Navya Ek Naya Ehsaas- Part 33- Page 101 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for giving us a rocking update.
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really exited to read the next chapter , u r a great writer, hats off
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wow. its so intereting. bt 1 thing i didnt like is tat u didnt give the precap. u r increasing our anxiety.
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simply wow, so excited to read what's gonna happen next.. hope the wait is short..
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sonia why no updates. pls yaar jaldikarona
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Hey Guys,
I have updated Part 10 please read and leave your honest comments and critisisms! 😃😃

Part 10

The fire was circled around near Navya. She slowly moved backwards. Anant was on the other side of Navya. The fire was breaking all obstacles and spitting towards Navya. "Navya!" Anant tried to leap forward towards her. "Anant tum mat aao tume aag lag jayenge!" Navya was crying her eyes out as Anant was on the other side. He looked around for help; he tried to find something that would ease the fire. "Navya tum hilna maat!" Anant tried to get the warm blankets to try and fight the fire. "Ahhh!" Anant burnt his wrist as he was battling the fire. "Anant! Tum theek ho no?" he found some buckets of water and sprayed them over the fire. Navya was literally shaking with fear. Her hands were trembling she was scared for herself but terrified for Anant. Her heartbeat was rising every second as the fire spread towards the other side of the room. Anant crossed over the fire over to Navya and he had another blanket in his arms. Navya gave Anant her hand out to help him cross the fire. "Anant be careful!" she put both her hands out and he gripped on to them. She was still teary just hoping they would get out. Anant was in front of Navya now and he was still holding on to her hands. They looked into each other's eyes and smiled with relief. Anant looked down at their hands and he quickly separated them. He stepped back "Sorry!" Anant wrapped the warm blanket around Navya. "Navya you see that door there! I will kick it and we will run out this blanket will protect you so you won't get burnt!" Navya looked over at Anant and she looked at him, he had nothing. "Anant you also come in this blanket!" Pehla Pyaar played. Anant hesitated a little but then he slowly crept in. Their bare arms touched and they looked at each other. Anant put his arm around her neck and their skin was in contact. Navya felt slightly uncomfortable. The blanket was fully covering them and Anant was trying to keep all the fire out of her face. He was shielding her like her prince charming. Navya was not paying attention to the fire but to Anant. She was lost in her own world. She couldn't take her eyes off him. My heart goes dhin tana plays. Anant was kicking wood and boxes out of the way so he could see the exit. He kept looking down at Navya every few minutes just to see if she was okay. Navya was not looking and she stepped on something. "Ouch!" Anant immediately looked down at her. "Navya tum theek to ho na? Tum ko laga nahin hai na?" Navya's foot was scrapped by a nail. Anant looked down at Navya's foot. "Navya you're foot is bleeding!" she was slowly crying as the pain was increasing in her foot. She didnt say anything and tried to walk but she couldn't. Anant found no solution but to carry her out. He lifted her in his arms wrapping both of them in the blanket. "Anant yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Aap kese hume bhi aur thumara sambal paonge!" Navya was even tenser and her heart beat was racing. She could smell the scent of perfume on her chest. She was watching his eyes. The determination, the courage he had in those hazel eyes was just to kill for. She held his neck tightly. She felt safe in his arms for some reason. They reached the exit and Anant looked at the door. Anant tried to slam the door with his foot. It was quite a strong door. Navya shook at the noises. She hid her face in his chest and Anant was shocked. He didnt say anything and continued. The door opened after a few kicks and he walked out with her safe. "Navya were outside now, dont worry!" Navya shook her head out from his chest. He slowly let her down still gripping onto her hand to give her support for her leg. "Thanks Anant...!" she smiled a little looking at him. Anant put his other hand over her's and smiled "It's okay!" Pehla Pyaar played.

Precap: Deepak finds Navya on the road and shouts at her. Anant hiding behind the shutter away from them watching.

Will Deepak find out about Anant?

Will Navya be able to hide the truth?

Is this the start of something new?

Sorry for the short update was busy with other stuff will try and make the next one extra long! 😃 Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ths was supercute, loved it to d core yar, but precap sounds scary.. n whts d start of new? juz cant wait to read more yar, do continue soon.. n yeah next tym plz extra long 1..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates dear. Waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update Sonia...wowiii lovely cute Anya scene haaan
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wow. amazing. u can bcum a superb story writer.

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