WERE FEMALE LINES) AND THEN FAST MUSIC WHICH SWAYAM USES FOR SALSA WALK)
As swayam reach the bottom of stage and Sharon goes for leap of faith and so perfect takes the jump and due to height she was able tu take a back flip in the air land straight in swayam's arms hiding her face in his chest and swayam just started dancing around with Sharon in hand and leaves Sharon in the centre of the stage and they both stand in the centre and clap their hands in sink and moving legs in 1-2, 1-2, 1-2 position doing rounds looking into each others eyes...
(All this while the lyrics in the background were MAN MERA MAN HAI TYAGI JAG CHUTA HAI JAG CHUTA PIYA VAIRAGI JAG CHUTA..."YE BAT VAHA TAK NA PAHOCHI YE CHOT JIYA TAK NA LAGI...OHO HO HO HO YE DARD ZABAN TAK NA AYA YE TERE DIL VICH KI AAYA (FEMALE LINES)"...OOO SARI MADHUSHALA PI AAYA MAIN EK PAL MEIN SADIYAN JI AAYA MAIN JI AAYA MAIN PI AAYA MAIN JI AAYA...AND MUSIC BEATS WHICH WERE USED FOR TAPPING SECTION)
And then Sharon turn to go on the left end and stands there meanwhile swayam also goes to right end and starts running two wards Sharon and timing was like he conveyed Sharon that he will land to her after second chartwheel and swayam takes two chartwheels and lands straight against Sharon looking in her eyes and then hold Sharon in the waist his right hand and Sharon hold his waist with her right hand and both them hold left hand straight up to shoulders and dance the most cherished Latin couple dance movie looking in each other eyes...they were so close to each other that they could feel each other's heartbeat and breaths and both were sweating like hell and just enjoying the position they were in and just than swayam holds Sharon tight again in waist and sees in her eyes and Sharon understands its time to finished step so she prepares for it and swayam holding Sharon in waist pulls her up takes to his thighs and stretches Sharon looking in the eyes of her and bending towards audience...both of them were totally lost in each other's eyes...
(All this while lyrics in the background were OYE RAMTA JOGI OYE RAMTA JOGI HOYE HOYE...DHING DHAND DHING DHANG DHING DHANG..."TU RAMTA JOGI OYE RAMTA JOGI OYE HOYE OYE HOYE"...DHING DHANG DHING DHANG DHING DHANG...TU RAMTA JOGI TU RAMTA JOGI...JOGI JOGI JOGI JOGI...TU RAMTA JOGI JOGI...JOGI JOGI JOGI...MAIN RAMTA JOGI...JOGI JOGI JOGI...RAMTA JOGI RAMTA JOGI...JOGI JOGI...RAMTA JOGI RAMTA JOGI...JOGI JOGI..OYE HOYE OYE HOYE AND MUSIC TAPS END WITH THIS)
Audience was standing up and cheering for them...but they both were lost in each other's eyes and all the memories of haye rama song fleshed in both of their memories and Sharon literally had tears in her eyes which were notices by swayam and he smiled of at them...sharon was also feeling very happy for dancing this form with swayam on the dance floor...
Jiana was just amazed as everybody was looking at their chemistry and was just thinking that how can anybody have a chemistry like that...and then all of a sudden she realised that it was Paso doable and how did swayam danced this form with Sharon...than Jiana spoke OMG that means the special person swayam referred to is Sharon and I can see Sharon also was enjoying dancing with him...OMG this means they both love each other but why the hell are both of them not realising it...
But why am I feeling unsecured with swayam feeling something for Sharon...am I really starting to like swayam? OMG oh no God please don't make me fall in love for swayam, he is never going to be with me. Then why I am feeling so much connect to him. Come on jia think he is love of your best friend how can you think like that for him...
But I have no control on my heart it is really beating for swayam what I can do now I have lost my heart to him. Please god why did you do this to me knowing this that he will never be mine...
Let's just chuck all this now and I have to congratulate them for a marvellous performance... she went off to back stage... and ya she had no pain in leg...
Jiana just ran towards SwaRon and after reaching there she just hugged Sharon tightly...
Sharon who was just coming out from the effect of swayam's eyes was just shaken by all of a sudden hug of Jiana and that made swayam realise that the performance was over and they both were behind curtains now...
Jiana leaving Sharon hugged swayam so tightly that even air could not pass through them...
Swayam was taken aback by this gesture of Jiana and Sharon to was shocked and angry at the same time because really Jiana was swayam so tightly...
And after that Jiana broke up the hug and the spoke up:
Jiana: Guys do you have any idea how fabulous you both were
Sharon: I guess your excitement has just given me an indication that we were good...
Swayam: yes Jiana thank you so much for such good response and for the tight hug (winked at Jiana)
Jiana: (came shy for the first time) oh thank you so much
Sharon was thinking what the hell he enjoyed that hug from her... I don't understand why she is just lying around swayam so much... isse world me sare ladke chodke mera swayam hi kyu milta hai ye sab harkatien karne ke liye...
Swayam: Sharon congrats for the performance
Sharon: (coming out from string of thoughts) oh thanks swayam...and congrats to you too...you were a good partner there..
Swayam: (in mind chalo yar kahin to mana ke main acha hun iskeliye thank you god iske muh se ye bulvane ke liye) thanks Sharon...
Jiana: Kya formality mein lage hue ho dono ke dono...and swayam tumne Paso doable kiya matlab vo memories Sharon ke sath judi hui hai...
Sharon: (trying to show that she had cough) woh jia it was like ke humne dance fest ke liye ready kiya tha ye performance par hum ye kabhi kar nahi paye to us waqt isne bola tha ke next time jab ye Paso doable karega to mere sath hi karega uske bad kisi aur ke sath.. so it was like that...
Swayam: (taking sigh of relief thank god Sharon ne bacha liya) yup jiana exactly what Sharon said is right...
Jiana: (Pulling swayam's cheeks) oh that is so cute swayam my cutie coo you are so caring and sweet that you finished the unfinished dance with the same person you promised...
Sharon what is it? Isse kya milta hai ye sab karke pehle kiss kiya phir hug kiya ab cheeks pull kar rahi hai...isko chaiye kya swayam se...wait wait kahin isse swayam se pyar vyar to nahi ho gaya na...agar isse swayam se pyar hua hai toh mai kya karunga? OMG please ye nahin ho sakta...i know swayam sirf mujse pyar karta hai par ye jiana sachme aise charmer hai ki kisiko bhi apne liye fall karva sakti hai...swayam why did you say those romantic lines for her now see how she has fallen for you...
Swayam in was thinking are yar ye ab sachme muje marvayegi Sharon ke jute khilvake hi chodega...dekh swayam beta teri siren kaise ghoor rahi hai tuje...aaj tu mafi toh bhul hi ja jo bhi milega use teri sutai karegi ye aaj to...
Sharon: Swayam I think humien dinner leke jaldi nikalna chaiye before it gets too dark
Swayam: ya right Sharon bahar weather bhi kuch thik nahi lag raha tha hum aa rahe the tab bhi...to jald hi nikal jana will be a better option...
Swayam and Sharon and Jiana started walking towards dinner location..
Swayam: Jiana tum kaise Mumbai vapas jaogi? Should we give you a ride to Mumbai it will be an awesome journey for sure...
Sharon was thinking what isse kyu sath me lena hai tumhe swayam...are you mad or what? No ways ab mai isse apne sath lena afford hi nahi kar sakti noways uparse iske papa bhi to hai yaha unke sath nahi aa sakti kya ye...
Jiana: swayam yes it is a nice idea...
Sharon han ise to nice hi lagega na mere swayam ke sath chipk ne ka ek aur mauka mil jo jayega isse to
Swayam: ok than have dinner with us and will leave than...
Sharon was like lo dinner pe bhi invite kar diya and drive bhi de di...hit swayam in arms forcely...
Swayam saw this anger and gloring to death mode of Sharon...he tried to say Sharon from eyes that she is alone how can we leave her like that?
Sharon replied him through eyes that she has her papa right here she can come with them...
Swayam but she didn't say anything about her papa...
Sharon what made you ask her first? Mujse puch lete pehle to kya jata tumhara...you are so dead now...
Swayam oh no ye volcano to bhadak gayi ab kya karu iss jiana ka agar sath me liya to Sharon marega and chod diya to humanity ke sake pe acha nahi hoga
Just than Jiana spoke up breaking their thoughts...
Jiana: ok Swayam listen tum log jao have dinner and leave actually papa ka text aaya hai muje abhi pune me rukna padega to I will come with him
Sharon: oh thats so sad jia agar sath chalti to kitna maza ata na (in mind thank god ye sath nahi aa rahi, aur aaj swayam bhi ache mood mein hai kuch quality time spend karne ko milega old wale swayam ke sath)
Swayam: ohk jiana catch you someother time than...
Sharon in her mind kya zarurat hai agli bar use milne ki tumhe...nowhere I will make sure tum isse ab kabhi na milo
Jiana bend forward hugged SwaRon quickly and left...
Swayam and Sharon had their dinner and were ready to leave than...
(so guys this was it for this part...i hope I justified the SwaRon dacne...i tried my best to make it perfect please forgive me if I have made any blunder...and I am sorry if anybody found it to be long and boring...)
Thank you for your patience and time for reading the update...
Regards
Pratik...
Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Hey guys thank you so much for amazing response you all have given to convert this to a FF... i am very glad to annouce this as a FF now...i hope you all will enjoy reading as much as you have had in the past... i will try my best to satisfy you all with my updates... i hope you all like this update... i am sorry if i have made any blunder in describing dancing of SwaRon... i hope you all will forgive me all lil mistakes in the update...
Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Welll that was AWESOME ..I am glad u converted this from SS to FF.. i dont know where to start ..the dance form selection part...they know they won't be able to control their feelings while doing such passionate form...hence the modifications...the DANCE ...their chemistry ...understanding wid each other ... talking through eyes(my fav part) ...teasing part...the closeness...the love...sharon's jealousy...her insecurity...jiana's realization (she is a nice girl..i liked her part) ...swayam getting scared of sharon's jealousy ...loved them all...

My fav lines :

No I won't do salsa with you. You know which form I want to do when you are dancing.

But I have no control on my heart it is really beating for swayam what I can do now I have lost my heart to him. Please god why did you do this to me knowing this that he will never be mine...

Sharon what is it? Isse kya milta hai ye sab karke pehle kiss kiya phir hug kiya ab cheeks pull kar rahi hai...isko chaiye kya swayam se...wait wait kahin isse swayam se pyar vyar to nahi ho gaya na...


Thanx for giving us SWARON 's pasa doble...m loving this FF..keep writing ...plz update soon...😊👏😃

Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago

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