FF : ' For A Change ' ... updat @ pg 15...

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Veena.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

Welcome To My Behooda FF 🤣🤣

Its based on a thought of , For A Change... How about All MKAP Chars and thier Nature is reverse, 😉 ... It follows a bit MKAP story line, but goes in a Hilarious and Romantic way...😉

Here goes the Charcter Sketch...😛

Krish : Krishna Saxena...😆, A Decent , daring, responsible n a bit shy Guy...😉

cares for family... Tongue

Pratz : Pratigya Singh Thakur... Uneducated, with thakurs atitude , Daring , cute , sweet n a Beatiful girl... Tongue

, For a change , Who says to Krish : Abay apna Bhashan band kar... 😆 , ... So Krish gives bhashans... ROFL

Shakthi : Shakthi singh thakur, elder bro of Partz... who hates women...😲 ROFL

, allergic of Women , Pyar vyar chakker...😆, He thinks women makes men weak... so He wants to be single all his life...😆, all He cares for Family respect, nothing matters to him... Tongue

Arushi : Aarushi saxena, younger sis of Krish... Aarushi is very romantic. She feels love is a fairy tale. And everything is fair in love( u read it lot of times... ROFL

) , n too filmy, waiting for her Prince charming... who falls for Shakthi at first sight... 😆

Sajjan & Amma : for a change... Sajjan scares of Amma...😆, TN mein sirf Amma, aur Ladies ka chaltha hai...😆, this is the reason for Shakthi hatin Women...

Shamu & Naninaji : Love birds of GH... love n intercast mrg... 😉

GH Dadi : For a Change... She uses Ghanti , n mounwrath... 😆, since Shamu went against her wish in Marrying Naninaji...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Index

Part 1 & 2 - Page 1

Part 3 - Page 3

Part 4 - Page 6

Part 5 - Page 15

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Veena.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part -1

Its a late night... Pratigya walking along a lonely street cursing herself... Shez in tis getup...😛

Pratz to herself : Thum ek bahothi Behoodi ho Pratigya, kya zarrorath thi zyada dimaag chalane ki... Amma aur Shakthi bhai kehne ke baad bhi thum Komaliya ki Shadi par jaane ki Jidd ki... aur dekho ka hua... Bus kho di thumne...

Pratigya attended Her friend Komal's marriage in other city , She missed her Bus while returning in the middle of Journey when they stopped for dinner, no hand bag r her Gun which she alwayz carries in her purse as Shez PST n no luggage...

suddenly some guys following her on bikes... n rounded Her n driving bikes around Her...

Pratz : Yey Saale, koun hai thum log... aise chakkar kahe maar rahe hai , Ham koi Devi ma nay aur ye Mandir nay samjhe...😡

Guys : Han Babes, hum jaanthe hai wo sab... par ye raath hai , aur thum ek akeli khbsurath ladki ho...😉

Pratigya gets angry n started giving gaalis...

Partigya : Ka bay saale, ka kaha , thumko sharam nay aathi hai... thumko Behene Amma koi nay bay... kithne gandhe log hai, sasure, behoode... zabaan kheechlungi, ek kantap dungi sale... bla bla bla...

shez goin on n on with gaalis, those guys juz shocked at her languge , n closed thier ears... One guy said to others , someone first close her mouth... One guy tried do it... but Pratigya bite his hand n gave little prashdi n runnig away... n suddenly bumped on to a Guy... who else Our Hero... Krishna Saxsena😉...

have a look... ekdum GH ki achha bachha jaise dikh rahe haina...🤣 , holding a bag across his shouder, having some files n an Umberilla ( as Hez a GH wassi...😆)

She was about to fall... but Krishna hold her... his hands around her waist n her both hands on his both shoulders...

Krishna lost in her beauty... He has never seen such a stunning beauty in his whole life... already Hey Hey Hey music playing in his mind n heart , staring at her with a smile... Tongue

, but disturbed with something... watelse Pratz shouting...

Pratz : Arey behooda chodo chodo humka... chodo...😡

Krish come to his sences n left her... searching for word " Ji Ji sorry sorry aap aap "

Guys reached there on Bike n said : Wo Hamari hai, leave Her to Us...

Pratz again got angry started Gaaliyan ... tis time Krishna closed his ears n shocked... n understand the situtaion n said her to stop... Krish gave some lallontop Prashadi to them n they escaped...

Pratz : bahg gaye behoode,...👏 , Shez jumping n laughing...😆

Pratz to K : Shehbash beta... she hitted his shoulder praising him...

Krish juz shocked n confused at her attitude, behaviour n language...😆

Krish : Aap koun ho aur ye aadhi raat, raaste pe akele...??..😕

Pratz expalined Him... Krish said he too lost Bus...

Krish : Ek baat kahiye , aise gaaliya de rahe ho un logo ko, Aapko dar nay lagtha...

Partz : 😆 , dar...?? ... 😆 jaanthe ho Hum koun hai... PST...😈

Krish : PST...??... Confused

Partz : Han Pratigya Singh thakur...😈 , kisi se darthe nay hai hum samjhi...!!

Krish : Hum Krishna hai..., teek hai Aapko kaha jaana hai...??

Pratz : Illahabad...

Krish : arey hum bhi waha jaana hai, hum waha hi rahthe hai..., mein ek Lawer hun( lol there nothin to do with his job, so i juz keep it so, as our frnz comments here ) , ek case ki baare mein yaha aaya aur mein Bus miss kalri... chalo hum Bus station chalthe hai , aur koi bus pakdenge waha se...

Partz doubted him... n thought hez flirtin with Her... 😈

Partz : Ka hum thumko ek bhddhu jaisa dikhthe hai ka... Hum jaanthe Ladke aise hi Ladikia ko patane ki koshish karthe hai...

Krish : arey nay nay Pratigya ji aap galath samjh rahe hai..., Hum sach mein Illahabad se hi hai... ek minute...

He showed his I-card n visiting card for proof n said her to check...

Pratz : arey ye kisliye... aur ka check karen , Hame padhna nay aatha..!!

She walked away... Krish followed her , n both walking...

Krish : 😲 , Kya aap pad nay sakthe... ?? Kyun...

Pratz : ka mathlab, hum kab school gaye the...??

Krish : are aap school nay gaye the... ?? Kyun...??

Partz : Ka bay ye ka ka ka lage ke rakhe ho... Hum ek baar copy ker rahe the Pariksha mein.,, thab Teacher ne hame maari aur hame teacher ne bahar bhejdi... hame bahoth gussa aya,, aur Hamne uss behoodi ko ek pathher se maari...😈

Krish listening with shocking 😲

Krish : Aur phir... ?? .. Confused

Pratz : phir ka... ?? Teacher ne hame school nay aane diya aur bahoth be izzath ki, sab ke saamne... aur hum thab se school jana chod diya...🥳

Krish : ye kya kia Pratigya ji aap...?? pehle copy karna galath hai , aur techar ko maarna galath hai... sab galath... padhayi insaan keliye bahoth zaroori hai Partigya ji... Ye sahi nay hai... bahoth galathi ki aapne Pratigya ji... n bla bla ...

Pratz irrtated n stopped him , posing both hands on her waist...

Pratz : Abay chup , apna ye bhashan band kar smajhe... 😡 , ye ka bak bak kare jarahe ho...?? ab ye aadhi raath mein hume poori padhayi seekhe collector banane ki iraade hai ka...

aur Ek baat dhyaan se sunlo... Hum PST hai... 😈 hame kisi aur kisi cheez ki zarrorath nay hai... Hum jaise hai, waise hi theek hai, khush hai, bindaas hai Samjhi..!! ...🥳

Krish juz shocked ... suddenly its lightning n thundering... Pratz get scared n hugged Krish... Tongue

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2:

Krish again schoked n felt incomfortable n shy... Partz parted away frm him, looked at him with sacry n innocent look... 😕

both walking again...

Krish : Aap darthe bhi ho kya...?? ...😆

Pratz : Hum kisi behoode aur gunde se nay darthe... par iss andhera aur ye sab cheez se darthe hai... Ouch

Krish smiled at her... waise Aap Darthe hue achhi lag rahe ho...😛

Partz : ka... hum kabhi nay suna ye, koi ladke ladki se hasthe huye achhi lagthe kehthe hai... par ye ka...??... Confused

Krish : par wo mamuli ladi ki baath haina... 😳

Pratz : tho phir hum ka hai...?? Alien...??...😡

Krish : Arey nay nay Pratigya ji... hamre mathlab Aap bahoth alag aur Dil se saaf dikh rahe hai... jo dil me ho wo bolthe ho aap...

It sounded good for Pratigya, She smiled n lookin into his eyes... n asked,

Partz : Achaa..?? aur kya...??

Krish also lookin into her eyes n said with asmile Aur aap Bahoth khubsurath ho...

Partz smiled n said while adjusting her n hair n dress wo hum jaanthe hai, showing attitude... said Hamre saheliyan bhi ye kehthe hai ki, Hum koi Heroine se kam nay hai...

again itz thunderd n Partz again hugged Krish... tis time Krishna wrapped her protectivley in his arms...

after a while, both aparted n smiled at eachother , Krish fully shy n ruffelin his hair lookin here n there... 😆

Pratz : confused n Abay ka hua... 😆

Krish : teekh hai dekhiye hum sach keh rahe hai ... Hum bhi illahabad jaana hai, Hum waha MMFG mein rehthe hai... wo Gunde ki kasam Pratigya ji...

Pratz : teek hai... waise kisi ko bhi ithna himmath nay hay ki iss PST ko dhoka dene ki chalbo...

In the morning...

at TN...

Amma calling pratz , but no one answering phone, n all worried...

KriYa reached TN...

Krish to Partz : ji ab hum chalthe hai...

Pratz : arey aise kaise, thum hame ithna madad ki, andar aavbo zara Chaay peeke javbo...

Krish : Arey koi zarrorath nay, Hum chalthe hai...

Partz : thmo bahoth sharmathe ho... aajaav yaar, She dargged him inside...

All Happy seeing Her n Pratz hugged Amma , n Amma asked whoz He... Partigya xplained... n went inside to get Tea for Krish , calling Payisiya loudly...

Amma to SS : dekha thum thoda dimaag chaladi , aur hame raaji ki hamre beti ko bhejne keliye... aur dekho kithan mushkil jhelna padha hamre Rani ( tis wat TNS calls Pratz) ko...😡

SS : arey Hum ka..., Amma gave him a killing look , n SS lookin down

Amma said Chup... ab zyada zabaan math chalaav...!!

Krish watching all noutanki with confused look siiting there...

Amma asked whoz he n details...

Krish : hum Krishna saxsena ... Ek lawyer hun...

All of TNs expressions changed hearing his name...( caste issue) ... Krish observed it n gets up n said

Krish : Ji hum chalthe hai... n he left...

Pratz came with chai n asked about Krish... TNs said he left...

Pratz : arey aise kaise chal gaya, hum teek se shukriya bhi nay kaha... Confused

She felt bad...

Amma observed it n said

Amma : ab maheene mahhene Shukriya kahogi ka... ander jaav...😡

Pratz silently went inside...

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suk4

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Posted: 13 years ago

I love it👏

well done, Veena, love the role reversal😆 especially when K says yeh galat hai etc, i only wish P really was more like this one.

keep it coming👍🏼

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chikni-chameli

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chalo.. Let's do one thing!! You like them this way na?-- we will request CVs to get all the Thakurs and Saxenas together in a bus for a family picnic (playing antaakshri too)! And then bus ki breaks fail and they all fall into a pit! Everyone survives don't worry.. but due to head injuries to all- their personalities are reversed! Now we can ENJOY this post more! Love it! Good one 😉

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Veena.S

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG PST is all alone here, No likes&comments i know u can't comment again n again 4 same updt, but how can I updt all parts in 1st pg only 😕 🤣
Trust me i won't update until it gets pink by comments, pink team needed here 🤣 🤣

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Snigdha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena.S
OMG PST all alone here, No likes&comments i know u can't comment again n again 4 same updt, but how can updt all parts in 1st pg only 😕 🤣
Trust me i won't update until it gets pink by comments, pink team needed here 🤣 🤣

too much🤣