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Posted: 12 years ago
tanx 4 the pm dear..tanz a ton..but i already read part 4..found it out using my stalker skills..waiting impatiently 4 the nxt part..im loving this..i love 2 see this arnav suffer..he has broken khushi in all ways possible..he shouldnt b 4given soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first😲

Wonder how I always end up first😆

Un'res

Just when I think I can't feel any worse about this story I do... I felt terrible at the last bit... OMG she's so naive... look what Arnav has done to her...

she dreamt of him and he shattered all her dreams...

I love what Arnav is trying o do but can he really make khushi alright again?? never!! only if she loses her memory will she be able to live with him

Zehra why so short update!!!

You know this is a gift... you write short updates but you decipher every emotion in it...

continue soon hun


Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update dear :)

The dream... it actually scared me...
I understood what it implied :(

Arnav rereading her likes and doing it for her...He dressed her up like she likes...He wants to bring her back to her original self... I love what he's doing...
I think if not very big, Arnav's making some progress atleast...
She is still lost but she looked up in the mirror when he asked to...She let him comfort her when she woke up from the dream and all... I don't know what to make of it...But atleast she's reacting...A little !


I just proved to myself how bad a guesser I am ! Not that I actually tried to guess something, but that paper...
May be if you had mentioned newspaper I would've thought of it ! (*Consoles myself*)

"Humara raajkumar"😭
And Kushi's flashback about getting married to a Prince and wearing sarees...

OMG... I think I'm gonna cry...
Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tessd

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Ahh poor khushi .. her memories of her raajkumar and her talks with her family all shattered..
.. the last bit was I can't explain..:(
She's in a limbo.. I hope she is set free soon..

Brill update..
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm waiting for the next part, please please update it soon,
i'm addicted to this story, and now i'm feeling that i'm missing my daily dose.
so please please update.



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OMG!!! I asked and you did it
Loved it very very much
And love the way you write kushi's POV, it feel like you are a part of the story.
Continue soon.

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.


*EDIT*

finallyy finallyy finally made it to first page of after ur update *pumps fist in the air*

so he does have a heart to feel bad for destroying an 18 year old's life? i thought it was long dead when he oh-so-consciously destroyed her soul happy to see him regretting his acts😊

and abt the writing, its perfectly fine.😊

take care and update soOn😊
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awssmmm...
really liked the part...
go on dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update...arnav's efforts to bring old khushi back is lovely.

waiting for nxt part

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Posted: 12 years ago
liked khushiz pov
no need to change it
awesome update

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