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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice update.

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Awesome update dear
Entry of khushi n d dialogue was too gud.. Loved it
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That was a nice update...
Wonder why she is shocked.. Do continue soon 😊

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#322

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cute...
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nice...wondering who was at the door...maybe vv bros...wel thnx 4 d pm...

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Originally posted by: riyashaan
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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Awesome updates guys ( last two ) ...m really sorry I couldn't reply to both of them...But I did loved it

The popcorn thing was hilarious..& both Manvi & Virat pretending to be their. Siblings...awesome

& the way u merged the marriage in between is awesomely penned out...

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Originally posted by: Noiiin
awesome update...I loved it...

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Originally posted by: nobo
Awesome updates guys ( last two ) ...m really sorry I couldn't reply to both of them...But I did loved it
The popcorn thing was hilarious..& both Manvi & Virat pretending to be their. Siblings...awesome
& the way u merged the marriage in between is awesomely penned out...

Continue soon dude...thanks for pm

Thank youu. Awwh its k. Hehe. Np.

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Niha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

Hey guys. Here's chapter 11. Sorry for the delay, I've been really busy and school is also starting soon. Do enjoy reading, do comment and please hit the 'like' button.

Chapter 11

Next morning, everyone was getting ready for Khushi's mehndi and sangeet.
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Khushi wears this:

Jeevika wears this:
Maanvi wears this:

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The whole house was busy with preparations. Suddenly, the door bell rang.
"Maanu, check who's at the door," Jeevika ordered as Maanvi rushed to see who it was. She opened the heavy door and was gobsmacked.
"Tum?" She asks. "Yaha...?"

Meanwhile, Jeevika glances at Maanvi. She had her mouth hanging open like she was dumbstruck; which confused Jeevika even more. What's up with her sister?
Virat coughs. "No hellos?" he says to Maanvi. Viren nudges Virat; telling him to stop with the jokes.
Jeevika gets really confused with Maanvi and decides to see if everything was okay.
"Kya hua?" Jeevika asks, closing Maanvi's gaping mouth. Maanvi's mouth drops down again when Jeevika moves her hands and she look at the guys, signalling to her behen to look.
"Oh... hello," Jeevika says.
"Finally! Someone greets us," Virat says. He then closes Maanvi's mouth. "Don't you know it's rude having your mouth opened like that- especially if your eating."
"Oye! I'm not eating though!" Maanvi protests. "What are you two doing here anyway?"
"We're friends with Arnav..." Viren says, smiling.
"Friends...?" Jeevika repeats confused.
"Best friends," Virat adds with a grin. Maanvi rolls her eyes.

Guests from both sides start sides start to fill in the place. The main room is divided into 2; one side for men and the other for women. Haldi takes place first. Arnav arrives in a white sherwani. Everyone takes turns putting haldi on him, and soon the ceremony ends.
Arnav tries to sneak a peak at Khushi but Virat, Viren and NK catch him.
"Kya hua yaar? Bhaabhi ko dekh nahi sakti kya?" Virat teases.
"Nahi yaar, woh mein... woh mein Anjali dii ko..." Arnav staggers. The three laugh at him.
"Arnav is trying to dekhing at Khushi bhaabhi," NK says.
"Kya?" Viren asks, confused by his language.
"Bro, I think he meant, Arnav is trying to look at Bhaabhi," Virat says.
"Haan," NK nods.
"Don't worry yaar, we'll get pictures of Bhaabhi for you," Virat tells Arnav,
"But how will you get in? The mehndi is only for women," Arnav says.
"Hum sherwani pehen ki joaing..." NK says.
"NK, what are you wearing now if it's not a sherwani...?" Viren asks.
"I', wearing a saree," NK states.
"Sherwani," Arnav corrects.
"That's it!" Virat exclaims.

Viren, Virat and NK eneter the women's side wearing wigs and sarees; covering their faces with the saree. They all walk trying to blend in with the crowd.
"Bhaabhi boht pyaaring lagta hoon," NK states.
"You mean, Bhaabhi bohut pyaari lagta hai," Jeevika corrects.
"I swear I've heard..." Maanvi starts saying. The boys quickly walk away, leaving Maanvi confused. She shakes her head and walks away.
"Mehndi time!" Maanvi announces.
"Make sure you keep the mehndi on for a long time," Jeevika says to khushi.
"The longer, the darker. And the darker, the more loouuvee," Maanvi winks at Khushi. Khushi blushes as she takes a quick glance at the mehndi being applied on both her hands.

"You ready?" Maanvi asks Jeevika. She nods. The two gitls start to dance to 'Mehndi hai rachne wali'
The guys were watching them dance. Viren leaning on to his hand, dreamily looking towards Jeevika. Virat pulls out his phone, filming Maanvi dance whilst laughing.
"Man, look at her dance. It's hilarious," Virat says. Viren smiles still looking at Jeevika.

Meanwhile, NK was walking around in circles. Somehow, he's wig fell off and went onto the floor but also he couldn't see anything. He accidently bumps into someone.
"Oye! Dekh nahi sakti kya tu?" A women complains. Nk was about to walk off when the top half of his saree fell, revealing his face.
"Hailla!" SOmeone gasped.
"Tum yaha kya karrahi ho?"
Jeevika and Maanvi go to see what was happening. They push through the crowd and see NK in a saree.
"Woh... woh... on dono..." NK staggers pointing at Viren and Virat. "Uske idea ta..."
"NK, what are you doing here?" Jeevika asks.
"And in a saree..." Maanvi adds. NK hesitates. Jeevika and Maanvi go up to Virat and Viren who were in sarees and wigs. They unveil the two; both realising who it was in a second. Then they quickly covered their faces again.
"Jeevika beetha?" A women asked.
"Kuch nahi aunty. I'll go get rid of NK," Maanvi quickly replies back before Jeevika could.
"The little crowd of people soon disappears, leaving them alone.
"What are you two doing here?" Jeevika hisses.
"Three," Maanvi corrects.
"Arnav sent us," Virat says.
"We have to get you guys out of here before anyone notices," Jeevika says. THey push Viren and Virat until they were on the Men's side.
"Go, quick!" Maanvi says.
"Wait," Jeevika says. "Where's NK gone?"
They turn around to look for NK. Then they see him scared.
"Hello hi bye bye!" Manora maa exclaims. "Tu yaha kya karrahi hai? Aur saree mein be...?"
"I... I... ta... ta..." NK staggers.
"Chii chii, kaan pakra," Manora maa instructs him. He holds his ears. "Aab pleej yaha se joa!"
"Theek hai... mein joaing," NK says, running into the men's side. Everyone laughs at NK.
"Thanks for saving us. If we got caught then..." Viren says.

"Then we'd be dead," Virat finishes off.
"Haha, I would have loved to see your reactions," Maanvi says. Jeevika nudges her.
"Don't worry about it, it's okay," Jeevika politely says.
"No really, thanks," Viren says.
"Yeah 'really' thanks," Virat sarcastically says. The two then leave, and the girls return back to the mehndi party.

Edited by -Niha- - 13 years ago