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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN


Di need update ...day dreaming coz aaj kal Maanee di ko hamari yaad he nahi aati 😭


dekho aakhe tum par hi rehti hai ... ek dum se reply kiya na...


par jab tum update nahi dogee ... to mai chor dungi na tumhe...

heheheh now mee drama didi... kyonki queen (drama) to tum ho na 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahaha.. jass and bulbul awsome ff yaar.. live the concept.. geet is tooo much. cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago







Chapter 6


Next Morning


Geet she s an intelligent girl.May b she has spent her life in village but her learning capacity i.e. to observe thing and to understand techniques is her best part...So last nite she has learned how to use bathroom attachments when Maan told her.


After taking shower she git ready around 7.So early but she was used to it.When she came out of room only servants were doing their daily work.

She found Nakul in the dinning area..she smiled and climbed downstairs to reach him




Geet : Bahiya Ji Namasty (folding her hands he said)

Nakul surprised looked at her .he got up to early.

Nakul : Baby Ji aap itni jaldi uth gayi..u need any thing

Geet : No Bhayia Ji we village people get up early...Mujhe pata hai city people get up late.But it is 7 now...Where is Daddi Maa and Maan wo bhi so rahey hai abhi (she scratches her hair)

Nakul : Geet baby Dadi Maa has health problem so doctor asked her not to get up so early and Maan Sir wo to kab k uth gaye...he is in gym (Nakul gav whole info to her)

Geet : Gym ? Wo kya hota hai...(confusedd...)

Nakul : Baby ji yahan exercise karte hai...

Geet : Oh..

Nakul : Geet baby u want to hav tea...I ll make for u (he was not feeling bored with her innocent questions )

Geet : Bhayia Ji aap mujhe rasoi (kitchen) dikha dejiye main bana leti hu and also I gonna help u in making breakfast (in excitement

Nakul : No baby ji its our work u plz sit here on chair or on couch main apko la kar deta hu..if u want I can take ur tea to ur room.

Geet : No Bhayia Ji ..I hav habit to do work ...I can't sit without any work.Plz let me help u .(lik a stubborn girl she said)

Nakul : Okey lets go (had to drop weapons )



Geet : Bhayia Ji this is rasoi (kitchen )? (looked around in amazement )

Nakul : Ji Baby Ji

Geet : Bhayia Ji mujhe itna pata hai cities main gas use karte hai..but there is no gas..how u prepare food ? ...Hamare village main meri chachi k ghar hai tha...but kya KM main ga nahi hai (poor girl she wa not able to find cook top with cover )

Nakul : In KM latest type of gas stoves r here..let me show u (he removed cover from stove .She was surprised to c that)

Geet : Bhayia Ji refrigerator bhi hai yahan

She was questioning Nakul and Nakul was answering with getting frustrated

Nakul : Look at this (he opened door of fridge which was looking more like an almirah ...

Geet : Mera to sar ghum gaya bhayia ji (looking at it she held her head

Nakul gav her cup of tea and prepared black coffee for Maan.

Geet : Bhayia Ji yeh black tea...is there no more milk in house. (she looked at one cup having balck coffee but thought it is tea )

Nakul : This is black coffee baby Ji for Maan Sir..wo aate he hongay and he needs black coffee its his habit. (he said slowly lik Maan was standing behind him )

Geet : Coffee!!! ya maine kai marriages main pi hai...hamare Punjab main Viah --Shaddi main coffee banate hai ..but uska color to tea jaisa hota hai..but ika black (surprised)

Nakul : Its without milk..Maan Sir like this type of coffee..

Geet : Oh (she made face) kalli coffee..shee shee...hay babaji kisa insaan hai..itna paisa hai pass...coffee main milk nahi daal sakta...koi unse pushe kitne paise save kar lay-gay iss se (when she said..Nakul laughed at her innocence )


Geet took her cup ans sat on chair so that Nakul would come back and she can help him .She didn't wanna repeat any mistake like last nite.


But Geet how she could it calmly when she saw fruit basket on table and knife he started to cut apple in plate

Geet : Apple I should cut for Daddi Maa...it good for her health (she took knife in hand)


On other hand Maan was returning from hi exercise when he found Nakul coming toward him so he stops to take coffee mug

Nakul : Maan Sir ur coffee




Maan can take cup in hand Nakul and Maan heard a voice ' yes Geet was screaming '


Maan : Geet its her voice

Nakul : She is in kitchen

Maan :Wahi koi kaand (scam) kar liya hoga lets c (they ran toward kitchen )


What they found Geet holding her hand was in tears there was huge cut in her middle finger .


Maan : Geet !!!(he became restless looking at her and held her hand asked Nakul to bring first aid box but also angry on her)r u mad Geet what u was doing wth it here (he made her sit on chair and warped her finger in tissue paper

Geet : Maine kya yeh jaan-bujh (intentionally) kiya hai ..jo aap mujeh per chilla rahe hai (sob sob 😭 😭)

Maan : Ya u did intentionally ..jab tumko pata hai u can't do any work properly fir kyo muft k pangay leti ho (he burst)

Geet : I was cutting apple (crying )

He looked at knife that was not for cutting fruits sharp from both sides

Maan : kya karu in kaam karne wallo ka aur is ladki ka...(sighed) Raj Kumar (he yelled calling servant's name )

Poor servant came running


Maan : Yeh chopper kya kar raha hai table per..this is not for fruit cutting..aur yeh pagal ladki ie fruit cut kar rahi hai

He said nothing took knife and left coz ccan't mess with Maan

Geet : Why r u yelling on every one ..saare pagal hai ek apko chod kar (she jerked her hand from his grip )


Maan : Geet chup bilkul chup kar k beith jayo other wise I gonna slap once okey . U hav made me mad in one day (he showed his hand )

Geet : U r mad..it means u admit u r mad (crying Geet suddenly laughed aloud)

Maan : Bhagwaan ne isko fursat se banaya hoga sari madness daal kar ..koi bhi loose end nahi choda (murmured but smile came on his lips)

Nakul came running having first aid boz becoz there was no bandage in kitchen box so he took it from Maan's room

Maan grabbed her hand applied antiseptic.Lil burning made her cry but no effect on him.He did his work patiently

Geet : Das Sar walla Ravan bhi inse accha hoga ..daya hogi usme per inme bhagwaan ne daali he nahi..black coffe pee pee kar dil bhi kaala ho gaya hai inka (she thought but suddenly changed her mind) nahi dil kaala nahi inka..ya he became bitter by tongue but not by heart other wise he had left me alone with those devils back (she looked at Maan who was washing his hand and was making faces in own thinking )

Maan observed her facial expressions .Nodded his head : Oh Miss Hoshiarpur Express lets go challo yahan se ...go to ur room or sit on couch ...I gonna ask Nakul wo TV on kar dega (he dragged her without waiting her response)

Geet : Hoshiarpur express (she firmed her feet on floor and resisted to go )

Maan : Kyo fir se derail hona hai...lik any local train kabhi be derail ho jaati ho...that's why u r Hoshiarpur express coz from that city ...kabhi kya karo koi nahi jaanta


Geet : I m train ..okey let me show u how a train hit any thing coming on its way (with full force Geet pushed Maan back with her hands )

There was sofa behind Maan looses his balance and falls on sofa at his back and Geet on him

Eye look both lost in each other for much time .When Daddi came down stairs.She was surprised to c this.But smiled

Daddi : Maan Geet I think sofas r for sitting purpose not to lay on it like this (teased)

Maan speechless pushed Geet she fell on floor and Maan got up

Maan : Daddi Maa wo ..actually kya hua na (no words )


Daddi : Nakul told me ..but why u pushed Geet down dekhiye..she is crying (she pointed toward Geet who was sitting crossing both legs shedding tears)

Maan :Daddi don worry yeh derail ho gayi hai ...inko track per aap laa sakti hai other wise tell me I ll do it in my way (he put hands on wait)

Daddi : Maan control urself beta...aap aise language ue karte ache nahi lagte...look at her she is too innocent ..he needs love beta if u also do same how she was getting treated back then Geet darti rahegi yahan bhi (she made him understand)

Maan : I don care Daddi ..But he also keep this in mind I m not lik her relatives but she has to follow my rules here and also has to learn way of living which we hav ..iske sochne se mujhe koi farak nahi padta..okey Geet (he said to Daddi and then made Geet understand)


Maan grabbed her shoulder and raised her up.He left place in hurry.

Daddi hugged Geet tightly

Daddi Maa : Don worry beta he is such..wo aise he hai per no bad at heart...u ll be used to him and he ll be to u (cupped her face)


Geet :Daddi Maa kya Maan ki Maa ji bhi coffee pitti thi without milk and sugar (said crying big drops were coming out of her hazel eyes )

Not able to understand Daddi asked reason for this : Why u r saying so beta

Geet : I think jab yeh paida hone walle hongay to wo coffee pitti hongi that's why he is too bitter ..and has habit to take it.

Daddi laughed at her question and nodded her head in amazement.asked Nakul to bring tea for her and Geet ans sat on couch





How is this buddies hop u ll like plz giv ur views .Waiting for ur response


Plz comment and hit lik



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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome.. lol geet is an innocent drama queen.. cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n lovely update...

loved it...

tooo much innocent...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it geet hurt maan concern black coffeee and maan anger love geet dadi bond



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Posted: 12 years ago
Jass and Bulbul 🤗 ...thank u for the awesome update and PM...Geet is such a cutie ...loved her 101 questions to Nakul...poor fellow...he got tired answering her 😆...awwws she cut her finger ...love the way Maan took care of her even being angry. ...that trip and fall on the sofa ...i think he started to have some feelings for her now...once again glad Geet had Dadi to love and pamper her...plz continue...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago



Maan is worried for her...taking care of her but he is getting irritated by her childishness...

even Nakul get irritate with her continuous questions...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very very nice update..pls cont soon.

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