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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jalak and Tanmay were taken away by Sonu. Papaji- ishu baata dey puttar mujhe mein himat nahi hai.
Preeto- meri behen mere saath issa kar sakti hai ye meine khabhi nahi socha tha.
Ishu- han han teri behen ne hi tere saath ehsa kiya. Arrey agar mein Dhruv se shaadi hi nahi ki hoti toh issa nahi hota.
Bani- ek minute ap keh na kya chahati hai
Pankaj- Ishu tujhe jo bhi kehna hai woh saaf saaf keh
Meeta- ek minute toh keh rahi hai keh tune Dhruv se shaadi nahi ki hoti toh yeh sab nahi hota. Iska matlab tujhe patta hai Rajbeer Preeto ko choud ke kyun gaya tha
Preeto- kyunki woh ek ehssi ladki ke saath apni zindagi nahi bitahna chahata tha jo apni ap shayad zindagi bhaar doh kadam bhi nahi chal sake gi.
Ishu- NAHI PREETO TERI APAHIJ HONE SE RAJBEER KO KOI FARAK NAHI PADDA THA. HALAT NE TUJHE USSE DOOR KIYA THA.
Preeto finally let out a whisper- kya
Bj- jo baat hum chaar saal pehle choud ae the woh aaj fir akey khadi hogae hai.
Pankaj- bj ap jaante the ke rajbeer ki koi majboori thi
Bj- han...
Preeto- issi kya majboori thi uski.
Bj- TU THI USKI MAJBOORI PREETO TU THI.
A tear rolled down Papaji's eyes. Preeto- yeh sab kya ho raha hai. Bj mein toh doh di ke liye coma mein thi toh fir un doh dino mein kya hua tha...(no response) ARREY KOI TOH BAATAO KE MERI ZINDAGI MEIN HO KYA RAHA THA.
Ishu had enought, she walks up to Preeto and holds her by the elbow and turns her towards her. Ishu- tu jaanah chahati hai na key kya hua tha. Toh sun mein tujhe baatati hon. Jab woh hadsaa hua tha na tab Rajbeer sirf behosh hua tha lekin toh coma mein thi...

Flashback...
Guys finally...

Rajbeer's room. Everyone was with Preeto when Rajbeer regained conscious. Then a lady in a black saree knocked on the door. Rajbeer- come in
The door opened the the lady was the bitch Neelam Ahluwalia...
Rajbeer was shocked- ap yaha kyun ae hai.
NA- hmmm Rajbeer tum bhi na kitne bhole ho. Tumhara pyaar aaj hosh mein bhi nahi hai aur tumhe laga ke mein iss baat ka faedah nahi oathaongi.
Raj- kya matlab
NA- matlab mera yeh hai...

Sorry guys u'll have to wait for tomorrow as they do it in tv shows.😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry baby i am unable to follow your series as I am overloaded with work. 😭 .I tried to read this part but couldn't understand as it seems to be continuation..I can see some new characters in the story.
Love your enthusiasm on posting daily without fail...Too sad I am unable to read them on time..Will catch up for sure when I get some time😊
Miss your writings . have you ever considered writing OS?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Saina--

sorry baby i am unable to follow your series as I am overloaded with work. 😭.I tried to read this part but couldn't understand as it seems to be continuation..I can see some new characters in the story.

Love your enthusiasm on posting daily without fail...Too sad I am unable to read them on time..Will catch up for sure when I get some time😊


Miss your writings . have you ever considered writing OS?





Dont worry babe ill write a very short storyline till now. N ill continue adding to the story.

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