2 Shot - Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain, magar chupke chupke

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sajanFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Recap : Deewan family now eat together once a day.. that is dinner.. thanks to Pankhu's effort over the last 1 month that she has been here...

Pankhu and Adi are very close friends just as in the current track in the show.

Pankhu has realized she has some feeling towards Adi and keeps ignoring it since she feels she is not the right match for him. Adi is still in the Dosti mode not realizing his feeling for Pankhu which is buried deep inside..

With this recap, my 2-Shot flight named Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain, magar chupke chupke takes off...

Hope u guys will all have a sweet journey in my flight :)

Part -1

Pankhu returns around 9pm from office unlike the unsual 7pm.. But today unlike other days when she wud be even 10 mins late, there is no call/sms from Adi enquiring when is she coming back? Does she want him to pick up?..

All the way home, Pankhu kept staring at her cell expecting Adi's call/sms to check for her delay..But no luck.. .she wanted to call him, but her usual 'i should try to keep distance from Adi' dialogue alerts her mind and she controls herself from calling.

Finally, with all these thoughts she reaches Deewan Mansion..and today the scene is different. Adi is nowhere to be seen near the entrace or parking lot (where he usually waits when she is comes home late)

Pankhu feels a little sad. But manages to behave normal and enters the home.

As she enters , entire Deewan family is in the dinner table except Adi . Shaky is busy serving food... As soon as Nana sees Pankhu, he says "Pankhu beta, jaldi se fresh ho ke khane pe aaja... since you informed me to carry on with dinner, i have just started my food.. varna yeh tum bhi janti ho ki tumhare bina , mujhe khane ka swad nahi aata... tumhari aadat si ho gayi hai beta mujhe...". Avantu gives a stare at her dad hearing his dialogue... Preeti gives a sweet smile.. Mama-Mami looks at each other giving a dirty look.

Pankhu goes to her room, feeling restless since she did not see Adi even in dinner table. She wanted to call. But stops herself. She hurriedly freshens herself and goes for dinner. Dinner goes on silently until Mami asks "Avantika, ab Adi kaise hai? " ... Avantu replies a lil concerned "Soo raha hai... toh mein ne socha dirturb nahi karu... Doctor ne tablet aur injection ...". Hearing this, Pankhu cuts short Avantu and worriedly asks, "Kya hua Adi ko ?Kahan hai Adi ? Dinner pe bhi nahi aaye?? theek to hai na? Koi kuch batayiye mujhe? .. " . Avantu looks at her in a surprised look... Preeti tries to calm her down... Nana trying to calm her down says "Adi ko tez bhukar hai... shayad viral fever... doctor has given medicine.. Hope he will be better by morning... u dont worry beta... have dinner first..."

Pankhu cant gulp any food after hearing this news...But tries to manage half chapati ... Avantu hurriedly finishes her dinner and says "mujhe office ka kuch pending kaam hai... will finish. Dont want to dirturb Adi's sleep.. will see him in the morning. Good night dad." , Nana nods and says "good night beta."

Mama-Mami also says good night and leaves. Now only Preeti- Nana- Pankhu in dinner table... Preeti not letting Pankhu get up until she eats properly...

to be continued...

(will continue soon based on feedback... dont worry guys, will keep the story sweet.. No tragedy or not too much of irritating characters 😉 . Would love to read your feedbacks .. Please leave a comment 😃)

Edited by sajanFan - 12 years ago

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Sharna

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome! Cannot wait to read! Will give feedback in a few!

AH! AWESOME START!! So far really good, please do continue soon! I love the way Nana talks to Pankuri.. so sweet. And Avantika.. Uoff.. frustrating! Haha. I hope Adi gets better soon though!

Please do continue soon!

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Preity

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww... That was sooo nice..

Please continue..loved it..

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sajanFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

78 views and only 2 comments???😕

come on guys... please leave comment/criticism... it helps to improve

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anusha.cochin

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Posted: 12 years ago

LOved it Priya

Plz continue😊

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Sukhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

@ sajanfan... nice post, i loved reading it... thanks dear 😃

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sajanFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 2 will be up in couple of hrs from now

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2

Pankhu forcibly gulps some food and gets up to go to kitchen.

Preeti : "Pankhuri, where r u going in such a hurry? "

Pankhuri: "vo Preeti maasi, jab mujhe bhukar lagta hai, tab Maa mujhe Khada pilati hai(homemade medicinal drink). Mein Adi ko vo bana ke pilati hoon."

so saying she rushes to kitchen in a worry.

Preeti : with a smile on her face "yeh Pankhuri kitni sweet hai na.. aur Adi ko bhi bahut pyar karti hai"

Nana: "Haan Preeti beta, lekin yeh hamara Adi ek buddhu hai. His perfect love is right in front of him and he is not relaising his love."

Preeti: "Dont worry dad. hum sab , i mean - me , you , Jiju and shanky , hum sab milke we will make Adi realize his feeling for Pankhuri.."

Nana: will a broad smile "right beta.. ab tum ja ke soo jao"

They bid good night to each other and Preeti goes to her room. Nana still in the dinner table looking towards kitchen.

After 5 minutes , Pankhu comes out of kitchen with a glass of the Khada she made for Adi.

Pankhuri : "Nanaji, mein Adi ko pila ke aati hoon. Lekin Avantika aunty?"

Nana: "dont worry beta. Avantika office ke pending work mein busy hai. I will manage her. Tum Adi k paas jao. "

Pankhuri: "Thank u Nanaji" and she rushes towards Adi's room.

She opens the door of Adi's room and enters. There she sees Adi lying in bed in deep sleep. She rushes closer and tries to slowly wake him up."Adi, Adi... get up Adi.. Adi..." she shakes him lightly to wake him up. But he is in deep sleep. And she realizes his body is burning hot in fever. She gets scared.

She manages to wake him up and make him sit on the bed.

Adi(in feeble voice) : "Pankhuri, mujhe sone do na..."

Pankhuri: "haan haan. pehle ye khada toh finish kijiye. " and she hands over the glass to him.

Adi with a grateful smile takes it closer to his mouth thinking its some sweet juice. The moment he smells the bitter aroma, he places the glass back in Pankhu's hand and asks "Pankhuri, tu meri dost ya dushman?? itni bitter drink mujhe pilana chahati ho? no ways. now i'm gonna sleep. bye " and slips back to sleep.

Pankhuri: "Adi, Adi..."

meanwhile Nanaji enters Adi's room to see if he has drunk the Khada , but only to find Adi refusing to drink and slipped back to sleep.

On seeing Nanaji , Pankhuri runs to him and says "dekhiye na Nanaji, Adi is not ready to drink the medicine."

Nanaji: "mein janta tha Pankhuri beta ki he will refuse. But u have to somehow convince him to drink now." . Saying so , he gives a soft pat on her cheeks.

Pankhuri: "teek hai nanaji. I will make him drink"

She goes to bed again, sit beside him and forcibly wake him back and make him sit on bed again.

Adi: "Pankhuri, tu ab tak mere room mein ho. irada kya hain? " and he winks 😉.

Pankhuri feels shy 😳and puts her head down. Nana smiling from the corner of the room😛. Adi did not see Nana.

Pankhuri : " Accha, pehle ye drink finish ki jiye.. "

Adi: "Nahi Pankhuri, plzzz"

Pankhuri:"Adi, plz , plz , plzzz.."

Adi is silent looking at her pleading face.

Pankhuri: "No more discussions on this. Good Boy😊" and she takes the glass closer to his mouth to help him drink.

Pankhuri is holding the glass for him. He takes a small sip from the glass and makes a crybaby face wanting to puke it out😭.

Pankhuri has a sweet smile on her lips😊 looking at his baby face. But she hides her smile so that he takes her seriously and finishes his medicine.

Adi: " Pankhuri, iski smell itna bitter hai. tum ek baar pee ke dekho..., look i am already feeling body pain. And u r punishing me with this drink. This is not fair yaar"

Pankhuri:"ek idea" saying so , she closes his nose and makes him drink it again. Now Adi gulps the drink all at one go.

Adi: "Aaa.. so finally u won Pankhuri. U made me drink all. waise nose close karke drink karne se , u dont feel bitter smell yaar"

Nana who is witnessing all this from the corner , folds his hand, leans towards the wall and tells to himself 'yeh dono, bilkul made for each other. Kitne pyare dikhte hain ek saath...'

sorry if there is any grammatical error in hindi dialogues 😉

(thought this would be a two-shot. But now have some more scenes in mind. Will continue based on the response i get 😛.)

Edited by sajanFan - 12 years ago