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pratik vyas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: doll_sg
awesome
love the way sharon was getting jealous
hmmm must say swayam had a good plan
he dropped jiana purposely so that he could dance with sharon😳
loved every bit of it
continue soon😊

thank you so much for liking the update...nice to see the words of appreciation from you...you know those words comming from you is a big achievement for me because i personally feel you are just awsome with writing skill and whatever i have read in my life i have no doubt in saying this what you had written was the best...i am so much a fan of you and you like my work is really huge favour for me from your side...

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: marauder
<font color="#003333">Sorry for the late reply. With all the things happening I was in no mood to read anything about SwaRon. But however I finally read the update today and I can't help to finally post my opinion on it. It was awesome to say the least. If Jianna was a wonderful addition in last update then in this one she was the complete package. I seriously loved her character. Poor girl, Swayam ne sach mein pair me chot laga diya usse. Her each scene, dialogue and action was just amusing and even more amusing was Sharon's reaction to it. Jealous Sharon is always awesome to read. On the same time I loved how you striked a balance between majnu Swayam and the one who is on mission to make fall for him again. Lovely update. Waiting for the update.
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thanks so much dude shishir...i am really glad that you read the update inspite of all the news and scene going on now days...and i value this very much to see your comments...
thanks for liking the update and i wanted everyone to like jiana and your words are like an achievement to me...thanks...swayam ne jiana ko giraya just because usko pata tha agar usne jiana ke sath dance kiya to sharon aur gussa ho jayegi and swayam ye kabhi afford nahi kar sakta tha...so i guess ye to hona hi tha swayam was short of options agar vo tab kuch nahi karta aisa to he had to dance with jiana...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: shravani97
Again sorry for the late reply bro...
The update was amazing...
Like Jiana's character...
Love the part wen Sharon was jealous...
The dance convo part was also gud...
Awesome update bro...
Loved it...
Update the next part sooon

thanx sharavani for liking the update...and as always i am so happy to see your comment dear...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: LoveShantannu
sorry for late reply
Amazing update so jiana recognized swayam an a super jelous sharon she would have ripped jiana's head off
Swayam ne purposely jiana ko giradiya i didn't expected dis bt happy dat we got a swaron dance

thanks muskan for liking the update and mentioning the bits you liked the most...and yes swayam ne purposefully jiana ko giraya but not to dance with sharon but to avoid dancing with jiana because it would have made sharon more angry on swayam...and swayam just couldnt afford that so he did what came to his mind...after all everything is fair in love and war...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Note:

ok now this note is made just to let you guys know something about jiana...Jiana her full name in the ff is Jiana Johar. She is nephew of a big shot producer in bollywod (I am not imaging any name right now for her uncle so please bear with it) and she is a dance student and studies the diploma in dance from boston universtiy of dancing and pursued her grauation from there and she is presently an assistant of Prabhudeva Sir.. and she is Sharon's one oldest friends who know sharon in and out...

Now somebody in last update asked to me upload a photo or something so that they can imagine the character of Jiana better and neeti here is a pic i found that can be related to Jiana perfectly the

way i have imagined Jiana look like...

http://images.fanpop.com/images/image_uploads/Catherine-Zeta-Jones-catherine-zeta-jones-84873_1280_1024.jpg

check out the image i tried to paste it here but it didnt happen the way i wanted it...

Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Note:

From Last few days we all are very sad and not in mood to see anything on SwaRon. I am to not different from you all. But I have really put on this note now to know if you all are really interested in reading on SwaRon in future.

I have been recieving the suggestions of some of my friends to conver this into a FF. But they are my friends and they like to support me as much as they can. So i am here to ask you are you all willing to see this ss convert into ff. And if you all are willing to convert this into ff than i can plan the story track accordingly. If you all dont want to covert to ff than this will end in maximum two updates from now...

so please give me your honest reply as whether you want to see this as an ff or not?

Regards

Pratik

Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago

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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

of corse yes...:D
i like to see it as FF plz continue...

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: beeny
of corse yes...:D
i like to see it as FF plz continue...

Thanks for the response beeny...lets see what other have to say than will decide what to do

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beeny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: pratik54000

beeny thank you so much for quoting the lines you liked in the part...i am really happy that you liked the update..i hope you will like comming parts too...mane bau gamyu te dil kholi ne kidhu je gamyu te...

😃 to ave bijo part jaldi lakhje..😃
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