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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

nooo 🤣 not so AN 😛😆 @pra- make it like -AN hug in rajsthan!!! when lights gt off.. n nikki

ran to abhi and just threw herslf on him.. ☺️passionate hug😳☺️
sorry mitzii 😛😆

Oh I think Mitzi is just trying to be funny . From what I know , if I do end up writing smething lke this (though that will never happen) , she would be the first person to throw a chappal on my head 😊.
Cherry , I hope you like how the reunion happens in my style though .😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

@Nikki , thanks my dear .

@Mitzi , aho bhagya hamaar , aapka commentwaa dekh liya , matlab abhi the darkness has receded for you 😛. Good to know you ROTFLed . Waise my ROTFL line was
"Anything that does minimum damage to my intestines and my kitchen". I was grinning like an idiot when writing and thinking of that one .

@jyothi , thanks dear

@ashred , hello there and thank you

@hemvb,ruch,Muni thanks guys

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Cherry , firstly , nice display pic😊.
and secondly , thanks a ton for the comment and I know you had to type it in 3 times. I am genuinely touched my dear . So happy I decided to login to take a short break from the daily grind of my life .
Yes , I dont like Armaan in AN's story , but if they had to show her being forced to choose between him and the man she clearly loved , then I would at least want to make him the person who knows her really well , you know and someone worth giving so much importance too . And by the time I was done writing these parts , I almost started liking him 😛
And yes , the para you quoted , I like it too . It is one of the most heavily revised parts in the whole FF or probably in all my writing so far :))
@bold part , right ? Yes , with Armaan it seems perfectly normal , but with someone else , if I were Nikki , I'd be furious too. Thanks , I'll take those lines as a big compliment😊
Yes Part 20 was written to torture Abhi specifically and have some Abhi Sid interaction . Yes he is mean to his cousin and then realizes it and apologizes . He is like a coconut , bahar se sakht and andar se all mush for the people he cares and loves 😊
And the red lines , aah the blushing and naughty Cherry rises to the fore😛. SHould I say this or not . Oh I'll say it . I know ALL you mean and the next part is my favorite among all the parts of this FF because it has AN in all their moods , with their passion and anger and hesitation and chemistry . OK I'll stop with my yapping . But I seriously like the next part a lot and cant wait to upload it over the weekend.
Thanks Cherry for getting me all worked up with my AN love 😊.
I need to go now . I will try my best to post the update by Friday night . ⭐️ comment

@bold- thank you.. afterall its nikki 😳😆 @underline- you dint have to mention this babe.. as i said i just told you coz i comented late. so shared the thing which made me late in comenting.. otherwise tum bologi this cherry always after my life for an update n when i do she dissapears😆
@red- deffinatly m naughty.. but i wil blush only when you wil give me that update😳😉😆
@green- hayee u making me more restless.. u cant wait to upload and i cant wait to read it😳
noo thank you for giving delicious food.. to hungry AN lover like me 😛😆 🤣
ye friday kub ayegaa
Edited by cherry_an - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Oh I think Mitzi is just trying to be funny . From what I know , if I do end up writing smething lke this (though that will never happen) , she would be the first person to throw a chappal on my head 😊.

Cherry , I hope you like how the reunion happens in my style though .😳

🤣 i know pra i was jus pulling mitziis legs..
pra m sure i am gona love it ☺️😆 mai to abhise AN dream land me chli gyi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
🤗 OMG OMG !! I SO MISSED READING UR FFS PRA..Im sorry abt nt getting able cme here regularly n post comments...😳 hpe u r doin good... god bless. :)) excited 2 read wht is going on wid AN ... thanks for writing baby... u r d only writer left!! and we love youuu!!<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Cherry , Friday aa gaya aur mai bhi 😊. And you actually got me excited to post an update . I was actually looking fwd to it. On a different note , what's with your display pic😕. What is it ?
@Rucha , helllo dear . Long time .
And the FF , padho yaar jab man kare . You know I have no compulsions 😊 . And I am the last AN writer left ...Sigh ...
Edited by pra19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago

pra 🤗

haha it was a spider women in ma dp as ma frnds here in IF..call me spider women 😉😆🤣

coming to the uudate..😳
aww you made my day.🤗.
yest night i got ur pm but couldnt read the part..
but i am glad i couldnt...coz today morn first thing i did was read this part.😳 ☺️
and i totally love and enjoyed it..n m so so happyyy to read this😃

all making up part was extremely passionate..
nikki avoiding him,abhi being injured, nikis concern..abhis restlesness,.their honest confession,

and their making up part.. 😳 all so so purfect.. and just so AN!!!!😳
passionate and full of love..😳😃😃 ☺️☺️

that scene where abhi burnt his fingers reminded me of kitchen scene of abhi in DMG at nikkis place.. their he did this several times ..and then ouch ouch😆his cute expressions wer so so cute..

i always love when abhi pins her to the wall.😳.☺️
and nikki holding his wrist and stopping him is such a sweet and lil wild gesture.😉😳😆.☺️


you knw i really m unable to quote any perticular thing or para coz i love whole update to bits...❤️

but their confession part is ma fav.😳.
how they honestly accptd eachother the way they are..as they always do..😳

coz they love eacother the way they are😳😳 aww love AN evn more day by day ☺️
( whole update is the best but this is extrmly best.. ma fav para) 😳
"Really ? Nikki , is it alright that I can't even promise to you that I will never hurt you again ? "
"I know and I can't promise the same myself . But , I am helpless and I am glad that helplessness exists. I might as well be with you and be hurt sometimes rather than not be with you and be miserable and hurt every time. I love you Abhi . I love you a lot and the past few days that I have spent on my own have only told me that even if I am angry at you , even when I don't feel like seeing you or talking to you , even if I feel that our egos sometimes overshadow everything else there is between us , what it all boils down to is the fact that I , cannot live without you and I don't want to live without you Abhi . "
He would never be able to put a measure on the amount of relief her sentences brought to him and the best part was the sweet realization that not once had she demanded a transformation from him or for that matter offered to change herself . He had earned her complete trust and he knew someday she'd open up to him , let him into the darker corners of her mind and wholeheartedly accept the care and understanding he would have to offer to her . But even if that did not happen , he could not care less . She could not live without him and he could not live without her ...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
hatss off to you pra.. 👏lovely ❤️
coming to makin up part *ahem ahem* 😉😳
i love nikki's *not in the kitchen * statement 😉😆🤣😳 shes sweetipie.. and abhi is so wild😳

i love nikki complaining (mock anger) abt how he can never come up wid new sentense to praise her 😆

this one is ma another fav 😳
"I can't live without you Nikita Modi . Don't even think that I will let you have your way like I did last time . Don't even think that you can run away from me . Hit me , scream at me , do anything , but don't push me away . Your silence and indifference bothers me more than anything else . I may not possess an inherent capacity to understand everything that goes inside your head , but I understand you Nikki and I understand the fact that I would do anything to rid you of whatever it is that is bothering you . So just tell me and just help me understand . "⭐️⭐️
and rest you know exactly how much i loved this update.. ahem ahem..😉 making up part is always the best..but i would love to read more from you so if possible please give continuation of this passionate scene in next part too.. 😳 if u cant give in public..then pls pm me 😉 ROFL
thank u so much for this sweet cute at the same time passnt nd hot update.😳🤗.
waiting to read next one.. eagerly..
thanx for givin me wat i wanted to read since long😉
take care dear
love
-cherry 😳
Edited by cherry_an - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update and thanks or the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry_an

pra 🤗

haha it was a spider women in ma dp as ma frnds here in IF..call me spider women 😉😆🤣

coming to the uudate..😳
aww you made my day.🤗.
yest night i got ur pm but couldnt read the part..
but i am glad i couldnt...coz today morn first thing i did was read this part.😳 ☺️
and i totally love and enjoyed it..n m so so happyyy to read this😃

all making up part was extremely passionate..
nikki avoiding him,abhi being injured, nikis concern..abhis restlesness,.their honest confession,

and their making up part.. 😳 all so so purfect.. and just so AN!!!!😳
passionate and full of love..😳😃😃 ☺️☺️

that scene where abhi burnt his fingers reminded me of kitchen scene of abhi in DMG at nikkis place.. their he did this several times ..and then ouch ouch😆his cute expressions wer so so cute..

i always love when abhi pins her to the wall.😳.☺️
and nikki holding his wrist and stopping him is such a sweet and lil wild gesture
.😉😳😆.☺️


you knw i really m unable to quote any perticular thing or para coz i love whole update to bits...❤️

but their confession part is ma fav.😳.
how they honestly accptd eachother the way they are..as they always do..😳

coz they love eacother the way they are😳😳 aww love AN evn more day by day ☺️
( whole update is the best but this is extrmly best.. ma fav para) 😳
"Really ? Nikki , is it alright that I can't even promise to you that I will never hurt you again ? "
"I know and I can't promise the same myself . But , I am helpless and I am glad that helplessness exists. I might as well be with you and be hurt sometimes rather than not be with you and be miserable and hurt every time. I love you Abhi . I love you a lot and the past few days that I have spent on my own have only told me that even if I am angry at you , even when I don't feel like seeing you or talking to you , even if I feel that our egos sometimes overshadow everything else there is between us , what it all boils down to is the fact that I , cannot live without you and I don't want to live without you Abhi . "
He would never be able to put a measure on the amount of relief her sentences brought to him and the best part was the sweet realization that not once had she demanded a transformation from him or for that matter offered to change herself . He had earned her complete trust and he knew someday she'd open up to him , let him into the darker corners of her mind and wholeheartedly accept the care and understanding he would have to offer to her . But even if that did not happen , he could not care less . She could not live without him and he could not live without her ...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
hatss off to you pra.. 👏lovely ❤️
coming to makin up part *ahem ahem* 😉😳
i love nikki's *not in the kitchen * statement 😉😆🤣😳 shes sweetipie.. and abhi is so wild😳

i love nikki complaining (mock anger) abt how he can never come up wid new sentense to praise her 😆

this one is ma another fav 😳
"I can't live without you Nikita Modi . Don't even think that I will let you have your way like I did last time . Don't even think that you can run away from me . Hit me , scream at me , do anything , but don't push me away . Your silence and indifference bothers me more than anything else . I may not possess an inherent capacity to understand everything that goes inside your head , but I understand you Nikki and I understand the fact that I would do anything to rid you of whatever it is that is bothering you . So just tell me and just help me understand . "⭐️⭐️
and rest you know exactly how much i loved this update.. ahem ahem..😉 making up part is always the best..but i would love to read more from you so if possible please give continuation of this passionate scene in next part too.. 😳 if u cant give in public..then pls pm me 😉 ROFL
thank u so much for this sweet cute at the same time passnt nd hot update.😳🤗.
waiting to read next one.. eagerly..
thanx for givin me wat i wanted to read since long😉
take care dear
love
-cherry 😳

Spiderwoman haa shaayad 😊 , but to me you are definitely are a funny woman .Whenever I will be bogged down by a bad mood and sadness , I will come to this comment and read it and I am pretty sure I will feel better.
It is so amazingly hilarious .I am grinning so much and blushing so much , literally a wrack.
Thanks for the comment and all your observations . Loved reading them
part in bold , that made me blush unintentionally 😊
part in red , haa haa haa , that is so funny , cant stop laughing. "Wild " ... 😃😉
And again , all the passages you quoted are my favorites too and the very essence of AN is that whatever may happen between them and whatever issues may ensue , they still accept each other just the way they are and that is why we love them so much even if they are utterly imaginary .😊 Sigh...
Well this was originally supposed to be the last part , but then I wrote sort of three more episodic parts and they are all , you know with just AN ... together .😊

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