Maaneet FF ~2~ The Rain (Thread3 added) 28/09 - Page 68

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Hi dearies,

I wanted to know your opinion before I proceed further. This story has long way to go. If I continue like this, it will take another year to finish this FF. So now I have two options.

1. Take a leap and show the past in flashback.

2. Cut short the remaining story and go in the current track.

I want to know your opinion before I go with any of these. Please respond..

Love,

Dia

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Hi dearies,

I wanted to know your opinion before I proceed further. This story has long way to go. If I continue like this, it will take another year to finish this FF. So now I have two options.

1. Take a leap and show the past in flashback.

2. Cut short the remaining story and go in the current track.

I want to know your opinion before I go with any of these. Please respond..

Love,

Dia

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Hi dearies,

I wanted to know your opinion before I proceed further. This story has long way to go. If I continue like this, it will take another year to finish this FF. So now I have two options.

1. Take a leap and show the past in flashback.

2. Cut short the remaining story and go in the current track.

I want to know your opinion before I go with any of these. Please respond..

Love,

Dia

Originally posted by: maansee

do update ... jaise bhi karo par ka do

Part 25B

Geet started muttering profanities at Maan for changing her to an extent that she started even daydreaming. Maan was all the while muffling his laughter hearing her. Whenever she looked, he will put a straight face and she will look away pouting. She relaxed finally on the seat and soon drifted off to sleep. Maan looked at her innocent face; he couldn't help falling for her more and more. She was everything he never expected woman to be. How can someone be so innocent? He leaned and placed a small peck on her forehead. A smile came to her face instantly; she murmured "Maan" and snuggled closer to him. He lent his arm and she kept her head on his shoulder. He was elated seeing her recognizing his touch even in sleep. The airhostess came back and noticed him resting on the seat closing his eyes and Geet snuggled closer to him. She left disheartened to have lost a chance to flirt with Maan Singh Khurana.

When the flight was about to reach Manali, Maan slowly tapped her shoulder. Geet told in half sleep, "Pinky sone dena." Maan smiled and tapped her shoulder again. Geet showed off his hand and slept snuggling closer to him again. He knew that there is no use calling her and looked around before moving to take her lips in his. She opened her eyes immediately and noticed his eyes staring intently at her while his lips did wonders on hers. She closed her eyes immediately thinking that she is again dreaming but this time Maan failed to draw back sooner as he got carried away by her taste. She again opened her eyes and found him kissing her passionately. She slowly raised her hand and touched his jaw. This broke his trance and he pulled back. He looked intently at Geet who looked away blushing. She touched her lips and slowly everything started to sink in.

She turned and started hitting him with her tiny fists, "Aap mujhe ullu bana rahe the. Yaha mein soch rahi thi ki mein koyi sapna dekhi thi jab aapne mujhe teen baar.. Chi Chi babaji. Inhe sharam naam ki koyi cheez nahi. Koi dekhliya tho kya sochenge. Aur woh choti kapde wale bhi sochenge ki mein bilkul uski tarah hoon, desperate.." Maan understood that she realized it but decided to play along. He told holding her both hands, "Geet, tum yeh kya kar rahi ho? Meine tumhe bahut baar utane ki koshish ki par tum uth nahi rahi thi. Par tum yeh kya bol rahi ho? Meine tumhe sirf ek hi baar kiss kiya. Agar tum chahthi ho tho mein do baar aur kar saktha hoon" and moved forward to kiss her. However, she immediately put her palm on his mouth. She was confused now. May be it was her dream, but it felt so realistic, like now. Maan saw her confused expression and wanted to eat her alive just then. He controlled his mischief and told, "Geet, we have reached Manali." That broke her thoughts and she looked around. She saw that the flight was in runway and understood that she didn't even feel the fear until now.

Link to next part: Part 26

Originally posted by: --Dia--

Thanks for the prompt response..😊..

I will go with option 1. So I'm changing the precap..

Will update next part tomorrow..😊

Originally posted by: anuandavi

R u going to separate Maan and Geet?