complex relations(Prena and Prem Fan fic)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prem and beatiful and caring Prena have a differcult relationship with love , hate , anger ,and closness , but will these two ever find fondness withing each other ?

Prem wearing a blacksuit and red tie rings the doorbell to Prenas house and Prena(wearing a grey and white/black striped lenga opens it and is shocked to see Prem but then frowns)

Prena(sighs)-what do you want yudi!
Prem(raising his eyesbrows)-Oh god Mother india , is that a way to talk to your lovely son , ok never mind i come to give you somthng (He hands out an invatation and Prena opens the envelope and reads it)
Prem - I hope you come because it'll defnitly make my day
Prena -Ill think about it , but on one condition , im not going there to gt some nasty suprises from you
Prem - You wont ,Mother (Prena has a furious look)i mean Mrs Bajaj(Prem has a wicked sile on his face and Prena has tears in her eyes and sweet background music comes and has flashbacks of Prem as a child)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prem comes home and Komila sitting in the sofa wearing silver hoops, silver bindi , and plain silver shawaalkameez smiles wickedly when Prem comes

Komilika-So you gave her the invatation ?
Prem -Yes Komilika mom , and boy she really fell for it
Komilkia-Yes im impressed , you are truly my son , i have tauht you things and you have fufilled them , just watch Prena is going to get the biggest embarrasement in her life
Prem-Mother india is completly trapped and we are going take evreything awy from her
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its good .....hope mukti is thr in it
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Prena is in her room picking random clothes from her closet ,Mukti comes in wearing blue jeans and pink kurtha with white dafodills

Mukti-You cant Choti Ma
Prena -Cant what
Mukti-Go to this party , i've seen you and Prem talking
Prena - i'm only going there to find out what dirty trick hes got up his sleeve
Mukti -Prem always insults , he doesnt love both of us , he only worships that devil Komilika
Prena (comes towards Mukti and touches her face )-I know you are concered about me Beti , but i can face Prem and you dont worry at all
Mukti-Ok choti Maa , but i'm coming with you, i dont like it when Prem insults you
Prena -Ok you can but do you want to choose an outfit for me
Mukti(smiles)-Sure(she otices Prena has tears in her eyes)-Maa why are u crying , whats the matter?
Prena (weeping and saying words tearfully)-Ive seen so many dreams , you and Prem getting married , me and Prem having a proper relationship like mother-son , Prem relising his feelings for you , respecting his Dad and my husband , but no matter how much i slap him on the face or give him lectures , i just want to be close to him because i love him so much and its hurts ecspecially for a mother (Mukti is in tears too and Prena and Mukti both hug)
Mukti-vreything wil be fine Mom , evreything , have faith in God
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It's great!! you should continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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In the hall decorated with disco lights and pink/purple curtains with a swanky dancefloor and stylish bar, Prem wearing a black suit and red tie with a gucci watch and Komilika wearing a dotted silver terquise shawaalkameez are waiting anxiously for Mother indias arrival.
Prem-God this woman is taking so long
Komilika-I know Mother India for a long time know and she will surely come because we got somthing for her.

Prena(wearing a blue chooridaar pyjama suit with diomond printand white diomond necklance and eararings)comes in with Mukti(wearing a dark green shawaal kameez with gold sparkles and gold circle earings )Prem and Komilika both notice them and both smile and Prena and Mukti both come towards them looking infuriated)
Prena-Whats with the big smile UDi
Mukti-Yes come on and tell us and dont waste our time
Komolika-Chill we want you to relax first and enjoy the party
Prem-Yes exactly Komilika mom , and by the way you are both looking very beatiful ecspecially you Mukti(Mukti angry as Prem smiles at her)
Prena-Come on Mukti
Komolika-Wait before you go give me a big thank you for arranging the party
Prena-(furiously)No(and walks off with Mukti leaving Prem and Komilika smirking and the music neeka comes)

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