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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
after looking at maan's pets it seems to me that he is not a human but a hulk
bechari geet
do continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
I died seeing the panther that was hilarious. I hope u update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow maan's definition of dog and rabbit 😊
i love geet she is so innocent 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
GEET IS A RABBIT
MAAN HAS DANGEROUS PETS
AND WHERE IS HER FAMILY AND WHY DID THEY SELL HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...amazing updatte...
gr8 pets of maan...calling a panther a dog wow...cant wait to meet his other pets like lion n tiger etc...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow superb update. Missed this part. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Want geet to know about dev. Rabbit hmmm. Maan's dogs and rabbits r out of this world.

Geet might be so scared. Maan is unbelievable. Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
the pic r scary...poor geet..maan saying it as doggie..
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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 4

At night ...
Geet was sleeping in her room, it was quiet late at night, dark & silent ...something in that darkness,moved,something entered in her room stealthily..& without any sound, pounced on her bed..bt did not touching her or waking her, it lied just beside her., while she snuggled more beside it comfortably.

At morning , maan suddenly woke up from sleep with a jerk & dashed towards geet's room,
SH*t man..how can I forget that leo loves to sleep in that room, that too in that bed..on top of that,I didn't even lock him up!
He opened the door of leo's room..bt he was not there..now maan panicked-though infront of him Leo was petrified ,bt he could make piece of any human being within second .

Anxiously maan opened the door of geet's room only to greet a sight that blew his mind- BOOM!!
Geet & leo were cuddling to each other like mom & baby,& if this was not enough, geet sometimes pecked over leo to check if he was covered completely with the blanket!
GEET! What is this??
Geet & leo both jumped at his voice..
Wo..wo..wo kya hai na..ye mere kamre me aaya'aur ..aur(actually he came to my room &.. &..)
Usko thand lag rahi thi na(he was feeling cold na..)

Maan crossed his arms over his chest & stood in his signature style with an amused expression..
Bt u were so scared last day that u were literally clinging to me whenever he was around .now what happened to that fear??
Wo..main dari thi na..(yes I WAS scared na..)she cutely told making her doe eyes more big with earnest voice..

Maan chuckeld..then what happened??
Now geet started her ram katha cutely,making her eyes as big as possible,telling maan every single details just like a kid...wo what happened na , I was sleeping ..then he came{she pointed at leo, to which leo made face & hid his face under blanket,as if trying to say..
marwaogi kya??( are u planning to kill me??!!)!!!i don't know anything,don't ask me}..

Geet frowned at this & wacked him murmuring-cheater!! Dalbadlu!! U left me here to face maan alone!! Kal raat to bara maze se so raha that!!AUR ABHI!!!(U WERE enjoying ur sleep last night here!!! & NOW!!!!U left me here to face maan alone!!
)

Then geet looked at maan & gave him a nervous smile..thinking maan didn't hear anything..well, for her bad luck, her this assumption was wrong..
See how much shy he is...
GEET!! I am waiting!!
..ha'ha batati hu na..(yes..yes ..i am telling na)
After that..he snuggled into my bed & I also slept hugging him...then na, I woke up & screamed seeing him,then na..he looked at me & again slept- besharam kahi ka,(shameless)
aur phir main vi so gayi( & then I also slept)..

Ok..maan knew that geet was weird, bt it seems that she has no limit of her weirdness ,before maan could tell her something his phone rang..he picked it up &..within seconds his expression changed from disgust to anger..ready to erupt anytime..
He cut the call & said in a serious voice-
geet get ready in one hour...today...he stopped for some moment & turned his back towards her.

We are going to meet ur cousin dev , he said without turning & left.

************
When geet had entered the place she didn't get any good vibes, the atmosphere was so suffocating.
it was a bar..bt maan didn't sit there,following him geet found herself going to tunnels & alleys & finally infront of a door where two men stood.

Those two tall & dark men wearing black glasses were looking like gatekeeper of hell waiting for them.
They bowed a little & one of them opened the door without turning;still keeping his head bowed .

When the door opened geet was shocked,petrified..as the horrible image of last month flashed infront of her eyes like a nightmare..IT WAS THEM!!! Though she was almost all the time in effects of drugs, IT WAS THEM!!! She can still remember them, they were the GIRLTRADERS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet was hell scared & wanted to run away from the place, bt as innocent an angel she was, she couldn't , she was more worried for dev,her cousin ,than herself.
As if sensing her fear,maan kept his one hand on her shoulder & as if like magic, almost all her fears were gone..

WH..Where is dev?she asked maan.
Maan looked infront & amidst all those GIRTRADERS & assistants & bodyguards, she could she him..
DEV BHAI!!
Dev looked at her & screamed immediately..OH GOD!! I am so happy that u are alright!!

Maan clenced his fist at dev's hyperbolic reaction.
Then he taunted,in a menacing voice
U look great too!
Dev didn't notice him till now, bt when he looked at maan's face his own face became white in fear..
So dev, I didn't see you after I lend u money, are you trying to fool ME??
Before dev could answer, a man of 40s entered with 5-6 bodyguards.

Well well, look we have some guest here..
CUT THE CRAP & COME TO THE POINT..
Come on, I didn't call u here to talk with me rudely
& before he finished all the guards's pistols were pointed at maan

So, u see, what happens when u offend ME?? I am the KING Of LAS VEGAS..king of underworld here..I am Lucifer.
Maan shrugged his shoulders & said..ok..ok. o why did you call me here??
I want to make a nice deal..it will be profitablr for you too, as well as me.
What is the deal?
Return geet to me. I will return your 120 corers & will add more30 corers to that.
Hmm, so u got a better offer for her,maan said without any expression.
Geet looked at him astonished,bt somewhere she new, that he won't sell her.

Ok it is alright to me as long as geet agrees to the deal.
Geet, look, that man is willing to make u his wife.
She kept numb, hoping that maan would stop all these nonsense.bt it seemed that the final blow was yet preserved for her.
Dev, her cousin, whom she loved like her own brother, trusted more than anyone in the world,she couldn't believe that he could say something like that.

Geet pls say yes, he will also pay all the debts I have taken..i will be saved from this bloodsucker maan's clutch.u will live a good life, what more u can expect,specially when u sold urself as a *****
With everyword of his, maan clenched his fists tighter & tighter..& the last word broke his patience
**SLAP**

It was not maan, geet who slapped dev.
I SOLD MYSELF!!!?? She said in utter disgust & astonishment..

Now I understand,It was YOU!!! Who actually pushed me into the car,It was YOU ,who mixed drugs in my drinks before that..It was YOU!!!she was shaking badly, as angry tears blurred her vision.

U B*** after all that I did for u, u slapped ME!! Who are u..don't forget that u r a girl, & a girl has to do what the men in family says, u will do as I say..After all what I am saying is good for u & ur future
Oh really, bt I thought somedays before this same customer was behind bars for running an illegal Pr***** hotel.he said with satire .
Then his voice became low .which could send chills to anyone's spine.
U knew this fact, didn't you dev?
inspite of which u are trying to send geet there..
he smirked..
As long as you can enjoy, geet or someone else doesn't matter to you..isn't that right??
OK!! That's enough of drama..Lucifer said.

Lets leave geet.maan said.
YOU CAN'T.
At once all guns were pointed at maan-geet.
Bt maan's bodyguards were also fast enogh to touch the end of their pistols on lucifer's head.
He raised his hands in defeat..
Ok ok..i don't want blood for a single deal..
Lets be fair & square.lets play a game.
Game??

Here are rules..he said pulling a revolver out of his coat.
He showed the caity of the revolver which were empty.
Then he put a bullet in the cavity & shot a bodygueard of his.
Black colour painted the side of his face.
Here are specially made paint bullets. We will put only one bullet into our revolvers & pull the trigger taking turns. The first person whose face is painted will be the looser..
Ok.
Give him bullet & revolver.

Nine triggers were to be pressed..& with each trigger geet's heartbeat rose..
Time passed..four more triggers were left to press for maan & lucifer.
Dev stood by her side after sometime & whispered in her ear..
Do you really think that maan will win?? When Lucifer is the person who is known as the merciless shark in the underworld??
Geet at once looked at him..what do you mean??
Lucifer doesn't leaves the one who accidently scratched him..& do you think that he will leave maan after so much humiliation?
The tension was gripping her like a deadening pall....what do you mean..she cried
Lucifer must have changed maan's fake bullets with the real ones'so he will die anyway, after which Lucifer can take you with any headache'& I will be free from my debt.
Geet was horrified & wanted to stop maan from pressing the last trigger..bt it was late.

my updates will be irregular due to my exams so pls have patience ..
press like & BIG BIG BIIIG comments .ur likes & comments motivated me to write more
Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

but its reall horrible.. this underworld, girl traders.OMG..

but 1 thing is there ..Maan is with Geet...

waiting for next update... thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
u left uncliff..i know maan is safe..

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