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Rupali_13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

its amazing yar...

i just loved it ...

plzzz plz plz continue it ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazing part yr

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Thanku everyone fr ur comments nd likes it has encouraged me a lot nd here i come wid first chapter, I'm sorry fr d delay my life has become a mess in last few days, long ours of classes plus studies nd my bestie's dad expired so dat's y i was inactive fr sometime, even missed many of updates nd pms which hav been accumulated, now i vil slowly catch up wid everything...so enough of my bak- bak here goes new update...

Hope you guyzz remember d prologue nw first chapter vil start frm where prologue ended so lets nw have a recap of it...

RECAP

she was lying on her stomach her back facing him nd her hairs covering her face so he cudnot have look on her face he bent down little bit infront of her nd turned her towards him...

his whole world stopped on seeing her face..😲 d face which he so wanted 2 see frm past 2 years... seeing her in dis conditions lying in his arms he became numb he is speechless as his throat hav been chocked nd no words is coming out, 😭tears rolled down his cheeks he just uttered wid a lot of difficulty..."K...K...KR.. KRIYA..."

CHAPTER-1

Yes the girl is none other dan his love, his life, his kriya...

He is standing der as if he had been freezed... 😲in a daze continuously staring at kriya who is lying in his arms like a life less body, tears ver flowing out of his eyes he is happy on finally seeing her but his heart teared apart on seeing his beautiful angelic battcutter in such a traumatic condition...💔

he was just gazing her, taking in her presence, feeling her in his arms making sure dat she is in real not his dream again, kriya had lost oodles of weight it was not dat she was quiet heavy person but at least she was healthy nd now she is as thin as a paper, her hairs earlier ver short till shoulder length but nw they hav grown nd ver unkempt as if she has not trimmed it fr years her nails ver cut till her skin but 2 years back she loved her grown manicured nails...

He remembered how she use 2 look earlier; his battcutter wid whom he fell in love & now on seeing her in this terrible situation his heart shattered into millions pieces, his soul drifted apart from body... he became totally numb for a minute,

but wid the loud thunder nd lightening he instantly came back 2 his senses...

picked her up nd settled her in his car & drove 2 his home...

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(After few minutes)

she is lying on d bed, doctor is checking her. Rey is standing wid 2 more persons who r constantly asking questions 2 doctor nd nurses attending her..

Person1: (sobbingly)😭 Rey, where did u found her?? aur yeh iss halat mein kaise hai? I cudn't belive dis I am seeing her after whole 2 years & dat 2 in dis terrifying state( she broke down into more tears)

Other person placed his hand on her shoulder from back, took her in hug while consoling her...

Person2: Shhh...(caressing her back) please sharon don't cry, you hav 2 be strong at least for her...

Sharon: ( moved her head up slightly & looking into his eyes she asked) par kaise swayam?? (fresh set of tears flowed out of her eyes) Main kaise khud ko sambhalun?? Kya tum khud ko sambhal paa rahe ho she is ur best frnd nd i knw ur consoling me but andar hi andar kitna ro rahe ho sab janti hun, nahi dekh sakte na usko iss halat mein?? (he nodded his head in direction of no.. nd he 2 broke down in her arms)😭

swayam: (crying) haan nahi dekh sakta par kya karun?? zara dekho rey ki taraf hw is he just looking towards her only; ek baar bhi usne aankhein nahi band kari hai... v hav 2 b strong fr him otherwise he is already living a life of dead person ab toh pata nahi...( he fell on his knees)

sharon: (embraced him) kuch nahi hoga na rey ko na kriya ko... woh dono theek honge ek dusare ke liye...

wid dis she got up wiped her tears nd moved in d direction where rey is just standing near her bed nd constantly looking at kriya...😳
she placed her hand on his shoulder but he doesn't get effected by it...

she shaked him a little bit den he responded 2 her...

Rey: Huh... (facing to sharon) wat happened sharon?? (he asked in a very low voice)

Sharon: Ummm... Rey woh shhee.. she wud b fine don't worry...(assuring him) nd r u okay?? (she asked him hesitantly)

Rey:(turned back his focus on kriya) Hmm... i'm f9 sharon don't get tensed about me...😔

again he became mute nd continuously fixed his gaze upon doctor nd kriya...

Doctor was doing her check up ven suddenly kriya while in her unconsciousness mumbled some words...

Kriya: plzzz plzz mat maro plzz... i won't do it again plzz... NOOO... MERA BABYYY !!!!!!!! ( with dis she came into consciousness nd sat up by dis time sharon rushed to her side,swayam nd rey beside her ...)

kriya hugged sharon started speaking... "Sharon mera baby... woh woh usne maar dala plzz save my child plzz... " and again she fainted... ( all d other 3 ver shocked plus confused on hearing wat she said) 😕😲

doctor sided dem and gave kriya a dose of sleeping injection...

she turned towards d trio... But before she can speak anything dey all showered d doc wid numerous questions, doc hav 2 literally yell upon dem nd asked dem 2 come outside wid her...

Doc: waise yeh hain koun aap log ka kya rishta hai inse??

sharon: she is my sister.... (doc said ok nd eyed to swayam nd rey)

Swayam: meri best frnd aur sister-in-law hai...

Rey (didn't let her ask anything just answered b4 anyone can ask sumthing) she is my childhood frnd nd my bhabhi's sis... ab aap plzz batayegi baat kya hai?? (he impatiently asked doctor)

Doc: Dekhiye inhe examine karne se aisa lagta hai ki yeh buaht hi buri condition mein thi...
her body is dehydrated also she is very much under nutrition-ed , by seeing her i can say dat may be she has not have proper diet for long time nd her body is bruised also;
aisa lagta hai buhat zayda physical torture hua hai in par... nd i hav doubt dat she has undergone a miscarriage recently waise bhi inki body itni weak hai baby toh kya yeh khud apne aap ko pata nahi kab tak support kar payegi...

after hearing her last line rey shouted...😡 "Don't dare 2 say these words she vil live, use jinna hoga main use kuch nahi hone dunga, aap plzz mujhe batayiye ki kya treatment karvana hai i vil do it fr her but plzz save her main pehle hi use ek baar kho chuka hun aur himaat nahi hai mujhme..."

( he shattered down nd fell on his knees, cried badly, swayam nd sharon hugged him nd consoled him. doctor also had tears in her eyes) 😭

Doc: treatment se zyada she needs support of her loved ones, make sure she doesn't stay alone fr longer periods, humesha koi na koi inke saath hona chahiye, abhi toh maine medicines de di hai so she is sleeping but ven she wakes up give her some liquid diet no solid things as she has been without food fr long time so may b her body react in different way nd fr her remaining checkup i vil come tomorrow afternoon by dat time i think she vil b stable enough...

with dis she left...

sharon, swayam nd rey all three stayed up in kriya's room as no one is ready 2 leave her side even fr a single second...

sharon slept on kriya's bed near her, swayam settled himself on d couch nd rey he sat on d ground near kriya nd stared her whole night he didn't slept fr single second...

swayam was watching his brothers condition...😒 he is worried fr him to, he knew dat rey loves kriya not only him but every1 knows it, he remembered d day ven Rey poured his heart in front of dem...

FLASHBACK

it has been 6 months since any news of kriya nd her mother came, everybody was tensed fr dem, nd it was kriya's b'day so dey all ver remembering her more today...

silently everyone was crying fr her but in-front of each other no one showed der sadness as dey pretended 2 b strong nd support each other...

but by d evening time ven every1 was gathered in hall to just cut cake in her memory just 2 console demselves dat she is near 2 dem,

Rey entered d house with her favorite chocolate cake as he was in office for past two days just came today fr her b'day dat 2 in drunken state wid cake...

riddhima, sharon, armaan, swayam nd nandu ver shocked 😲 to see him like dis as he wud never ever drink like dis, he is not a person who drinks everyday instead he wud take a glass in parties just to show nd vil wander around in whole party wid dat single glass, so wats d matter today dat he is heavily drunken...

Armaan came near him placed his hands on rey's shoulder asked him in concern... "Rey yeh kya hai, tum aise??" ( he made him settle down on sofa)

Rey smiled slyly and told armaan..." Hehehe... Bhai apko nahi pata aaj kriya ka Bbbiirrrthdddaayyy... haiii toh main celebrate kar raha hun....(he handed him a cake box nd said) dekho na main toh uska favorite chocolate cake bhi laya hun, pleajjj usse bolo na woh aajaye wapas"😔

Everyone is highly confused 😕 on seeing him behaving like dis, yes dey all r upset wid kriya's sudden vanish but nobody expected rey to react like dis...

Riddhima: (came forward to rey she sensed something is eating him up from inside which he has been hiding fr sometime) Rey kya hua hai?? Tum aaj ke din aise drink karke... wat's d matter? is der something which u wanted to tell us??? ( she worriedly looked at him)

rey stood up nd took her hand in his... " bhabhi aaj ka din aapko pata hai aaj kya hai?? (to which ridzy nodded her head in yes direction he smiled and continued) aaj apki aur sharon tumhari (pointed towards sharon) aap dono ki behan ka b'day, aur bhai (moved to armaan) aaj apki choti si pyari si saali kriya ka b'day hai hain na (armaan nodded his head, den he came to swayam )swayam aaj teri bhi toh best freind ka b'day hai na... (he asked like an innocent child...)

Swayam asked him: haan rey par tu yeh sab kya bol raha; kahin tu...??? (but rey didn't let him complete his sentence)

rey: kitne ache se samjhta hai na tu mujhe... haan main wohi bol raha hun mere bhai...aaj tum sabki pyari kriya jo kisi ki behan hai, kisi ki saali toh kisi ki bestie... but meri.. meri toh woh kuch bhi nahi lagti thi... (he brokedown into tears nd couldnot balance himself so sat on couch,all gathered around him...) meri woh kuch nahi lagti thi tabhi mujhe bina mile, bina kuch bole chali gayi chodke ek baar socha bhi nahi... (swayam came forward nd placed his hand on rey assuring him nd gestured him to speak his heart out today) kyun bhabhi ek baar bhi nahi use yaad ayi humari... (he stood in front of ridzy)

aapki toh har baat manti hai na woh plzz use kaho na woh aajaye wapas main nahi jee sakta uske bina bhabhi main buhat pyar karta hun usse, I love her aur kismat ka khel toh dekho mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki usne mujhe kabhi pyar kiya bhi tha ya nahi...(he laughed in b/w his tears) 😭 plzz bhai mujhe meri kriya laa do... plzz mujhe koi new assistant nahi chaiye mujhe bas kriya hi chahiye plzz, sharon tum toh meri best frnd hona toh mere liye itna nahi karogi plzz yeh aakhri baar hai iske baad kuch nahi mangoga main...

swayam hugged him tighlty (just like d way rey hugged him after swaron fight in corridor nd computer room) He said... "bas rey hum koshish kar rahe hai unhe dhundne ki koshish kar rahe hai na woh zarur mil jayegi..."

in d meanwhile rey heard krish playing nd making sounds on sitting on d ground... He cudn't walk so crawled to him... krish looked up nd smiled, clapped on seeing his chachu, rey sat biside him nd talked to him in babiysh language..

" Krishhuuu.. kaischa hai tu... tu bhi apni kliya massi ko misshh karta hai na, toh ek baar bula na use, tu toh jab bhi rota hai ya use ishara kalke bulata hai toh woh bhaagti hui aati hai na... toh bula na use plzz... dekh kitni gandi hai teri massi main kitni der se use bula raha hun ro raha hun woh aa hi nahi rahi tu baula pleajjj ek baar..." 😭 he sat pleaded to him krish just cud understand kriya's name so he called fr..." KLIYAA MASCHII CHAHIYE..." nd he kept on repeating it rey took him into his lap nd said...

"Shhh.. tu mattt roo woh nahi ayegi mujhe pata hai shh... chup hoja krishhuu" nd he sang d same song which kriya used to sing fr krish nd rocked him in his lap put him up in sleep...🥱

swayam,sharon, ridzy,armaan everyone was in tears seeing him like dis...

dey always wanted kriyaansh to b together, god knows hw many times dey plotted situations to get dem together but dey cudn't see any results as both kriya nd rey use to coverup der feelings in so good manner dat nobody cud guess anything...

Dey use to fight a lot on every petty things only to hide der feelings...

rey murmered some words like.. "main buhat bura hun isiliye she left me, i'm very bad person..." 🥺 ridzy tried to console him but of no use at last he fainted wid stress nd dey put him in his bed fr sleep...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

swayam sighed remembering dat night dat was first nd last time rey cried in front of dem for kriya after dat day he became a man wid no emotions nd armaan riddhima's death made the matter even worst,

today he saw rey crying fr kriya after so many time, he turned to hav a last look of rey before his eyes give up, he saw him still watching her wid his eyes wide open just a change is dat now rey had kept his head on bed near kriya nd his body was settled beside d bed on ground...

he knew today his brother won't b sleeping at all, he vil b like dis all night after all he vil compensate fr all d 2 years of living widout his love... nd swayam didn't objected it as he know it is of no use because jahan dil ki baat ho wahan dimag kaam nahi karta hai nd wid these thoughts he drifted back 2 sleep...

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Early morning sun rays came in through gap b/w curtains, As Rey was awake throughout d might he watch the other 3 stirring up in der sleep as if fight d rays so dat dey can hav sleep fr some more time, Rey pulled up curtains together not wanting to disturb anyone as dey all ver tired due to night incidents...

He proceeded for his room to get freshened up nd after dat he vil wake evryone, after completing his routine he goes to Nandu who was preparing fr breakfast informed him abt happenings in d night plus instructed him wat to be made fr kriya's breakfast, nandu was really happy😊 to knw dat his kriya didi is back but on watching her in dis state he couldn't stop himself frm crying, Rey told him to control nd get krish ready fr school nd himself fr college...

Rey again entered d room in which kriya, sharon nd swayam ver sleeping...

he looked around sharon was up by nw nd is in washroom nd swayam has just woken up settling d couch, rey moved to curtains opened dem fr fresh air..

kriya's sleep broke nd she woke up, slowly she opened her eyes registering d surroundings which ver some wat familiar to her...

while getting up she found it difficult so swayam came fr her help nd made her sit properly...

He smiled😊 at her which she also replied wid a smile but a meek one, sharon at dat came back frm washroom she immediately took her in bone crashing hug 🤗 nd started pouring her wid many questions...

Sharon: kriya kahan thi tum?? itne saal koi apno se dur rehta hai kya?? u didn't called up once yaad nahi ayi kya humari?? aur yeh halat kaise hui tumahri baato bhi kriya chup kyun ho???😡

Rey who wa standing near window smiled on seeing shron like dis... Swayam spoke in between... "ahem.. woh sharon tum agar use chodogi tabhi woh kuch bolegi an dekho bechari kaise sandwich ban gayi hai..."

sharon: oops sorry kriya...😔

kriya who was by now in tears 😭smiled nd nodded her head in direction of no..." its okay sharon, i missed u..." wid dis she also hugged her nd both sisters cried fr sometime...🤗

swayam spoke up again to make d atmosphere light..." i think u both wanted hav floods here...(sharon glared 😡at him nd threw a cushion on him, kriya giggled) if u both hav down ur cochiie coo's... let me also meet my bestiee.."
sharon moved giving him space..."sure she is all urs go meet ur partner or should i say soul sister..."(she winked at him)😉

swayam hugged kriya caressed her hairs..." hw r u kriya, i'm very angry wid u, tum mujhe akela yahan in devil😈 heads ke beech chod kar chali gayi pata bhi hai mera kya haal hua hai...( he pointed towards rey nd sharon who ver standing wid der mouths opened in 'O' shaped) kahan thi tum jab mujhe tumhari sabse zayday zarurat thi?? pata bhi hai kya kya hua tumhare jaane ke baad?? waise bada best frnd... best frnd bolti ho aur ek baar bhi mujhe kuch baatya nahi, call tak nahi kiya?? (he cried while hugging her nd made an angry face)

kriya wipped his tears.." I am sorry swayam main majboor thi.."

swayam got up walked to bed side not wanting to stress her any more...kriya's eyes met wid rey's he was having tears in his eyes but he was standing near window thinking with wat right should he go to her?? swayam is her bestie nd sharon is her sister, wat was he to her...

kriya uttered wid lot of difficulty.." Rey I... I... I... I'm sorry fr wat hav done i didn't informed u before leaving, i ws ur PA, i am sorry....(nd she broke down in tears)😭

he come to her kept his hand on her shoulder nd just said.." BAATCUTTER..." she looked up nd cried more on hearing dis name of her's given by him, she cried harder nd immediately hugged him...🤗 "I'm sorry Reyaansh, I'm sorry..."

Rey smiled😊 he got it... he was her frnd b4 even he started 2 love her; dey ver just good frnds first...baatcutter nd linecutter for each other der frndship was more of like enemies yes dey both ver always ready fr war wid each other ... nd he hav to make his baatcutter like d old one just by being her friend nd her support...

kriya stopped crying nd asked every one "Ridzy dii aur jiju kahan hai aur krish where is he???"

The trio was looking at each other for d answers 😕

but to der rescue immediately door flunked open nd like storm a sweet boy ran in his underwear shouting on top of his voice jumped up on bed mumbling he won't wear dat yucky thing nd won't go anywhere...⭐️ nd behind him nandu came in running all tired nd his hands full wid dress...

Kriya's eyes opened wide in shock wid d sudden storm who entered in... 😲

finally first part completed, that 2 after a long gap so hav updated a quiet long part,njoy it i knw its not very happy happy types update still do comment nd hit d like button nd all ur suggestions, criticism nd questions r most welcomed...😊

I can't promise next part soon because next whole week my tests vil b on...so may b chapter-2 vil b after next week or if possible den by end of next week..sorry...😔

and here r some names fr negative character plzz suggest one fr them...
1) SHYAM
2) VISHAL
3) SUJIT
4) AKSHAT
4) VIVAN
if any one want further pms so dat person hav to buddy me or if anyone doesn't pms so he or she can tell me i won't mind...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Awww!!!!! i simply love dis chapter...n u made me emotional tooo...wid da flashback...plzz update nxt chptr asap...n arsha wala b plijjj

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

awesome update
loved it
gosh kriya is soo weak
eagerly waiting for the next part
n for -ve character i chose shyam

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awsummm update,,,,,,,,,,,,

i luv dis chapter,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n 4 -ve character shivam😊

waiting 4 nxt chappy😃

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

amazing part...
Cute nd emotional one...
Flashback part was beautifully explained...
Rey's feeling was portrayed nicely...
Loved it to the core
negative character i will choose shyam
update whenever u get time
thnx for pm