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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you :)


Originally posted by: StarStruckLove

Firstly Sorry again for the late comment .

Loved both the parts .
I'm so glad you got IPKKND in the middle too . It's so good now .
LOL NK is so hilarious .
When Manvi was going to open the door I was hoping it to be the bros and it was !!!
Virman's phone convo was sooo cute .
VIrika falling for each other and Virman making them come together .
SO nice .
Loved the function part .
Virat filming Manvi's dance - Awww .
Amazing work girls .
I don't know if I'll be able to comment on the upcoming parts but still you gotta PM for every part .
I'll reply as soon i get the study break .


no probz, dont day sorry 😆
thank you
hahaha yup, ikr! love NK
Dont worry about it, will still Pm you :)
okay gud luck with ur studies


nahi will try to post the update over the weekend :)

Originally posted by: nobo

Awsome update girl
Omg it was so HMHKish...
Brilliantly penned out...continue soon



Thank you
Nahi will do soon

Originally posted by: Samnafa19

lovely update.pls contine soon



thank you
nahi will do soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


Hey guys,

Before you start throwing chappals and rotten tomatoes at us for being late, I'm just quickly going to lay out our 'excuses' 😆

Firstly, both our schools started so we were settling in. And man, we got so much homework that we hardly had time to write. But luckily, Nahi was able to write the update.

Secondly, I'm posting Nahi's update on behalf of her because her grandad passed away last night, R.I.P therefore she wasn't able to post it.

I hope they were reasonable excuses, and to make it up, I'll try to write an extra long chapter for the next update. Also, Nahi will be replying to all the comments, I'm only posting the chapter for her as she is currently busy. Anywayz, here's chapter 12 :)




At Arnav Singh Raizada's house, Virat Vadhera was lost in Maanvi's thoughts.

*Flashback*
Slowly, he held her in his arms and walked through the hall of Maanvi's house. She was fast asleep, not even a sound was waking her up. Virat walked up the stairs and placed her onto her bed. He noticed that her hair had fallen on her face. Moving his hand towards her face, Virat moved the strands of her hair and tucked it behind her ears. Just as he was about to leave, Maanvi gripped his hands tightly. Virat smiled as he gently took her hands off his and walked back to his car.
*End Of Flashback*

Virat didn't even understand why he was thinking about her? Maybe he was in love...He shook his head. Meanwhile Viren was explaining something to his brother when he realised that Virat wasn't even listening.
"Dude? Are you even listening to me?" Viren asked, annoyed. His brother wasn't replying so Viren slapped Virat on the back.
"Sorry Bhai. What were you saying?" Virat apologised.
"Well...I kinda think I like someone." he started as Virat smiled and opened his eyes wide. "But I'm not sure. I bet she doesn't even like me."
"Bhai...It's Jeevika right?" Virat asked, grinning. Viren nodded his head and punched the air.
"She defo likes you. Maanvi thinks that too. That's why we followed you to the cinemas."
"Should I tell her?" Viren questioned.
"Of course!" Virat said as the brothers hugged.

Over at the door, NK was eavesdropping.
"I must go and tell Jeevika." he said as he ran.


Meanwhile Khushi had called Jeevika and Maanvi to her room.
"Girlies, you've all rehearsed for your steps for tomorrow right?" Khushi questioned.
"Yep!" chorused Jeevika and Maanvi.
"And here are your partners..." Khushi began as two boys entered the room.
"VIREN & VIRAT!?!?!" the sisters shouted, shocked.

The next morning, Jeevika was getting angry at Maanvi. It was 12 o'clock and Maanvi was sleeping like a baby.
"Mannu ut ja. Bara baj gaye hai. Don't you want to rehearse?" Jeevika said.
"I rehearsed the whole night Di. I know all the steps okay?" Maanvi replied as Jeevika ignored her and went to the hallway.


Later in the evening, the girls were getting ready for the sangeet. It was going to be held at the Raizada Mansion. The Raizada family greeted them as they walked into the beautiful hallway. It was decorated with pink and silver ribbons that covered the whole ceiling. Maanvi was awestruck. The boys were sitting on the stage, shooting funny videos. As soon as the Vadhera brothers saw the Chaudhry sisters, they were mesmerised by their beauty. Jeevika and Maanvi were wearing hot pink anarkali, embroidered with silver sequins. Viren walked up to Jeevika and whispered into her ear "You look beautiful." Jeevika blushed as Virat and Maanvi winked. Then he walked up to Maanvi and said, you look very...UGLY!" Maanvi punched him on the shoulder and walked off, furious.


Meanwhile, a man entered the mansion. He was wearing a black sherwani with an evil smile on his face. "Jeevika" he said as he walked towards the terrace. The stranger saw Jeevika and left a note beside her. Jeevika picked it up and read 'Jeevika, meet me at the terrace." She was confused. Jeevika made her way to the terrace. Suddenly, the note dropped onto the floor. She ignored it and hurried to the terrace to see who was waiting for her.

On the other hand, Viren was double confused. He had no idea on how to confess to Jeevika. "I love..no no!" he started. "Main tumse bohot pyaar... No. Jeevika, I really really like you and...Viren, what the hell are you doing man! Why can't you say a simple I love you?" he was getting frustrated.
"Sir, I was just like you 2 years ago. I waited and waited to tell my love and guess what I ended up being? A waiter!" the waiter said as he laughed. He noticed that Viren was giving him a 'what the hell' look and so he immeditaely stopped. Viren noticed Jeevika coming and quickly pushed the waiter to the side. The waiter bumped into an old lady as the drinks splashed over her face. Jeevika quickly rushed to her and helped her.
"Thank you so much beti." she said as Jeevika smiled. "And you stupid waiter..."
"Sorry ma'am it was sir's fault..." he said as Viren quickly covered his mouth.
"Hari Prakash, you shouldn't be doing this. Say sorry!" Viren muttered as HP aplogised and walked off.

"Viren, what was that all about?" Jeevika asked, confused.
"Oh nothing. How comes you're here?" he said as he avoided to give her an answer.
"Someone sent me a note saying to meet on the terrace. Was it you by any chance?"
"Me?" he said. "This is a good chance." he thought as Jeevika looked at him awkwardly. "Yes, yes it was me!" Viren lied. "I just wanted to tell you something."
"What?" she said. Viren took a step closer to her but she took another one back.
"I wanted to tell you this since a long time." He took another step closer. Jeevika took another step back and realised that she couldn't move anymore. She was so close to him that she could feel his heartbeats.
"All I want to say is that I lov..." Viren was just about to confess when NK called for Jeevika. She pushed him away and ran to NK, her heartbeats beating really fast.
"Damn it. This NK!!!" Viren said, annoyed as he walked down the stairs.



It was time for the sangeet to start. Everyone was excited. Arnav and Khushi wished all the best to the others as they went onto the stage to host the ceremony.
"Welcome to our sangeet rasam!" Khushi began. But she was interuppted by NK who said, "Rasam? You mean Rasmalai?" Everyone chuckled as Maanvi corrected him.
"Today's first performance is by our very own Virat and Maanvi who will be dancing to Thug Le!" Khushi announced as they went on stage. They shook hands and started the dance! At the end, Virat pulled Maanvi closer to him. She tried to free from his grip but Virat held on more tightly. He finally let go as Maanvi ran away.

After Virmaan's dance had finished, Arnav introduced Virika onto the stage!
"They will be dancing to...Ishq Wala Love!"
The song started as Viren and Jeevika were lost in each other's eyes. Everyone was saying 'Awwwh'

Next was the boys dancing to 'Make Some Noise For the Desi Boyz!' Everyone was in fits of laughter when Arnav came onto the stage. The last performance was Desi Girl. Everyone danced with each there, having unlimited fun and happiness!


Later in the evening, Maanvi had declared that everyone would be playing Truth or Dare. They sat in a circle as Maanvi spinned the bottle. It landed on Viren.

*To be continued in the next chapter*
Edited by -Niha- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you soo much for updating for meee! Love yaah! :D xxx
Edited by -Nahi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww lvoely update..looks like virat is started to fall for manvi..n truth n dare game cant wait!!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: viratmanvi

aww lvoely update..looks like virat is started to fall for manvi..n truth n dare game cant wait!!



thank youuu! hehe yep xx


thank youu x
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nahi-

Thank you soo much for updating for meee! Love yaah! :D xxx


no probz nahi 🤗 waise be, u already no my comment 😉 but i'll say it again. amazing update cuzzy 🤗 loved it. hahaha and another game, yaay. i need to start writing too, but got loads of homework piled up 😆 let's see how long it takes me to update
aur ishq wala love, we must really like that song. my ss and now a virika dance 😆
Edited by -Niha- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

no probz nahi 🤗 waise be, u already no my comment 😉 but i'll say it again. amazing update cuzzy 🤗 loved it. hahaha and another game, yaay. i need to start writing too, but got loads of homework piled up 😆 let's see how long it takes me to update
aur ishq wala love, we must really like that song. my ss and now a virika dance 😆


awwwh thank youuu sooo muchh! lool sameee! yes! i freakin love that song along with Disco, Vele n Radha! U shud hear them!


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Posted: 12 years ago

thank youu. glad u liked it xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!!
Loved it, continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Nice update!!
Loved it, continue soon!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!


Thank youuu. Niha will do n np!

xxx

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