Originally posted by: --Rumeli--
congratulations!!its truely deserving for this SS to be in this forum!!so as a treat for us..can we not get an update!!
thanks update on the way in few minutes will be there
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Originally posted by: --Rumeli--
congratulations!!its truely deserving for this SS to be in this forum!!so as a treat for us..can we not get an update!!
Originally posted by: shravani97
Sorry for the late comment bro...
About the update...
Awesome as usual...
Awww...Sharon and swayam r so cute...
Love dat tea stall conversation(up language)...
This update was fabulous...
Loved it bro...
Update soon...Im waiting...
Sorry for commenting this late, was busy with something
Okay coming to both updatesThe second one had ReYam in it which Iove the most after SwaRon. And Sharon really is concerned about their relationship. Now that is like a good girl😳 And Swayam's effort too are commendable.The third one was uber cute and funny update and the song too. Pretty suits the situation. And I remember once when we were playing SwaRon conversation game in AT you had included this song.thanks for PM and about commenting on next part. I really dont know when i will be able to read your update. I might comment on it pretty late but do PM me😃
Hey guys thank you very much for all the nice and encouraging comments for the updates. It has certainly helped me to write more. I have no experience of writing a story. This is the first ever story actually I am writing or communicating by any form. So it was a morale booster to see all the reader demanding updates and liking the updates. Without further ado here goes the update. This update is dedicated mainly to Akshara (Aka dmg_mjht_d3_rox) and Ishita (Aka Sugercubes) as both of them are having birthdays this weekend and wish you both a very happy birthday my little sisters.
Part - 4
Swayam started the car and they hit the road. Now nobody was speaking anything and journey was getting boring for both of them. Swayam was thinking what he can do now to take control of the situation and give another shock to Sharon.
Meanwhile Sharon was also getting bored and was searching if there is anything interesting around in the car. Just then she shows a camera bag lying in the backseat along with gifts swayam had brought up for her. She instantly thought that is he a photographer? Than she replied no he has never told about his interest in photography. This would be of someone else.
Swayam show this movement and thought le beta vo khud hi tuje opportunity de rahi hai naya shock dene ke liye. To ab kyu wait karna chalo Sharon here goes one more surprise for you.
Swayam: hmm Sharon kya dekh rahi ho? You want anything.
Sharon: no just looking around.
Swayam: you must be wondering ke ye camera kis ka hai right?
Sharon: umm right kis ka hai ye camera?
Swayam: its mine, mera hai ye camera, I have got it as my 18th birthday gift from my dad. And you know this happens to be the best professional SLR camera around now days.
Sharon: wow I didn't knew tum camera's ke bare me itna kuch jante ho...
Swayam: but tumhe bhi camera's ka soukh hai kya?
Sharon: ya a little bit. Dad KO hobby hai photography ki so whenever I am with him he gives me some insides on camera.
Swayam: not bad cool, than you would like to explore this one also. It's all yours you can check it out. And mere last kuch shots ke pictures bhi hai usme if you want you can check them also.
Sharon: oh thanks I would like to see it...
After that Sharon takes the bag and sees that camera ke sath do optical lenses the one was some 150x and other was of 50 xs. She was very impressed that isko ye bhi pata hai ke shots ke according lenses use hote hai. And then she starts checking out camera functions and she was amazed to see ke uss camera me split clicking and multi corner clicking ke alava panorama pictures lene ke liye jo speedy movement instincts chaiye vo bhi hai usme. And after that she starts looking at pictures click by swayam in the pictures gallery. She was shocked to see the quality of pictures and they were like a professional have cached it with sheer perfection.
Ab Sharon sochne lagi ke ye hai kya isse photography bhi ati hai? Isne pehle kyu nahi bataya iske bare mein muje.
Sharon: tumne pehle kabhi nahi bataya ke tumhe photography itni achi karte ho.
Swayam: I told you just before a while ke main bahot sari cheese bade ache se kar leta hun...
Sharon was just like dumbstruck hearing this answer from him.
She just thought ke isko aur kya kya ata hai? Aur isne pehle kyu nahi bataya. Confuse karke rakha hai pura isne to pehle achanak se Bhojpuri bolne laga and ab camera nikal aaya. Iske dimag mein chal kya raha hai Sharon beware of him.
Sharon: vo photography kaise sikhi tumne swayam?
Swayam: vo Sharon actually maine photography and dancing me diploma kiya hua hai college me ane se pehle hi.
Sharon: what diploma? But kaise I mean kaha se aur kaise?
Swayam: relax batata hun maine London school of Arts se diploma kiya hai apni schooling ke sath sath.
Sharon: what London school of Arts? Par tum to jodhpur se hona?
Swayam: han main basically jodhpur se hun but my mom dad are in London to mai pala bada waha pe hun till the age of 17.
Sharon: oh fir London chod ke India kyu aa gaye? London me you would have got many opportunities...
Swayam: yes I would have but muje India me rehke hi kuch kar na tha... you know my country and my people are always good to be with...
Sharon: but still you lost a good opportunity... (par dimag me to chal raha tha thank god you came to India otherwise how would I met you)
Swayam: vo kya hai na grand paa and grand maa bhi old ho rahe hain. Yaha pe unki khyal rakhne vala koi nahi tha and London mein muje rehna nahi tha and more over muje dancing interns' lene the compulsory. Maine pehle hi decide kiya hua tha ke main interns dancing ke India ke kisi choreographer ke pass karunga. Tabhi muje ek acha opportunity mila thanks to people I was associated with in London university.
Shaorn was thinking OMG kitna cute hai ye apne grandparents ke bare bhi itna sochta hai. Aur har baat me apne dil ki sunta hai. Fir chahe kuch bhi ho jo isne socha vo hi kiya. So cute... (last me so cute thoda loudly bol diya jo swayam ne sun liya)
Swayam wow again hit the bull's eye... ispe asar hua dekh kitna blush kar rahi hai beta. Oh god ye itni khubsoorat kyu hai? Har bar isko dekhta hun to lagta hai ki kash duniya yahi ruk jaye aur main sirf isse dekhta rahu. Please god iske face se ye smile kabhi gayab mat hone dena...
Sharon: umm to fir kiske pass interns kiya tumne finally? As far as I know college me join hone ke bad to tumne koi intern's nahi kiye right.
Swayam: no Sharon vo actually maine apne first year mein prabhudeva sir ke group ko join kiya tha. But tab mai college mein naya tha and muje koi janta nahi tha so nobody is aware of that. Maine prabhudeva sir ko kafi sare events me assist kiya hai and unke group ke liye parikrama band ke 3 shows ki choreography bhi maine ki hai...
Sharon was like OMG isne prabhudeva ko assist kiya hai... no wonder tabhi pehli bar jab maine isse dance karne ko kaha tab usne itna amazing dance kiya tha. Kya steps the uske and flexibility bhi awesome thi... light on the feet tha...oh gosh ye har chiz me itna perfect kyu hai... aur isse Mr. Low profile ke name bilkul suit karta hai kitni sari chize achieve ki hui hai fir bhi kisi ko nahi bataya... so sweet... (She was smiling like hell and blushing so hard it was so evident)
Swayam finally spoke up breaking her chain of thoughts...
Swayam: vo Sharon kya ye bat tum hum dono ke bich rakh sakti ho kya? I don't want anybody to know about this. Main nahi chahta muje koi kisi se relate karke praise kare. I want ke log muje mere name se jane and moreover I am very happy to be called Sharon's assistant...
Hearing this Sharon started to blush again...
Swayam thought beta yehi ek mauka hai ek aisi line bolde jo iske liye handle karna impossible ho jaye...
Swayam: Sharon umm I have written some lines, I had thought this lines when I first show you " EK AJAB SA SURROR CHAYA HOGA BANANE WALE KE DIMAG PAR, EK AJAB SA SURROR CHAYA HOGA BANANE WALE USS KHUDA KE DIMAG PAR KE ISS JAHAN KI SARI KI SARI KHUBSOORTI KO SAMET KE INN NILI ANKNON ME SAMA DIYA"
Sharon who was just trying to recover from the effect of previous lines was just frozen by these lines. She actually had no idea where from where did he came up with those lines. Aisa kabhi kisine use pehle kabhi nahi kaha tha. She was just clueless about what to respond him.
Swayam here was just lost in her beauty after saying this line. Oh god iske face me aisa kya magic hai ki meri duniya ruk jati hai ise dekhta hi...
Just than Sharon spoke
Sharon: okk
Swayam thinking what? Isne sun liya kya maine abhi abhi jo bola vo... no aisa nahin ho sakta.
Swayam: kya ok Sharon?
Sharon: (smiling) vo tumhari London wali and prabhudeva sir wali baat hum dono ke bich me secret rahega.
Swayam thought thank god bach gaya. Thodi der ke liye to laga agar isne sunn liya to abhi mera bhartha bana degi.
Sharon: tum itni achi lines kaise likhi? I mean tum poet bhi ho?
Swayam: nahi vo to sirf kabhi kabar jab main mood me hota hun to apne aap aisi lines dimag mein aa jati hai.
Sharon was thinking isko sab kuch kaise ata hai yar... aur kya chize hai jo isse aati hai? Pura confuse karke rakha hai iss ladke ne to... Arghh I cannot believe this ke koi ladka muje Sharon rai Prakash ko itna confuse kar raha hai...
Again she thought Sharon please stop thinking about him now... it is just making you blush hard and he will know everything so easily that you like him.
Just than swayam spoke again...
Swayam: hey Sharon we stop somewhere aur pani and kuch le lete hai na.
Sharon: ya right we should stop a good hotel somewhere.
Swayam: started laughing uncontrollably
Sharon: kyu isme maine hasne wali kaunsi baat ki?
Swayam: madam ye highway hai aur hum aisi jagah hai ke humien dhabe ke alava aur kuch bhi nahi milega...
Sharon: what dhaba? No ways Sharon rai Prakash dhabe ka pani piegi?
Swayam: soch lo nahi piogi to tum faint ho jaogi heat se... and started walking away...
Sharon followed him and said ok...
And they bought some mineral water bottles and were about to leave. And someone called Sharon by name so Sharon turned out to see who it was. And she found out that it was her old friend Jiana.
Sharon: OMG Jiana Johar kitne dino bad hum mil rahe hai, aur tum yaha ye sade hue dhabe pe kaise?
Jiana: are vo kya hai meri car bigad gayi hai and driver ko koi mechanic nahi mil raha and muje pune ek event me pahochna any how warna dad will kill me he is waiting there for me.
Sharon: oh ok thats not an issue hum log bhi pune hi ja rahe hai we will drop you.
And they proceeded towards car...
Jiana: thank you so much aaj tum nahi milti to mera kya hota god knows...
Sharon: are its ok no problems dost hi toh dost ko kam ate hai
Jiana: oh Sharon my god tera driver kitna handsome hai... kaha se layi re tu itna handsome aur cute driver...
Sharon: laughingly said no he is not driver he is swayam... we both study in the same college and we are going to an event in pune to represent our college.
Swayam: oh hi Jiana madam, ye driver aapki seva me hazir hai... kya karu aapke khidmat me? Saying this swayam bent down on his knees and kissed her hand a gesture
Seeing this Sharon's eyes were wide open and thought isko ye sab karne ke liye meri dost hi mili thi kya and got furious...
Swayam saw this and was smiling that ab dekho Sharon log kehte hai na jab ladki bhav na de uski friend ko compliment karna suru karo. Automatically attention milna start ho jata hai.
Jiana: OMG you are so cute swayam. I would like to be in your arms for some time.
Hearing this Sharon's mouth was wide open as to what the hell was Jiana saying.
Swayam: what? Are serious you want to hug me?
Jiana: laughing uncontrollably no I was just trying flirt the way you did with me.
Swayam: oh gosh ok...
Sharon: (Angrily) chale ab warna late ho jayenge and I don't like to be late anywhere
Swayam: jiana lets go ye siren ab gussa ho gai to hum dono bin mout mar jayenge
Jiana: what? Siren? Sharon? Thats so cute yar isko ye name suit karta hai.
Swayam: ssshhh dhirese usko pata chal gaya to meri gardan meri body se alag ho jayegi... and by d way you really are very sweet Jiana.
(Now you all are curious that who is jiana? And why is she here? This will unfold with the story so wait and watch)
Jiana: hey Sharon yar itne saal ke bad mil rahe hai hum par tum zara bhi nahi badli yar...
Sharon: yup mai kyun badlu I am just perfect the way I am.
Jiana: yes you are... by d way iss cutie ke bare mein kuch bata na muje I wanna know ye swayam kaun hai?
Swayam: Miss Jiana main hun Swayam Shekhawat... ACS of Sharon... I mean ACS of St. Louis college and assistant to Sharon.
Jiana: oh thats so cute Sharon ka associate hai to handsome to hona hi tha tuje.
Sharon: what do you mean by that Jiana?
Jiana: chill babe's yar maine kaha vo bahot handsome hai...
Swayam was smiling uncontrollably after that... Sharon saw this and got furious again and thought isse to maza hi aayega na ek hot chick isse itna compliment jo kar rahi hai...
Swayam: thank you Jiana for complimenting me, waise tum bhi hot ho. Actually kafi zayada hot ho.
Jiana: awh thats so sweet par jhuth mat bolo main Sharon se zyada hot nahi ho sakti...
Swayam: no I sware yar tum kafi zyada hot ho... itni zyada hot ho ke tumhare ane se car ka temperature itna bad gaya hai ki muje ac ka temperature minimum pe set karna pad raha hai.
Sharon (in mind): what the hell...isko ye jiana mujse bhi zyada hot lag rahi hai... muje ek bar compliment kiya vo bhi adha... aur isko kiye hi ja raha hai... kitna buttering karega use ye ab to vo puri butter wali ho gayi
Jiana on the other hand had gone full read hearing this. And was about to say something when swayam came up with this for jiana which was completely shocking...
Swayam: Jiana something for you..." uss khuda par kuch ajab sa nasha chaya hoga jab usne tuje banaya...aur tujko bana kar soch ke kya du tohfe mein isse...socha ke kya du tohfe mein isse tab jakar kahin usne humien banaya"
Jiana was just dumbstruck with these lines. She had no idea ke koi itni ache tarike se complement kar sakta hai.
And here our diva was furious agar uske hath me kuch hota toh vo swayam ko zor se marne deti... and Sharon started giving killer looks to swayam to that swayam just understood that ab kuch zyada ho gaya and ye ab kabhi bhi apna control kho sakti hai so swayam went silent after that..
Sharon saw Jiana blushing heavily and looking at swayam so cutely... this was not a good sign for Sharon. She thought himmat to dekho iss ladki ki maine isse lift di aur ye mere hi boyfriend ke sath flirting me lagi hui hai.
Sharon: Jiana earth calling Jiana...
Jiana: oh yes Sharon I was just bowled over by the lines he just spoke for me... he is so sweet mere liye aisa to kisine kabhi nahi kaha yar.
Sharon: ok usko chod tu ye bata aaj kal kar kya rahi hai tu?
Jiana: kaise chod du yar isse kitni wait karne bad aisa ladka mila hai yar... main abhi prabhudeva group me as a lead dancer training le rahi hun...
Sharon: what? Tu unko kaise mili?
Jiana: are tu bhul gayi mere uncle ek bahot bade producer hain toh uniki help se I joined prabhudeva group yar. And you know it's so amazing group unka routine set karne ki ek alag hi procedure hai.
Sharon: wow thats so nice... you must be learning all the hip-hop moves very well by now.
Jiana: are nahi yar main toh kuch bhi nahi hun uske samne...
Sharon: kiske samne?
Jiana: swayam ya swayam Shekhawat... prabhudeva sir ka mere se pehle wo hi intern tha... and you know what waha ke log bolte hai ki vo ek mind blowing dancer tha and kafi zyada handsome tha. And ab kisi college mein apna graduation pursue kar raha hai. I so wanna meet him par pata nahi kahan hai vo kisi ko pata nahin.
Swayam was just wondering ab vo kya kare kyunki vo to usike bare mein baat kar rahi thi...
Sharon too was very shocked about this...
(Ab kya hoga aage stay tuned with this ss and find out yourself. Iss bar main pms sirf mere regular readers ko hi karne wala hun... and do leave your precious comments and hit the like button. Iss bar main thoda selfish ho raha hu but jab tak muje minimum 35 likes nahin milenge tab tak mai koi update nahin dunga)
Thank you very much for your time and patience to read this update.
Regards
Pratik
Thank you very much guys for all the love and support in the earlier updates. your constant support motivates me write more stuff and i hope this update will also be liked by you.. i tried to keep this update light moded... but i am really sorry if anybody finds it long and super boring. Thanks for support. Tanuka ye chotu sa update for you as i had promised you ek bahot hi chota wala update aaj rat tak tuje dunga main..
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