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Posted: 13 years ago
hey! i loved reading this so far...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AshhLuvVirman

Awesome updates..!!!

Sorry for the late reply:(

thank u
dont worry about it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arohi16

hey really sorry for not replying on the updates...i was just too busy...8 hours college and then loads of work...

but i do read your update sregularly...and i loved all the parts!!
just want to say please keep pm-ing me all the updates...because i am not sure if i will be able to reply after every part...
and i sincerely love the story!!

thank u
sure we'll still pm u
ok dw :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nahi-

Amazing update! Jus loving what we planned lool! NK <3


Nahi

xxx

hahaha its gonna be epic. try to update soon, already got a pm asking wen we will be updating

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG I'm so sorry for the late reply . Was really stuck with studies . Finally got some time off and decided to come and read JJ .
Ok for the two parts
You peeps are leaving no stone unturned. I mean Viraj Manvi's pehla pyaar . Jhanvi Manvi's Best Friend ditching Manvi .
But how doesn't Manvi still feel the haunt , I mean Virat and Viraj sound so similiar . But that's just my view .
Loved that twist in their .
Now for the film wala scene 🤣
It was so cute !
Virman throwing Popcorns On Virika - LOL .
Love Manvi teasing Jeevika .
Finally something's cooking in Virika .
Update soon people and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!:) thaaanks!!! and continue soon plis!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

awsum concept just read all d updates in one go nd i liked them do pm me when u update d next


thank you
will do :)

Originally posted by: Labyrinth89

hey! i loved reading this so far...


thank you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: StarStruckLove

OMG I'm so sorry for the late reply . Was really stuck with studies . Finally got some time off and decided to come and read JJ .

Ok for the two parts
You peeps are leaving no stone unturned. I mean Viraj Manvi's pehla pyaar . Jhanvi Manvi's Best Friend ditching Manvi .
But how doesn't Manvi still feel the haunt , I mean Virat and Viraj sound so similiar . But that's just my view .
Loved that twist in their .
Now for the film wala scene 🤣
It was so cute !
Virman throwing Popcorns On Virika - LOL .
Love Manvi teasing Jeevika .
Finally something's cooking in Virika .
Update soon people and thanks for the PM.


Lolz don worry about it. glad that u had time to read it. hope ur studies go on well 😉
haha yup, and there's lots more in store for the future. this is only the begining 😆
pretty bad scenario naa. yaa, me and nahi always get mixed up with those two names now. so eady to accidently say the other 🤣
lol yeah, virman being their usual self, poor virika getting popcorn everywhere😆
nahi will try to update soon, i think she's quite busy so by the end of this week insh'allah
no probz :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweets1126

awesome update!!:) thaaanks!!! and continue soon plis!


thank you :)
Nahi will try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
heeya. sorry for delay. was going to update earlier but had to go to a wedding and a mehndi! here's chapter 10!


Jeevika and Maanvi were standing at the doorstep of their cousin Khushi's house. The girls had been waiting for this day from childhood. They loved weddings especially if it was their own relative. Maanvi was getting impatient now. The girls had been standing at the door for only 5 minutes. At last the door opened for them.
"Jeevika Maanvi!" screamed Khushi as she gave her cousin sisters a tight hug! "What a surprise! I thought you were going to come straight to the engagement."
"Di let's go then. We'll go straight to the engagement." Maanvi said as she began to drag her sister out of the house.
Khushi stopped them as they laughed and sat down. The bride's parents, Shashi and Garima came with the refreshments. Jeevika and Maanvi seeked their blessings.
"Jiju kaise hai?" Maanvi said as she nudged Khushi who immediately blushed. Jeevika smiled.
"Humare Damand ji toh lakhon mein ek hai!" said a voice. Jeevika and Maanvi rushed to Bua-ji and hugged her.
"Haay re Nand Kishore." said Bua-ji and Maanvi together as everyone chuckled.
"Thoda gusse-wala, thoda business-minded par humare sanka devi se hat pyaar karte hain." Bua-ji said as Maanvi and Jeevika "Awwwh"ed.


The girls head towards Khushi's room as Maanvi and Jeevika start unpacking their clothes.
"Khushi ji..." Maanvi said as Jeevika laughed.
"Ji Maanvi jii..." Khushi replied.
"Aapka hone wale pati ki photo di kaye pleeej." Maanvi pleaded as Khushi shook her head.
"You can see him tomorrow." Khushi answered as she folded her clothes.
"Oh come on. Is he that dashing that you can't show him to me?" she teased.
Before Khushi could answer, her phone began to ring. Maanvi snatched the phone from the bed and said, "Laad Governer? Yeh kaun hai?"
Khushi blushed. Maanvi winked at Jeevika.

"Hello Jiju." Maanvi began. "Kya hal chal hai?"
"Erm hello. Who's this?" questioned Khushi's husband to be.
"This is Maanvi Chaudhry. Your future wife's cousin sister." said Maanvi in a posh english accent.
Khushi tried to snatch the phone off and succeeded.
"Arnav ji, Maanvi's always like that." Khushi said as Maanvi stuck her tongue out.
Arnav and Khushi chatted for a long time while Maanvi kept teasing them.

After all that teasing, Garima called Jeevika. All of a sudden, Jeevika's phone started ringing. Maanvi quickly went to see who was calling her sister at 10 o'clock in the night.
"Viren" thought Maanvi to herself. She grinned and picked it up.
"Hello Jeevika." Viren greeted.
"Hi Viren." Maanvi said, trying to put on her sister's voice.
"I just wanted to ask you..." said Viren before he was interrupted by his brother. They were whispering to each other. On the other hand, Maanvi was trying to guess what they were saying.
"Maanvi, what the hell ar..?" Khushi whispered while Maanvi put her fingers to her lips. She put it on speaker mode and waited for Viren to speak.
"Jeevika, I wanted to say that ILY!" Viren confessed.
"ILY? Yeh kya hota hai?" Maanvi muttered. She clamped her hands to her mouth. Maanvi had just spoken in her voice.
"Great." she thought. "I'm dead."
"Dedh futiya, how can you not know what ily means? I mean you lived in London." he said.
"VIRAT?" Maanvi shouted.
"Oh whoops." Virat mumbled.
"How dare you pretend to be Jiju?" Maanvi asked angrily.
"And how dare you pretend to be Bhabhi?" Virat answered back.
"I know what ily means. Does Jiju really...?" she questioned.
"Naah. But I think so. Well hope so. Gtg." Virat said as he hung up.

Maanvi smiled. She wanted her sister and Viren to get together desperately and she knew that Virat wanted the same.
"What the hell is happening?" Khushi asked, confused.
"OMG, Khushi said What the? Haawww! Arnav.." Maanvi winked. "Basically we, as in me and Virat want Di and Viren to get together. And for that...we have a plan!"
Maanvi explained everything to Khushi. *Hua Kya Hua BG tune is playing*


Today was Khushi's engagement. She was wearing a pink and white lehnga which was studded with tiny diamonds.
Maanvi and Jeevika lead Khushi downstairs. All eyes were on her. Arnav was standing at the bottom of the staircase, smiling.
Everyone was whispering to each other saying things like "OMG, Arnav is smiling for the first time" "They make a perfect couple"
Arnav Singh Raizada held Khushi's hand as they walked to stage and waited for the rings to come. Eventually they exchanged the rings as everyone applauded.

Later on, the girls were deciding the dress code for the sangeet.
"Erm I think red." Khushi said as the sisters shook their head.
"How about..." Jeevika started and then smiled. "Mannu, tu decide kar. Aakhir tu fashion designer hai."
"Pink for us and white for Khushi?" Maanvi suggested.
"Perfect!" chorused Khushi and Jeevika as they had a trio hug!


Next morning, everyone was getting ready for Khushi's mehndi and sangeet. The whole house was busy with the preparations. Suddenly the door bell rang.
"Mannu, check who's at the door." Jeevika ordered as Maanvi rushed to see who it was. She opened the heavy doors and was gobsmacked!


Was writing this in a rush. Sorry it's not that long! Please like and comment!

Nahi

xxx


Edited by -Nahi- - 13 years ago

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