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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dorindakate

I'm glad I found your story again...I had really been enjoying it...


I want to apologize for my rant in my earlier comments. It is after all your story and it is fiction; therefore it was beyond rude, insulting, and insensitive of me to make the comments that I did. An apology amended with self justification is just an egocentric display...My apology is heart-felt...I have been trying to locate the story (I couldn't remember it's name) since the morning after my rude post. I sincerely regret my remarks.

I have caught up with reading the chapters, and am still enjoying your writing.

I see how you are closing the loops, and I understand why you framed the plot as you did...

I look forward to reading about their three month journey to love (hopefully) or divorce...




that's okk dear..when we talk about arshi,we generally get emotional...
Story is yet not been finished,more spicy track is waiting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tokyo

I loved the update. But, what would happen once Khushi realizes that Arnav and the lawyer gave her wrong information.


wait and see how khushi will react😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
he will never let her go
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 16
Khushi called her amma and informed whats going on here...
She also gave all the detail information of her shop so that she could handle it properly as she had to stay here three months and shop must be opened...
Khushi went kitchen to bring milk for muskaan,she took milk and was about to turn back,she felt Arnav's presence.
Arnav:"Khushi i need to talk with you"
Khushi:"ohh,muskaan wants milk now and.."
Arnav called HP and taking glass of milk from khushi's hand,he placed it to HP's hand.😉
Arnav:"lawyer told that we have to spend some time together,so i think..."
Khushi ignored him completely and exited from kitchen.
On the other side Aryan and muskaan were in arnav's room.
Aryan:"muskaan,why are not you eating anything?if you dnt take food,then i will also dnt take food..."
Muskaan:"Golu,no golu,i am trying to eat food,but the taste..."
Aryan:"taste?what taste...?amma went kitchen to take milk of you,you must finish all,then.."
Muskann pulled golu's cheek and continues:"i am so happy,he is our papa..."
Aryan:"what papa?see muskaan,only for you,we are here,otherwise we all left this house yesterday..."
Muskaan:"no golu,papa told me its our house,he loves me a lot"
Aryan:"How can you forgive him muskaan? he hurts amma,did not you hear what torture he and all of this family member did to amma?and you forgive him so easily...can't you see amma's tears?"
Muskaan:"its not,papa is too good,he loves all,he is not like this,i love amma also"
Aryan:"no,you dnt love amma,if you love amma,then you will not talk to him and also dnt call him "papa",got it?"
Khushi entered room with glass of milk...
seeing muskaan's eye full of tears,she asked her "whats going here?why are you crying?"
Muskaan:"amma,am i hurting you?"
khushi:"why baby?why my little princess ask me that stupid questions?"
muskaan:"golu said..."
Just then arnav enterd room,his hand was full of chocolates,flowers..
seeing chocolates,muskaan screamed:"chocolates?papa you know i love chocolates..."
aryan's tough gaze stopped her,arnav noticed how Aryan reacted..
Arnav went near Aryan and took him in his arms.
Aryan:"Please leave me,how dare you to take me in your arms,you bad uncle😡..only.."
Arnav:"only your amma has the right na?"
he placed aryan in bed and continued:"i am your father,so you should call me "papa",like muskaan,and gently placed a kiss in muskaan's cheek.."
Muskaan was so happy that she ran towards her amma and hugged her tight.."amma,i am so happy,i have got my father"
aryan screamed:"muskaan,ENOUGH IS ENOUGH,you are weak right?take rest"
arnav was about to give chocolates to aryan also but he threw it and screamed loudly:"i dnt like chocolates,and all these fake love,dnt ever try to show this infront of me?you bad uncle"
Khushi stopped aryan,she gently calmed down him and said:"dnt say like that,he is your father,you should respect him,have i taught you these lesson?"
Aryan was surprised seeing his amma's reaction,in spite of scolding muskaan,she scolded him.he angrily replied:"okk bad papa,i will call him bad papa,okk?"and he left the room.
Arnav really felt bad at Aryan's reaction...
Khushi was about to leave that room,he stopped her saying:"khushi i am planning to admit muskaan and golu to XYZ school"
Khushi:"so what Mr.Raijada,how can i help you?"
Arnav:"you should not talk with me like this,i need your help"


How's this?Hope i am giving you,what you want to read
but no one give me any suggestion😭😭😭...
Its really bad,please give your suggestion for developing future story line in my SS.

Edited by arpita20 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.. Aryan is exact copy of Arnav.. loved his reaction.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u r just awesome!! cont like this!! sooo good!! make him first win those two children heart then everything will be fine!!'

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. Waiting to see how Arnav manofies Golu and Khushi's reaction when she comes to know that Arnav lied.
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Posted: 12 years ago
aryan is really a second arnav...
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Posted: 12 years ago
golu u go my rock star🥳..give ur bad papa a dose of his own medicine..awww mushkan is a doll..cutie pie❤️ and mighty arnav singh raizada is asking for HELP bechara😈

loved it🤗
Edited by -lovestory- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey its not bad...its awesome ...do continue..loved it

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