Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#3,#4 link added - Page 25

oh... thats great... convo directly nahi chalega to bi teek hai... MAANEET sath cahiye bas!!!!

Excellent depiction of pain both by maan & geet.Geet in d garden & maan in d gym were superb.

awesome prt
Loved it...
Bt plz cont soon

simply amazing update
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loved t song...well written
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part 34
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part-35

This update is mainly for tushti-kiran…… for clearing her doubts…. I know dear you are right at your place and I loved your comment… I never mind anything…. Pls always be free, feel free…. Tell me whatever in your mind…..

@ritzy di- di, I am not poetess…. I didn't wrote those poems,,,, those are in my collections of poems….. I just copied from there….. but feeling great that you liked them…. Love ya

last but not the least... thank you so much for the likes and comments... love ya

He said nothing to her only nodded, agreeing with her and moved out with her….. she took the driver seat where he took the passenger sear beside her….. he was directing her while she was driving….. she was not obvious much about the roads of Delhi , , , , , they reached the nearest hospital from mansion . .

They visit the doc and maan was injected, and doc prescribe some medicines to him…… they came back to mansion…. It was past 2 am at night…. Everyone was sleeping except these two….. who are in pain, trying to remove their pain and guilt but not able to get rid off……

she was walking ahead while maan was walking behind like a puppet of her, like she had hypnotized him, like a statue who doesn't about his surrounding only following the orders but little anyone know that what pain he was carrying in his heart, feeling miserable at that very moment……..

As soon as, she was about to take a turn towards her room, she felt a tug on her hand….

She knew who was he, but still wanted to assure herself…… only she knew how she felt when he touched her, the roller coaster inside her started to take a ride inside her tummy, she turned and found maan on his knees looking down not able to meet her questioning eyes with his guilty eyes……

how can he meet his eyes with her? He has guilt in his eyes while she has love & care in her eyes….. he has selfishness in his eyes while she has selfless love in her eyes……

She took a time to register her surroundings, why he was kneeling down, and why he is looking at the floor? Why he is not saying anything? She was about to ask him why he is sitting like that and why he is not saying anything but she head his painful voice which choked her heart….

"I am sorry geet, please mujhe maaf kar do"

he was still looking down, he doesn't wanted to see her facial expressions because he knew she will be hurt with his words….. after all he knew her this much….. he continued with his guilt full voice…

"I know, I had hurt you a lot, even I am not worth for standing in front you but still wanted to say something, " he paused for a moment, he knew she is hearing his words, he knew she is in pain, he knew he is giving her pain again but apologize is also important……

"I know geet, how much you love me, I am not saying that pyaar karna galat hai but how can you love like a person me who raped his wife at their wedding night, who hurt his wife at their wedding night, who told his wife at their wedding night that he loves someone else",

he didn't dared to look at her, he knew she is crying and that too because of him, but he has to continue his side…… he continued again……

"pls geet forgive this fool, who was blind thing love of a mere attraction, pls geet forgive me, I knew that meri galti maafi ke layak nahi hai… maine jo kiya shayad wo kisi ne nahi kiya hoga….. apni hi wife ka rape…. Chi…. Ab mujhe kehte huye sahrm aa rahi hai par maine ye galat kaam kiya hai…. Pls give me punishment…. Kuch bhi…. Jo tum kahogi wohi mai karunga…. But pls give me a chance….. I know, asking another chance from is not right but still I wanted to prove myself wrong, wanted to prove your love is right…. I wanted to feel that what love is?? I know you are thinking that how a big idiot I am, always claiming that I love sameera but in reality, that was not love….."

it was very hard for him to say all this to her…. He knew how much pain he was bearing at that time…. It was not easy for him…… he was still looking down feeling her gaze at him… he knew she was staring at him, he heard her sweet melody voice which stunned him hearing the set of words she used…..

"ho gaya aapka ya abhi aur kuch baki hai??" she strictly asked to him

she asked in her irritating voice….. she knew how much she carved for his voice, for his sight, only a glimpse of his made her day, she felt complete hearing his voice whenever she heard…… how much she missed him, the morning stuff, night stuff….

She used to made breakfast, dinner for him…. every little need of his she fulfilled and here he was begging sorry from her , telling her that he has raped his own wife at the wedding night….. how can he?

She has already told him about all this in her letter but looks like he become stubborn not hear anyone…… she has already cleared him that he was not at fault but still he was blaming himself, she couldn't tolerate this anymore that's why she chose these words….

He looked at once at her face hearing her words….. he was shocked & stunned but thought to remain calm as she has every right to say him anything, at last he was at fault…. And he himself told her about the punishment and he is ready for that…..

Seeing his expressions and his guilt full eyes, her voice soften, and she at one kneeled down in front of him…… she took his hand in her looking in his eyes like she is pleading to him……tears in her eyes...

"how can you think like this maan? Aapne aisa soch bhi kaise liya…." She asked to him n her sweet tone with tears filled eyes but those eyes searching answers in his eyes…

"kaisa geet?" he asked not able to understand what she is asking to him…..

"yahi ki aapne apni wife ka rape kiya…" she almost shouted at him but that not a shout, it looks like she is telling someone, something in her meek voice…..

"But the truth is I did…. " he confront her….

"you didn't…. you can't, you can never do this with anyone…." Geet retorted back in her meek voice….

"I know geet, I have hurted you a lot b…" his words left in mid when she retorted back….

"yes maan, you have hurted me a lot…. Hurting me saying that you raped me…. How can you rape me when you are not in ur sense….. when you are thinking me as sameera, rape to tab hota na jab aap mere sath zabardasti karte, but you didn't do anything like that with me…. I willingly gave myself to you, if I wanted then I can stop you but no…………"

her voice was choked saying all this… tears were trailing on her cheeks making them wet…… she paused for a moment taking a deep breath and out….. where he was looking deep inside in her eyes, so much love she held for him, and he was being an idiot all the while not able to recognize her love for him….. yes he was an idiot, a big fool… he cursed himself…..

"don't curse yourself…. " she said observing his face where he startled at her sudden voice….

"huh..!!" he gave her questioning look, he thought that she can read mind too…. She didn't said anything….. after not hearing anything from her side…..

"but still geet, how an I loose my sense like this? I know I was drunk but how can I snatch your precious thing from you? These are not my principles…. The lessons dadi gave me, this act is totally against them…… how can I paid for your pain? The pain I gave you that night, the pain you are bearing right now, the pain you felt when you found that I love someone else, the pain you felt when I denied to give the right of my wife….. pls geet forgive me,,, I really wanted to start a new life with you, a person who love me, a person who didn't found any fault in me…. Will you forgive me???" tears fell down from his eyes...

Forgive me for what cannot be forgiven.

Open up the door I once slammed closed.

Restore the love that I once squandered, driven

Grimly by some grinch I've since deposed.

I cannot plead for what I cannot fathom,

Valuing least the value I most crave.

Each heart must sometimes haunt the steep-walled chasm,

Made mad by wrath and selfish songs that rave

Empty on the edges of the grave

He looked at her with so much hope,,,, his ears are dying to hear her yes, only a yes but he knew how hard for her to say yes…..

precap

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Now I gave you 3 updates in a week…. Where I was giving you 1 update but this time 3….. so now I want lots of comments and likes….. this time update didn't complete 150 likes n 10 pages comments but I have updated……….. and feel free to criticize & appreciation... and pls ignore grammer n spelling mistakes... typed in hurry...

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Lovely update..
His words were so touching..
she can't c him in ds guilt..and i think she vl b ready to do anything to remove ds guilt from him..