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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter Two

A Secret Unraveled...


No Khushi! Dont you dare!

Don't even think about it, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada!


Yes dare...


No Khushi listen, let's make a dea...


But before he could complete his sentence her fingers will all over him poking him and tickling him.

Out of the hundred secrets that Arnav Singh Raizada kept, there was one he pledged to take to his grave and beyond! No one could ever be privy to this one little secret!


The great ASR was ticklish!


Amidst various giggles he tried to hold her hands to stop her onslaught.

Wait hold it there! The stone faced, cold hearted ASR was giggling like a girl! No, No what the- way, lets call it laughing.

As various giggles; ahem... Laughter wracked his body; he tried to strike a deal with the beautiful devil.


Kh.. Khus... Khushi list..en. Ffine. Keep it. Juss.. Just stop.


She stood over him with hands on her hips and a victory smirk etched on her face. Any other time he would have loved to see this smile but right now he was having trouble catching his breath!

He doubled over, holding his sides cursing under his breath.

She walked out of the room with the photograph and a huge "Di" call.


Shit! She called Di! What if she told Di!


He looked skyward and mumbled, "Just this one thing. The one thing that nobody could ever know and now she does." That little, annoying, devil of a person and his wife, Kushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada knew! Therefore, the whole world would now know!


He needed leverage to shut her up and fast!


*****

Another part of RM


Di, what are you doing here? You should rest.


Woh, Khushiji. I wanted to have Jalebis!


Jalebis! I'll make them Di.


*****

Phew! Quick thinking!


He stood outside the kitchen listening to the easy banter of his wife and Di on far away topics and sighed.


A while earlier

He had intercepted his Di near his Nani's room before her.


"Di, where can I get good Jalebis from?"


"You fought with her again Chote?"


"No Di its not like that. She wants them."


"Its ok, Chote. I'll make them. I feel like having them too."


"But Di, in this condition."


"I'm pregnant not ill Chote. Relax."

That went better than I thought!


*****

In the kitchen


"Khushiji, where did you find this?" Anjali picked up a worn out photo from the kitchen top and smiled.


"I was helping Hariprakashji in cleaning the store room. I found it in a cupboard there."


"He was so cute and fat but still grumpy."
a giggling Khushi remarked.


"Chote has always been like that. Akdu! He doesn't even get tickled Khushiji."


"Di, he does get-"


"KHUSHI! Payal is calling you!" a flustered Arnav entered the kitchen with a huff.


Phew! That was close! He raised his eyes skywards the second time in an hour and mumbled, "Seriously!"


"Di, I'll take you to your room and ask HP to get you the jalebis there!"

*****

"Hi Khushi!" he greeted her in his soft husky voice, his lips near her ear.


"Eeaaahhh..."


The juice she had volunteered to deliver to Mamiji's room now lay in a puddle around the dressing table and in her favourite make up box.


"Hai Devi Mayya yeh kya hogaya" and Arnav Singh Raizada smirked. Here was the leverage. If you cant find one, make one. Amen!


"Khushi! Kya kiya tumne? Mamiji ka makeup kit pe juice gira diya! It was so expensive main Italy se laaya tha!"


"Humme maaf kardijiye Arnavji! Humne jaan bujke nahi kiya. Woh aap aise aaye to hum dar gaye."


He dragged her out of the room and into his room while she bit on her nails.


"Khushi jo hua so hua. Now let's make a deal. Kisine tumhe waha nahin dekha except me so don't worry. Main kisiko nahi bataunga but..."


"Aap kitne acche hai Arnavji."


"I am not done Khushi. Main kisi ko nahi bataunga agar tum kisi ko nahi bataogi!"

"Kya nahi batayenge?"
she scrunched her eyebrows in confusion.


"Don't act smart Khushi. Don't tell anyone that I can get tickled especially Di and give me the photograph."


"Nahi hum aapko woh photo nahi denge par hum kisi ko nahi batayenge. Please Arnavji. Humein woh photo chahiye. Aap kitne cute lag rahe ho, woh bhi bina kapdo ke!" she had thrown the last few words just to irk him.


Had she realized the implications of her words she wouldn't have been Khushi Kumar Gupta Singh Raizada.

"Oh. You think I look good without clothes, Khushi?"
he raised an eyebrow a tiny smirk on his face.


"Ah... Haan iss photo mein aap kitne acche lag rahe hai."


"Khushi waise mein abhi bhi itna bura nahi dikhta kyun?"
in one swift motion he plucked the waist coat buttons and discarded it.


"Kapdo ke binna..." he added for her benefit. He just pulled at his tie, smirk still intact.


"Aa..Aap yeh kya kar rahe hai?" he chose not to reply and unbuttoned the top two buttons of his shirt.


"Kapde uthar raha hu. Tumhe mein binna kapdo ke accha lagta hu na?" he made a move to open the remaining buttons of the shirt but she caught his hand.


"Hai Devi Mayya! Humne aise kab kaha?"


"Abhi Abhi Khushi."


"Humara matlab woh nahi tha! Hum to iss tasveer ki baat kar rahe the!"


"Toh tum aab yeh keh rahi ho ki mein ab accha nahi lagta?"

"Humne aise thodi na kaha hai."

"Toh tum yeh keh rahi ho ki main accha dikhta hoon"


"Hey Devi Mayya!" she bit on her lower lip in confusion.


"Khushi tumhare gaal pure laal ho gaye. Baad mein sochke batana." he kissed her on the cheek, flicked her cute red button nose and made his way to the bathroom, a smirk on his face but not without a second glance at a dumbstruck and blushing Khushi.


She stood there transfixed a hand on her kissed cheek and mouth open in a perfect O as her face turned from tomato to beet root red.


*****
I really really hope you like it. I am not the funny writer kind of a person but I don't want to start with the difficult part just yet. probably in the next chapter or later.
So, please let me know what you think!
Good, bad, worst. stick to hard writing??😕

Devilways

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

English translation

Chapter Two

A Secret Unraveled...


No Khushi! Dont you dare!

Don't even think about it, Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada!


Yes dare...


No Khushi listen, let's make a dea...


But before he could complete his sentence her fingers will all over him poking him and tickling him.

Out of the hundred secrets that Arnav Singh Raizada kept, there was one he pledged to take to his grave and beyond! No one could ever be privy to this one little secret!


The great ASR was ticklish!


Amidst various giggles he tried to hold her hands to stop her onslaught.

Wait hold it there! The stone faced, cold hearted ASR was giggling like a girl! No, No what the- way, lets call it laughing.

As various giggles; ahem... Laughter wracked his body; he tried to strike a deal with the beautiful devil.


Kh.. Khus... Khushi list..en. Ffine. Keep it. Juss.. Just stop.


She stood over him with hands on her hips and a victory smirk etched on her face. Any other time he would have loved to see this smile but right now he was having trouble catching his breath!

He doubled over, holding his sides cursing under his breath.

She walked out of the room with the photograph and a huge "Di" call.


Shit! She called Di! What if she told Di!


He looked skyward and mumbled, "Just this one thing. The one thing that nobody could ever know and now she does." That little, annoying, devil of a person and his wife, Kushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada knew! Therefore, the whole world would now know!


He needed leverage to shut her up and fast!


*****

Another part of RM


Di, what are you doing here? You should rest.


Woh, Khushiji. I wanted to have Jalebis!


Jalebis! I'll make them Di.


*****

Phew! Quick thinking!


He stood outside the kitchen listening to the easy banter of his wife and Di on far away topics and sighed.


A while earlier

He had intercepted his Di near his Nani's room before her.


"Di, where can I get good Jalebis from?"


"You fought with her again Chote?"


"No Di its not like that. She wants them."


"Its ok, Chote. I'll make them. I feel like having them too."


"But Di, in this condition."


"I'm pregnant not ill Chote. Relax."

That went better than I thought!


*****

In the kitchen


"Khushiji, where did you find this?" Anjali picked up a worn out photo from the kitchen top and smiled.


"I was helping Hariprakashji in cleaning the store room. I found it in a cupboard there."


"He was so cute and fat but still grumpy."
a giggling Khushi remarked.


"Chote has always been like that. Akdu! He doesn't even get tickled Khushiji."


"Di, he does get-"


"KHUSHI! Payal is calling you!" a flustered Arnav entered the kitchen with a huff.


Phew! That was close! He raised his eyes skywards the second time in an hour and mumbled, "Seriously!"


"Di, I'll take you to your room and ask HP to get you the jalebis there!"

*****

"Hi Khushi!" he greeted her in his soft husky voice, his lips near her ear.


"Eeaaahhh..."


The juice she had volunteered to deliver to Mamiji's room now lay in a puddle around the dressing table and in her favourite make up box.


"Oh Devi Mayya what have I done?" and Arnav Singh Raizada smirked. Here was the leverage. If you cant find one, make one. Amen!


"Khushi! What have you done Khushi! You spilt juice on Mamiji's make up kit. It was so expensive and I had bought it for her from Italy!"


"I am so sorry Arnavji. It was a mistake, I just got startled."


He dragged her out of the room and into his room while she bit on her nails.


"Khushi let it go. Now let's make a deal. Since no one saw you there except for me don't worry. I will not mention it to anyone but..."



"You are so nice Arnavji."


"I am not done Khushi. I will not tell anyone provided you don't tell on me!"

"What?"
she scrunched her eyebrows in confusion.


"Don't act smart Khushi. Don't tell anyone that I can get tickled especially Di and give me the photograph."


"No! I will not give you the photograph but I will not mention it to anyone if you like. Please Arnavji let me keep the photo. You look so cute in the photograph, naked!" she had thrown the last few words just to irk him.


Had she realized the implications of her words she wouldn't have been Khushi Kumar Gupta Singh Raizada.

"Oh. You think I look good without clothes, Khushi?"
he raised an eyebrow a tiny smirk on his face.


"Ah... Yes in that photo you do look good."


"I look good right now aswell, don't you thinkKhushi?"
in one swift motion he plucked the waist coat buttons and discarded it.


"Without clothes..." he added for her benefit. He just pulled at his tie, smirk still intact.


"Y..You what are you doing?" he chose not to reply and unbuttoned the top two buttons of his shirt.


"Stripping Khushi. You like to see me naked right!" he made a move to open the remaining buttons of the shirt but she caught his hand.


"Oh Devi Mayya! When did I say that?"


"Just a while ago Khushi."


"I didn't mean it like that! I was talking about the photo!"


"You mean to say I don't look nice?"

"I didn't say that."

"So you mean to say I look good."


"Hey Devi Mayya!" she bit on her lower lip in confusion.


"Khushi your cheeks have turned red. Think about it and tell me later on." he kissed her on the cheek, flicked her cute red button nose and made his way to the bathroom, a smirk on his face but not without a second glance at a dumbstruck and blushing Khushi.


She stood there transfixed a hand on her kissed cheek and mouth open in a perfect O as her face turned from tomato to beet root red.


*****
I really really hope you like it. I am not the funny writer kind of a person but I don't want to start with the difficult part just yet. probably in the next chapter or later.
So, please let me know what you think!
Good, bad, worst. stick to hard writing??😕

Devilways
Edited by Devilways - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Aww Awesome update 😃 Love it 😃

"The stone faced, cold hearted ASR was giggling like a girl! No, No what the- way, lets call it laughing. " heehehehehheee

I love that sentence and there are lot more but i'm not going to post them right here 😃 because then i'll make another update of yours and reader's might get confused then 😆 😆

Really awesome update =) Love the way you have written it =) =)

And OMG I"M first Yipeee =) =) =)

Continue soon =) =)


Edited by ipkkndank - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
aaaw..that was such a cutie mushi chapter...
i loved it sooo much
an ASR aur ticklish...thts tooo gud!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
I love it!!!
can sooo imagine arnav and khushi in this situation!!
damn funny continue please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Awesome update loved it
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seriously... I loved both d parts!! It has got every element to entertain. N Tom n Jerry's nok jhok ismind blowing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Awww it was such a cute update...arnav laughing his head off and then making Khushi blush,it was so lovely and u know what I could imagined them in this situation as well bcz u wrote it so brilliantly...can't wait for the next part and plz try to update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute chapter.. The great ASR is ticklish..
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awww this was so cute
loved the tickling part😆
thanx for the pm
continue soon

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