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Posted: 13 years ago
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Don't get me wrong, I really, really love this show, and it's the only one I am following presently.


But the number of tracks that they're developing is making my head swim.


1. Adi's marriage with Latika and Pankhuri realizing her love for him:

Somehow I think that the entire marriage in 15 days track was suddenly sprung upon the viewers...for I really would have liked to see Adi's and Pankhuri's relationship develop a little more intensely.

Granted, we got some really good scenes. But I find it really hard to believe that Adi is so insensitive to Pankhuri's feelings. He calls her his best friend, but she is still the girl he approached for marriage at one point. It's almost as if he's shoving his impending marriage and stylish fiancee into her face!

Pankhuri's realization of her feelings is however a logical development. She is after all more mature than Adi. You rock, gal!

2. Shivam's introduction and his probable marriage with Pankhuri

I personally felt that the character is being wasted on this show. Granted that he was used to create a misunderstanding by Pankhuri, but I felt that the writers could have utilized him a little bit more in creating some feelings on Adi's part. The only part I liked was the intense look of confusion on Adi's face when Shivam opens the car door for Pankhuri. There could have been more scope to the character of Shivam.

And I find it really hard to digest that Adi suddenly stops asking Pankhuri about Shivam? He was interrogating her like a policewala before! And why did Shivam accept the job offer? Is he a villian?

3. The Daadi and Harish track:

I liked the way they reinvigorated the rift between Adi and Harish in yesterday's episode...they should have followed it up a long time back!

And I really liked the character of Daadi because she appreciated Pankhuri and found her to be a suitable bride for her grandson. But still, the medley of tracks is giving me a headache!

4. The Mama-Mami track

Sometimes I don't get the point between why Sheela and Anuj should be scheming all the time. It's almost as if I don't know what they're doing!

And the writers need to be clear about their purpose and why they target Pankhuri all the time.


5. Kulluwale missing!

Most importantly, I also don't get why Pankhuri's family has left her in the lurch. They haven't been speaking to her, and her Dadaji is missing which I think is a huge minus. Won't her parents atleast call her up daily and want to know what their daughter is going through?


It just seems to me to be a case of too many cooks spoiling the broth...I hope the writers know what they are doing and give us some pleasant surprises on the way .

Sorry for the ultra long post...rant over😆

And mind, my criticism is intended to be purely constructive in nature.😛

Your response?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My dear fellow Libson-Jane fan
This is the only Hindi Serial I have followed and in love with. I learnt very quickly that you have to forgo Logic. Example : why was there no complaint lodged when Pankhuri was assaulted in office...why didn't Adi follow up more on the tract of who had sent the photos of PK-Shivam?

Then I realized ...hay I am conditioned by CSI & CBEs... one has to take things with a pinch of salt. This is only 1/2 hr soap. And the main purpose is to stir a feeling of falling in love while you voyeuristically watch two characters make mistakes in love. You are supposed to invest your emotions not logic. So I gave up completely and am thoroughly enjoying my eye-candies.

PS: I agree with your points in philosophy..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totally agree..this 15 days shadi is giving us no peace..Everything was hunky dory with adi pankhu talking, meeting etc etc..aww the umbrella scene..
But whammmy comes shivam, then latika and then dadi..sooo many people in the house and nothing really defined for them..

The only thing constant is adi ' relationship of convenience' with pankhuri with no trace of luv shuv..grrr

confuse kar ditta ..fuse ud jana hai mera 😈

btw nice post..stick around.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ shesherkobita

Fellow Jane-Lisbon fan! *does a whoop in the air*

So agree about the fact about Pankhuri's molestation...it was handled in such a cavalier manner!

But being a veteran of Hindi serials have conditioned me to accept these inconsistencies. But as you said, I must learn to lie back and let my brain relax during the 20 odd mins when I watch a soap.

But it's precisely the fangal in me protesting when I do not get the cliched couple locking eyes scene...I am more perplexed by the fact that I am not getting my dose of romance...So yeah, it's not logic I am concerned about here:D

@monu_tan
Thanks for the encouraging words! And I'm definitely going to stick around...loving this show and the lead pair:)

And uff...the umbrella scene was such a stunner!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Monu... "relationship of convenience" you are on the mark!
It is absolutely selfish of Adi to keep her (PK) around (in the name of friendship) while his mom treats her like an unwanted dog and the mama-mami gangs up on her...
The new Adi has shared very few tender moments with her...maybe he was never in love with her (that has been my new thought)...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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But it's precisely the fangal in me protesting when I do not get the cliched couple locking eyes scene...I am more perplexed by the fact that I am not getting my dose of romance...So yeah, it's not logic I am concerned about here:D
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Hmmm...my new thought from last night has been that maybe ADI was NEVER in love (he DID mention that) & has never really been in love with PK either. Sure he was smitten by her earlier but never really fell for her (unlike my previous thought that he was indeed in love with PK but doesn't realize that yet). It does go against conventional soap formula but still possible...he will eventually fall for her (how... I do not know) but right now he is concentrating on Latika... i am trying to take it exactly how Adi explains his feelings without looking for implied meanings /gestures. To me that is a plausible rationale for no romantic scene between them... there is no romance from his side.

ps: glad to be the reason for your whoop
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So i agree wid u. N Dadaji Playd by Paintal is busy doing other things so he's nt in here! N Yup Dis track m hating it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Don't get me wrong, I really, really love this show, and it's the only one I am following presently.


But the number of tracks that they're developing is making my head swim.


1. Adi's marriage with Latika and Pankhuri realizing her love for him:

Somehow I think that the entire marriage in 15 days track was suddenly sprung upon the viewers...for I really would have liked to see Adi's and Pankhuri's relationship develop a little more intensely.

Granted, we got some really good scenes. But I find it really hard to believe that Adi is so insensitive to Pankhuri's feelings. He calls her his best friend, but she is still the girl he approached for marriage at one point. It's almost as if he's shoving his impending marriage and stylish fiancee into her face!

Pankhuri's realization of her feelings is however a logical development. She is after all more mature than Adi. You rock, gal!

I cant get Adi sometime..I knw he dont believe in love. Still...how he so emotionless. 😕
I think he s never gonna realise himself unless any major incident happen


2. Shivam's introduction and his probable marriage with Pankhuri

I personally felt that the character is being wasted on this show. Granted that he was used to create a misunderstanding by Pankhuri, but I felt that the writers could have utilized him a little bit more in creating some feelings on Adi's part. The only part I liked was the intense look of confusion on Adi's face when Shivam opens the car door for Pankhuri. There could have been more scope to the character of Shivam.

And I find it really hard to digest that Adi suddenly stops asking Pankhuri about Shivam? He was interrogating her like a policewala before! And why did Shivam accept the job offer? Is he a villian?

I hope Shivam wnt turn villain as we have enuf villains now itself. Pankhuri made clear dat she not interetsed in Shivam. So he wnt turn negative I thnk. But Adi almost forgt Shivam and not even asking..hmm. I tht cv's will use Shivam for jealousy track


4. The Mama-Mami track

Sometimes I don't get the point between why Sheela and Anuj should be scheming all the time. It's almost as if I don't know what they're doing!

And the writers need to be clear about their purpose and why they target Pankhuri all the time.

I thnk they target Avanthu mainly...becoz Avanthu get angry on Pankhu's any matter..So using Pankhu 2 enjoy drama


5. Kulluwale missing!

Most importantly, I also don't get why Pankhuri's family has left her in the lurch. They haven't been speaking to her, and her Dadaji is missing which I think is a huge minus. Won't her parents atleast call her up daily and want to know what their daughter is going through?


I too miss dadaji alot..Panku or Nana never informed dadaji Adi's marraige matter..dats really weird
Pankhu's family also never cld ger 2 knw her opinion n Shivam

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Posted: 13 years ago
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read first half only! good pointers n thought i will get bk to my proper reply after reading it fully!
im jst lazy u noe wid long posts hehehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can I give a short & simple answer? I think all those different points you have mentioned are actually building up an interesting story for PaYa's love story. All those elements will create drama for the main plot.
Nice post :)

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