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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi hum agaye sabka dimaag khane.Mele(mere) likhvat palne(parne)the(seh) pehley take a deep bleath(breath) n phir,phir kya read read:p ~~CHAPPY-1~~
Arjun shinghania walked into his collage.This was a place he owned,a place he knew forward and backward and a place he loved.Yet today,he was puzzled at the different atmosphere the environment held.Usually it was welcoming him with open arms when he came,but now he felt like the air was pushing him out.Almost as if the yard had something it wanted to protect.Arjun laughed away all the ridiculous thought and start strolling to his favourite area,a little meadow-like circle surrounded by small tress.Reaching it,he was struck by a terrifying sight.
A girl lay on her side in the middle of his meadow,midnight-black hair flung out in all directions.Her left arm was gripping the hilt of something that looked like a knife.Her right arm held the green grasses.
But that was not the real shock.Blood was everywhere,soaking the grass colouring the ground.Blood dripped to the soil from the knife and spread from her broken body onto her white anarkali and soaked black hair.
Arjun stood there shocked.He left numb.Wet tears kept falling from his cheeks.All he can do was shout'Arohi'.
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Arohi slowly open her eyes.All she ould hear was a desperate yet familliar voice.She very well that it was not her voice but then who was the person that made that ferrifying voice.
She snapped upright,eyes wide and unseeing,and blinked away the memory untill she could take in her surroundings.She was laying on something.They were called grass,weren't they?Grass were supposed to be green..so why were they stained with patches of red?She reached out a shaking hand to touch a particularly red patch near her,and flinched away when she realized the sticky wetness was blood.Mostly was her blood no doubt.
She was busy in her thoughts when the same familliar voice interrupt her in a shaky tone"Arohi".
She looked up into the fae of the man and then also left shoked"Arjun".All she can say before closed her eyes again.
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Ok guys thats for today.Hope u guys like it,finger crossed.I will only cont it if u guys want me to(wo kya haina hum yaha thori darpokk hai:p)N mera kissy abhi nahi baad mei start hoga.Keunki ek baar jab hum kissy wissy ki barey mei likhna shuru karte hai toh khatam honey ka naam hi nahi letey:pSo pliz pliz pliz
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COMMENT(pliz tell me that should i or shouldn't)
N NO JOOTA N CHAPPALS hehe
Swinipriya:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A suspenseful start!

Yeh bhi koi poochne wali baat hai! Ofcourse u must continue:):) Do add me to your PM list!
Edited by zoya_naziya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Drama queen,startng is awsum. Hame v kissy wissy se bahot mohabbat hai. U cn start it anytym.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome stary Swini...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do continue !! Yar don't worry we will read it !!
I luvd the start !! Apun ko b plch pm karneka !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaar idhar sareijjj story waste pagal bhare padeleee he
To dant fikar
Ek dam dhashuuuy e- start tha
Bole to apunnn ko Tera intro bahoticcc dhinchak laga
Aor ha biduuu apunnn ko pm me shamil karnekaaa varna van tas ki goli marke fut lene ka
Aor idharrr Sreeju namkaaa bara mafiyaaa bhai rehtaaa he usseee thoda bachke rehnekaaa spammer
Hahahaha ok it was nice start
N really wel come to the forum
U never find crazy ppl like here m sure
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulations on the new SS
great start swini
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
nice start :)
will wait 4 kissi wissi :(
muahh 2u ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A very interesting start.
Please do continue & pm when updating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really interesting! please do PM me! and continue soon (:

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