Not among the stars

Hello Everyone I am posting my new poem. Please do give your comments:

Not among the Stars

When I am among the stars

Will have no more scars

Will love myself without a farce

My soul will sing and dance

My eyes full of tears

Fill our lives with fears

Wound our hearts with spears

When will these evils I disperse

Not among the stars

Right here right now will heal my scars

Every second

Will be a celebration

Full of mutual love, joy and admiration

Then when I am gone

Not sure if I will be reborn

But I will leave you with my song

To keep your soul happy and warm

very good ...loved it 😊

Originally posted by: mahi12

very good ...loved it 😊

Thank you

That's a beautiful poem. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: andv

That's a beautiful poem.

Originally posted by: lavanyarosy

beautiful poem.well done

Thank you dear.

awesome yaar.. its beautiful 👏

its really very beautiful😊

Heyy I liked!!
plz continue...

hey thanks for beautiful poem...Anna...loved it...