SS:After past reveal leap of 7 yrs completed - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago
aweosme SS...
loved the updatess...
aryan is jst like arnav 😆😆..
arnav is getting his taste from his son😆😆...
muskaan jst like khush she is haapy with small things like khush...
update soon
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb start to making khushi realise arnav's presence to make her family complete..how children need both parents & perspectives in life...
only hope sanka devi makes the right decisions bypassing her sanak...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update :D
thanks for the PM :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think khushi's pains r getting ignored by all...even her kids...all just want her to move on...is it dat easy to forget seven yrs of her lonely life ?!
dont u think u r giving easy way to arnav...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderfull updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


a big treat for me after one whole tiring week!!!!!! thank you sooo much for ur pms!! so gratefull to you!!! awesome work literally!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it 👏...khushi is getting jealous that her children are liking their father too...it is a passe...she will too start liking father of her children as he will not leave a stone to bring back the love of his life his lovely wife in his life also his two lovely children...liked the father son dual in part 18...aryan like arnav...he too will change but will take his time like his father took to love his mother...this is very beautiful SS...loved every part of it...always waiting for next update...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 20
Khushi proceeded towards arnav who was busy with completing formalities...
Khushi:"ohh...(clearing her voices) arnavji"
arnav hearing this calling after such a long time turned back
Khushi:"i actually want to visit buaji's place..."
arnav stunned:"no khushi...i will not let you go anywhere specially there"
Khushi:"why?that's my house...my amma,bauji,buaji all are there... muskaan and golu have not seen them,they must take their blessings..."
Arnav:"Blessings!!! and from that woman...you know what are you saying?"
Khushi angrily told:"i know it,she is my amma...their nani...without their blessing my children's life would be incomplete..."
Arnav sighed:"okk,wait five minutes,i will drop you"
Khushi:"no thanks,i will manage"
Arnav:"no..."
he went outside,took car...and all of them went for laxminagar...
Muskaan in car:"papa,where are we going?say na?"
aryan:"ohh muskaan,amma told it's a surprise.so keep patience..."
muskaan:"no no way..i want to know it now!!!"
hearing their conversation arnav had reminded of their sangeet days...Khushi always wanted to know everything...
she did not like secrecy...
arnav looked at her...
khushi knowing arnav's gaze on her avoided eye locking...
they reached buaji's place...
arnav dropping them was about to leave that place,but muskaan grabbed his hand..
"papa,where are you going?"
arnav:"ohh actually,i have work in my office,i will take you in evening,don't worry"
muskaan:"papa,you can stay here,i will miss you"
arnav hugged her tightly and placed kiss in her cheek
"i will come soon...take care yourself"
he looked at aryan and said:"you do take care your sister,don't eat spicy food and ice cream,it's dangerous for your health"
aryan looked at him with tough gaze...and murmured:"so much restriction!!! if he is so aware of the fact,then why did he leave us!!!"
arnav left that place.
buaji came outside and seeing khushi after such a long time...just called garima...
"haire nandkishore!!!sanka devi..."
Khushi could not control tears..she hugged her...
garima came and seeing khushi she almost fainted...
khushi called her,she rushed inside and brought water in glass...
she gently gave water in her face...
Garima:"Khushi..where were you ??"
Khushi:"amma,don't say anything,we will talk it later,where is babuji?"
garima:"ohh,you know he is now completely cured,he went in his shop..."
Khushi pointing muskaan and golu told amma
:"guess who are they?"
buaji:"haire,nandkishore,ye chote titliya is little khushi...hain na!!!"
khushi smiled..they came near...took blessing from buaji and garima...
Garima:"this ladka is just like arnav babua...so serious"
khushi hugged aryan...
they were gossiping all the afternoon..
Muskaan was so happy as she ate so much jalebi,mithai..
Aryan was also happy to eat buaji's "puriya"!!!.
As they were tired after the busy day...they both soon asleep there...
It was night.
Suddenly khushi's cell rang,she picked up phone,it was arnav...
Arnav:"i am waiting outside,come quickly"
khushi:"wait one minute,i am just coming..."
she came near the car..
Arnav not finding muskaan and aryan:"where are they?it's already been so late"
Khushi:"they are sleeping,we will stay here..tomorrow we will come"
Arnav:"what!! how can you take this decision?they are my children,they can't be here,i...i"
Khushi:"it's my house also Mr.Raijada,and they are my children.they can stay here...you should go"
Arnav:"khushi...will you come tomorrow?"
Khushi:"I have to...i know"


Arnav was driving car...in the mean time rain has come,he stopped car...coming out from car,he sat in road...
"Khushi still hates me"-this thought is enough to take him in hell..
"i know i deserve it,khushi is still avoiding me,she wants to leave me,but she knows well that his laad governor can't control his anger..when i am in hyper,i don't bother my reaction..."
He is completely drenched...he looked at sky and shouted
:"why amma???why?why this happens to me only?why my loved ones always leave me alone?
First you,it takes long amma to reconfigure myself
now khushi...how can i tolerate this now...i want to stay with you amma,please take me with you"

He came shantivan,he was completely drenched...

It was morning now...
anjali was preparing breakfast,but there was no sign of chotey...she called HP,he also told that arnav bhaiya still slept...
She stepped inside arnav's room,he was sleeping...
She touched his forehead and shocked...It's high fever!!!


How's it...
Please keep commenting...😊


happy weekend😃...


Edited by arpita20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
am first
awesome 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt

luvd it

i have read whole updt today and its superb

aryan i like his character he is just like arnav .arnav cares for his di only just like him aryan only cares for his mother than why he feeling that aryan should also care for his feeling.he getting same what he has done with khushi he always choose his di and her happiness now aryan choose khushi and her happiness not him so why he is feeling now i think u should realize how was khushi feeling at that time when he chooses over her
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt

luvd it

i have read whole updt today and its superb

aryan i like his character he is just like arnav .arnav cares for his di only just like him aryan only cares for his mother than why he feeling that aryan should also care for his feeling.he getting same what he has done with khushi he always choose his di and her happiness now aryan choose khushi and her happiness not him so why he is feeling now i think u should realize how was khushi feeling at that time when he chooses over her

please pm me this updt

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