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70 wildcat bas 5-6 cmnts bache hai
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Pg 70 target khatam ab Shonu need update aaj
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nice update ...
update the next part soon...
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Awesome updte...
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OMG it was sooo amazing...finally they will reunite in the next update...but plzzz agar twist hai toh yeh baar rey kria ke saath ho!!! n hope jo bhi tumhara work ho jaldi khatam ho jaye aur tum jaldi aakar update kro!!!;);)

Plzzz update soon!!!!!:):)
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i was literally crying

i knw this wasn't that emotional to cry bt seeing Rey's state i couldn't stop myself from crying...

when will u again make them Kriyaansh😭

plzz jldi kro na😭


bt coming to point ur update was really wonderful...😊

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Hey Tina...abhi toh iss update ka pm mila aur next update due bhi ho gaya...btw interesting action...ab aaya ooont pahad ke niche...Rey has confessed his helpless state but he has still questioned her self respect...luking forward to c how MUs will get cleared 😊
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guys kitne difficult moment p demand puri ki e!!i just cnt update bt as ive prmsed tou i ll update half n half any othr day,my upcoming free tym!!
so get ready 4 39 part a in almost 1 hr!!
i dnt prms it wud b complete bt 2 save u guys 4m 2 much w8 it ll hav 2 parts..part a n part b
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 39 (part A)

Well well readers n devil rockers!!this ws the longest demand I ever made n u fulfilled it in a sucha short tym!i made this demand 4 an excuse nt 2 update earlier bt u guys rocked!!really em amazed!!

Thnks 2 all n special thnks 2 devil rockerzz 4 their awesome spamming :D so according 2 ma prms this wud b a long n happy update n ll include all the happy thngs u wanna read(I hope so)

So no more bak bak n here comes the update!!

PRECAP:

Kriya n karan s post engangement party.rey lands thr by chance n z jealous 2 c kriya n karan 2gethr.he gets heavily drunk n z nw pouring his heart out..he drags kriya outta the club n nw karan z also thr 4 her rescue'vick takes rey home..

All in the way rey kept blabbering abt his plight n hw kriya betrayed him n he cant live widout her n thngs like tat n tat he cant still believe tat kriya betrayed him.vick ws listening 2 it while driving n tears falling 4m his eyes seeing his brother s state.he ws pouring his heart out n vick knew he wont tell this in his full senses.so he let him hav his heart out!!

R:vick!my bro!y dnt she understands me?

V:bro!u did wrong wid her twice.she had no other option!

R:bt y didn't she tell me she z my mano?i loved her madly!!i ws abt 2 propose n marry her.she shattered all my dreams!she broke me completely..i overcame my childhood love bt she broke my youth passion also!

V:bhai!plx calm down!it ws destined 2 happen

R:no vick!it wsnt destiny n if it ws I ll change the destiny!i ll make universe jee bow infront ov my love!

V:cmon bro!dnt even thnk ovdng tat.she composed herself wid gr8 difficulty n nw she gav in 4 karan.dnt make it more difficult 4 her.u were kriya s past.karan z her future.plx dnt snatch her happiness 4m her.

R:vick!u dnt knw her.i cud c it thru her eyes!she ll never giv in so easily.karan forced her.she cn never love any1 excpt me.she z mine vick!!

V:cmon bro!plx'

R:no vick!stop the car!

V:no bro!i wont!

R:I said stop it vick!!i need 2 go out!!

Vick stopped the car,rey went out.vick also moved outta the car

V:bro!wait!whr r u gng?u r drunk bro!w8 bro!!

Bt rey dint stop!

THR AT THE CLUB

Kriya ws really upset.she ws crying.

Ka:lets go home kriya

K:no karan!i need sme tym alone.u plx leave me alone 4 smtym

Ka:hey kriya!wots wrong?r nt u happy wid our engangement?z rey bothering u?

K:y did he come 2 my life?i am responsible 4 wot happened 2 him karan!i made him suffer n face all this!i am so bad karan!i ruined his life

Ka:cmon kriya!wth r u talking abt?

K:ll u plx leave me alone 4 smtym??i ll come home by myself

Ka:ok ok.chill kriya em gng

N he left!!kriya ws walking alone on the street at night.thr were few streetlights n few passersby.evry1 ws busy in their life.couples,drunks n othr ppl..all their past n their love ws coming before her eyes as if she were watching a movie..she ws roaming n wandering aimlessly around.everythng seems 2 b in a mess!!she ws in a fix wot 2 do?

Then she saw rey coming 4m the other side ov the road.he ws staggering n blabbering nonsense in his drunken state.he saw her n his eyes glittered wid an unknown feeling she cant define!then he ws abt 2 fall..

She ran 4 him n caught him before his back hit the ground.she steadied him.he felt like heaven in her arms..

R:maanooo u'

K:y r u dng this eagle?y u punishing urself?

R:em nt eagle mano,em ur teddy,remember the same tedd u loved since childhood..

K:wake up rey!just wake up!

R:dnt go away dear!dnt leave me jaan!

K:plx control urself rey.

N she held him n moved 2wards her home.

R:hey mano!dnt go home!if our parents catch us,it d b trouble 4 both ov us!

K:ok then whr shud we go?

R:well I knw ov a hotel.lets go thr.

K:wot?hotel?bt its night rey!i cnt go alone in a hotel wid u in this drunk state!wot ll ppl say?

R:do hell wid them!listen 2 wot ur heart says!

K:but rey..

R:do u love me?

k(lowered her eyes)ya

r:do u trust me?

K:ya

R:do u thnk its wrong?

K:no

R:then y fear the wrld?lets go!

N they both went n kriya asked 4 a room 4 rey.she dint intend 2 stay thr so her plan ws 2 make rey stable in the room n then leave bck home.

She went in the room supporting rey s weight on her shoulders.when they entered the room,rey shut the door behind n literally dashed on the bed.as he ws holding kriya,so she came wid him such tat she ws lying on top ov him!they both had an intense eyelock.due 2 the sudden fall, her slender n beautiful back in his arms.n kriya s hands were resting on rey s shoulders.

It felt so complete.rey asked kriya.

R:do u still intend 2 marry karan?

K:no I wont!i love u hw cn I b his?i thnk I shud stop making a fool ov him n accept the fact.u were my 1st n last love no matter wotever u did.i cn fight the whole wrld 4 u!!

R:I love u kriya ghai

K:I love u 2 reyaansh singhaniya

N they both hugged...

ok guys!done wid part 1!!phew!!updated wid gr8 difficulty!!

em sorry ll update part b smtym later.plx dnt mind..n hope u like it!plus thr z no change ov plan..its just tat em nt a skilled writer n i ve planned many twists n turns in this ff bt wen i start writing them,they dnt seem 2 b tame on print so thr r sme flaws left!if u find sme u cn help me sort it out so i cn b a gud writer..n sorry 4 tat in advance!!

PART 39(B)-pg 76

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sun

listen...

intially u told ki vicky took him home and now car mein... change that haan

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