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ah haaa thnx for continuing n 4 stodry so far
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When Pranavi came into the room, and sat down in the chair vacated by Pia, Anand Walia for some reason found annoying. She fixed a limpid gaze on him and waited for his questions.
Miss Pia had tactfully left the room.

"Please tell me about last night. Miss Pranavi."
"Last night?" murmured Pranavi with a blank stare. "Oh, we all slept like logs. Reaction, I suppose."
"I mean last night from six o'clock onwards."
"Oh, I see. Well, a lot of tiresome people came -"
"They were?"
She gave him another limpid stare. "Don't you know all this already?"
"I'm asking the questions, Miss Pranavi," said Anand Walia pleasantly.
"My mistake. I always find repetitions so dreary. Apparently you don't... Well, there was Mr. & Mrs. Varma, Miss Sunidhi & Suhasi Kaur, Mrs. Sanskriti Vaatsalya, and Mrs. Aarti and Mr. Anmol Vasist. They arrived in that order, and if you want to know what they said - they all said the same things in turn. 'I see you've got your central heating on' and 'What lovely flowers!'"

Anand Walia laughed. The mimicry was good.
"The exception was Mrs. Aarti. She asked straight out when the murder was going to happen? It embarrassed everybody because they'd all been pretending they'd dropped in by chance. Aunt Pia said in her dry way that it was due to happen quite soon. And then that clock striked and just as it finished, the lights went out, the door was flung open and a masked figure said, 'Stick 'em up, guys,' or something like that. It was exactly like a bad film. Really quite ridiculous. And then he fired two shots at Aunt Pia and suddenly it wasn't ridiculous any more."

"Where was everybody when this happened?"
"When the lights went out? Well, just standing about, you know. Mrs. Sanskriti was sitting on the sofa, Miss Sunidhi was in front of the fireplace."
"You were all in this room, or the far room?"
"Mostly, I think, in this room. Prateek had gone to get something. I don't remember. I think Mr. Suraj went after him, but I don't really know. We were - well -as I said, just standing about."
"Where were you yourself?"
"I think I was over by the window. Aunt Pia I don't remember may be near the arch way."
"The man had a powerful torch. What did he do with it?"
"Well, he shone it on us. Horribly dazzling. It just made you blink."
"I want you to answer this very carefully, Miss Pranavi. Did he hold the torch steady, or did he move it about?"
Pranavi considered. Her manner was now definitely less weary.
"He moved it," she said slowly. "Like a spotlight in a dance hall. It was full in my eyes and then it went on round the room and then the shots came. Two shots."
"And then?"
"He whirled round - and Maya began to scream like a siren from somewhere and his torch went out and there was another shot. And then the door closed. It does, you know, slowly, with a whining noise and there we were all in the dark, not knowing what to do, and poor Bunny squealing like a rabbit and Maya going all out across the hall."
"Would it be your opinion that the man shot himself deliberately, or do you think he stumbled and the revolver went off accidentally?"
"I haven't the faintest idea. The whole thing was so stagy. Actually I thought it was still some silly joke - until I saw the blood from aunt Pia's ear. But even if you were actually going to fire a revolver to make the thing more real, you'd be careful to fire it well above someone's head, wouldn't you?"
"You would indeed. Do you think he could see clearly who he was firing at? I mean, was Miss Pia clearly outlined in the light of the torch?"

"I've no idea. I wasn't looking at her. I was looking at the man."
"What I'm getting at is - do you think the man was deliberately aiming at her - at her in particular, I mean?"
Pranavi seemed a little startled by the idea.
"You mean deliberately picking on Aunt Pia? Oh, I shouldn't think so... After all, if he wanted to take a pot shot at Aunt Pia, there would be heaps of more suitable opportunities. There would be no point in collecting all the friends and neighbours just to make it more difficult. He could have shot her from behind a hedge in the good old fashion any day of the week, and probably got away with it."
And that, thought Anand Walia, was a very complete reply to Mrs. Bharti's suggestion of a deliberate attack on Pia. He said with a sigh, "Thank you, Miss Pranavi. I'd better go and see Maya now."

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Anand Walia, with Ayush in attendance, found Maya in the kitchen. She was preparing something and looked up suspiciously as he entered.
"What do you come in my kitchen for, Mr. Policeman? You are police, yes? Always, there is persecution - ah! I should be used to it by now. It is just the same. You come to torture me, yes, to make me say things, but I shall say nothing. You will tear off my fingernails, and put lighted matches on my skin - oh, yes, and worse than that. But I will not speak, do you hear? I shall say nothing. And you will send me away to a concentration camp, and I shall not care."

Anand Walia looked at her thoughtfully, selecting what was likely to be the best method of attack. Finally he sighed and said: "O.K. then, you need to come with us."
"What is that you say?" Maya looked startled.
"Come along. I haven't got my nail-pulling apparatus and the rest of the bag of tricks with me. We keep all that down at the station. Got the handcuffs handy, Ayush?"
"Sir!" said Ayush with appreciation.
"But I do not want to come," screeched Maya, backing away from him.
"Then you'll answer civil questions civilly. If you like, you can have a solicitor present."
"A lawyer? I do not like a lawyer. I do not want a lawyer." She dusted her hands on a cloth and sat down.
"What do you want to know?" she asked sulkily.
"I want your account of what happened here last night."
"You know very well what happened."
"I want your account of it."
"I tried to go away. Did she tell you that? When I saw that in the paper saying about murder. I wanted to go away. She would not let me. She is very hard - not at all sympathetic. She made me stay. But I knew what would happen. I knew I should be murdered."
"Well, you weren't murdered, were you?"
"No," admitted Maya grudgingly.
"Come now, tell me what happened."

"I was nervous. Oh, I was nervous. All that evening. I hear things. People moving about. Once I think someone is in the hall moving stealthily - but it is only that Mrs. Sameera coming in through the side door."
"I take the snacks and the glasses, and the little pastries that I have made so nice into the drawing-room. Then the bell rings and I answer the door. Again and again I answer the door. It is degrading - but I do it. And then I go back into the kitchen and started cleaning putting the knife handy, because if someone comes to kill me, I have there close at hand the big carving knife, all sharp."

"Very foresighted of you."
"And then, suddenly - I hear shots. I think: 'It has come - it is happening.' I run through the dining-room - the other door - it will not open. I stand a moment to listen and then there comes another shot and a big thud, out there in the hall, and I turn the door handle, but it is locked outside. I am shut in there like a rat in a trap. And I go mad with fear. I scream and I scream and I beat upon the door. And at last they turn the key and let me out. And then I bring candles, many many candles - and the lights go on, and I see blood! It is not the first time I have seen blood. My little brother - I see him killed before my eyes - I see blood in the street - people shot, dying - I -"

"Yes," said Inspector Anand Walia. "Thank you very much."
"And now," said Maya dramatically, "you can arrest me and take me to prison!"
"Not today," said Anand Walia.

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As Anand Walia and Ayush went through the hall to the front door it was flung open and a tall handsome young man almost collided with them. "Police," cried the young man.
"Mr. Prateek?"
"Quite right, Inspector. You're the Inspector, aren't you, and the other's the ACP?"
"You are quite right, Mr. Prateek. Can I have a word with you, please?"
"I am innocent, Inspector. I swear I am innocent."
"Now then, Mr. Prateek, don't play the fool. I've many other people to see and I don't want to waste time. What's this room? Can we go in here?"
"It's the so-called study - but nobody studies."
"I was told that you were studying?" said Anand Walia.
"I found I couldn't concentrate, so I came home."
In a businesslike manner Anand Walia demanded full name, age, details.
"And now, Mr. Prateek, will you describe what happened last night?"

"We killed the calf, Mr. Walia. That is, Maya set her hand to making pastries. Aunt Pia opened a new bottle of wine -"
Anand Walia interrupted. "A new bottle? Was there an old one?"
"Yes. Half full. But Aunt Pia didn't seem to fancy it."
"Was she nervous, then?"
"Oh, not really. She's extremely sensible. It was old Bunny, I think, who had put the wind up her - prophesying disaster all day."
"Mrs. Bharti was definitely apprehensive, then?"
"Oh, yes, she enjoyed herself thoroughly."
"She took the advertisement seriously?"
"It scared her into fits."
"Miss Pia seems to have thought, when she first read that advertisement, that you had something to do with it. Why was that?"
"Ah, sure, I get blamed for everything round here!"
"You didn't have anything to do with it, did you, Mr. Prateek?"
"Me? Never in the world."
"Had you ever seen or spoken to this Subash?"
"Never seen him in my life."
"It was the kind of joke you might have played, though?"
"Who's been telling you that? Just because I once made some silly and funny thing to them?

"Just give me your account of what happened."
"I'd just gone into the small drawing-room to fetch the drinks when, the lights went out. I turned round and there's a fellow standing in the doorway saying, 'Stick your hands up,' and everybody gasping and squealing, and just when I'm thinking - can I rush him? he starts firing a revolver and then crash down he goes and his torch goes out and we're in the dark again, and Mr. Suraj starts shouting orders in his voice. 'Lights,' he says."
"Did it seem to you that the intruder was definitely aiming at Miss Pia?"
"Ah, how could I tell? I should say he just loosed off his revolver for the fun of the thing - and then found, maybe, he'd gone too far."
"And shot himself?"
"It could be. When I saw the face of him, he looked like the kind of little thief who might easily lose his nerve."
"And you're sure you had never seen him before?"
"Never."
"Thank you, Mr. Prateek. I shall want to interview the other people who were here last night. Which would be the best order in which to take them?"
"Well, the Vasist's are the nearest. After that, our Sameera - works at the boutique near by just opposite to this street. Anyone will tell you."
Both Mr. Walia n Ayush left from there...


Edited by swethasyam08 - 12 years ago
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Really interesting:-) nice part:-) read the entire thing:-) continue soon:-)
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great that you updated at last
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Awesome Chapter Swetha, Looks really interesting. Looking forward for the next one! :)

Great Writing Skills! 😃
-Ridz

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interesting swetha..really very interesting..👏
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@ swetha :

yipeee🥳 !! finally the update is here !! and what an update ..loved the way the entire investigation proceeded from Pranavi to Maya and then to Prateik 👏..each of them three entirely different characters in themselves, yes maya seems like having a bad past that made her a bit " khishka-hua " kind of person. about prateik, i was actually smiling at his way of answering😊 ..lag hi nahi raha tha that he was talking to some police personnel.
update soon. 😊
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ACP Anand n Ayush reached to the Boutique of Sameera. A middle aged shabby looked lady came and asked them "R u here for Mrs. Sameera?" Ayush nodded. "U can find her in the back yard of the garden." She showed them the way.

When ACP Anand found Sameera, whose face flushed, and her hair untying, stood looking at him in a startled fashion.

"Good morning, Mrs. Sameera. I'm sorry if we startled you. I'm ACP Anand n this is SI Ayush. I wanted to have a word with you."

"I think it's reg. last night incident. Will it take long? Shall we -" ACP Anand indicated a fallen tree trunk.

"It's just for the record. You came in from work at what time last night? And which door did u use to enter?"

"At about half-past five. I entered from the side door as always. I'm in rather a mucky state sometimes."

"The door was unlocked?"

"Yes. During the summer it's usually wide open. This time of the year it's shut but not locked. We all go out and in a good deal that way. I locked it when I came in."

"What did you do when you came in?"

"Kicked off my muddy footwear and went upstairs and had a bath and changed. Then I came down and found that a kind of party was in progress. I hadn't known anything about this funny advertisement until then."

"Now please describe just what occurred when the incident happened."

"Well, the lights went out suddenly. I was by the mantelpiece. I was searching for a candle which I thought I had put down there. Then the door flung open and this man showed a torch on us and hold a revolver and told us to put our hands up. But I didn't, actually. I thought it was just fun, and I was tired and I didn't think I needed really to put them up."

"In fact you were bored by the whole thing?"

"I was, rather. And then the revolver went off. The shots sounded horrifying and I was really frightened. The torch went whirling round and dropped and went out, and then Maya started screaming."

"Did you find the torch very dazzling?"

"No, not particularly. It was quite a strong one, though. It lit up Mrs. Bharti for a moment and she looked quite like a ghost - you know, all white and staring with her mouth open and her eyes popped out. I should say. It was all confusion. Anmol and Prateek switched on their lighters and they went out into the hall and we followed, and someone opened the dining room door. The lights hadn't fused there and Anmol gave Maya a terrific slap on the cheek and brought her out of her screaming, and after that it wasn't so bad."

"You saw the body of the dead man? Was he known to you or had you ever seen him before? And what's ur opinion on his death - accidental or deliberate?"

"Yes I saw the body but never seen him. I haven't the faintest idea how he was dead."

"One more thing, you haven't any valuable jewellery - Rings, bracelets, anything of that kind?"

"My engagement ring n a couple of ear rings."

"Thank you, Mrs. Sameera."


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Vasist's Place

"It was dreadful," said Mrs. Aarti happily. "Quite - quite - dreadful, and what I say is that they ought to be far more careful what advertisements they accept at the Local News paper office. At the time, when I read it, I thought it was very odd. I said so, didn't I, Anmol?"

"Do you remember just what you were doing when the lights went out, Mrs. Aarti?" asked Ayush.

"All standing about and wondering what was going to happen. And then, you know, the thrill when it suddenly went pitch black. And the door opening - just a dim figure standing there with a revolver and that blinding light and a menacing voice saying 'Your money or your life!' Oh, I've never enjoyed anything so much. And then a minute later, of course, it was all dreadful. Real bullets, just whistling past our cars! It must have been just like the Commandos in the war."

"Were you standing or sitting at the time, Mrs. Aarti?"

"Now let me see, where was I? Who was I talking to, Anmol?"

"I really haven't the least idea, Mom."

"Was it Miss Sunidhi or was it Mrs. Sanskriti? I think I was just talking to Mr. Suraj."

"You don't remember if you were sitting or standing?"

"Does it really matter, Inspector? I was somewhere over by the window or near the mantel piece because I know I was quite near the clock when it struck. It was such a thrilling moment. I was waiting to see if anything might be going to happen."

"You describe the light from the torch as blinding. Was it turned full on to you?"

"It was right in my eyes. I couldn't see a thing."

"Did the man hold it still, or did he move it about, from person to person?"

"Oh, I don't really know. Which did he do, Anmol?"

"It moved rather slowly over us all, so as to see what we were all doing, I suppose, in case we should try and rush him."

"And where exactly in the room were you, Mr. Anmol?"

"I'd been talking to Pranavi. We were standing in the middle of the long room. Sameera was over by that far mantelpiece. I think she was looking for something."

"Have you any idea as to whether the third shot was suicide or an accident?"

"I've no idea at all. The man seemed to crumple up and fall - but it was all very confused. You must realize that you couldn't really see anything. And then Maya started yelling at the place down."

"I understand it was you who unlocked the dining-room door and let her out? The door was definitely locked on the outside?"

Anmol looked at him curiously. "Yes! Certainly it was. Why, you don't imagine -"

"I just like to get my facts quite clear. Thank you, Mr. Anmol."


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Varma's Place

ACP Anand n Ayush reached to Varma's Place. He had to listen to a long speech on the psychological aspect of the case.

"The psychological approach - that's the only thing nowadays," Mr. Suraj told them. "You've got to understand your criminal. Now the whole thing is simple. Why does this fellow put that advert in? He wants to advertise himself - to focus attention on himself. A girl has turned him down, perhaps. He wants to get her attention on him. Very well, he will be a tough guy and he learns all from movies. Robbery with violence, a mask, a revolver. But he wants audience too. So he arranges for an audience. And then he's more than a burglar. He's a killer. He shoots - blindly -"

ACP Anand caught gladly at a word: "You say 'blindly,' Mr. Suraj. You didn't think that he was firing deliberately at one particular object - at Miss Pia, that is to say?"

"No, no. He just did it off, as I say, blindly. And that's what brought him to himself. The bullet hit someone. And so he panics and turns the revolver on himself ."

Mr. Suraj cleared his throat appreciatively.

"It really is wonderful," said Mrs. Supriya, "the way you know exactly what happened, Suraj."

Her voice was warm with admiration. ACP Anand thought it was wonderful, too, but he was not quite so warmly appreciative.

"Exactly where were you in the room, Mr. Suraj, when the actual shooting business took place?"

"I was standing with my wife - near a centre table with some flowers on it."

"I caught hold of your arm, didn't I, Suraj, when it happened? I was simply scared to death. I just had to hold on to you."

Mr. Suraj nodded and ACP Anand n Ayush took a leave from them.


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Kaur's Place

ACP Anand n Ayush rached to Kaur's place.

Sunidhi welcomed them warmly. "Well! I hadn't the least idea who the man was. Never seen him anywhere in the."

ACP Anand proceeded with his inquiries. "Where were you exactly when the incident took place?"

"I think I was near the Mantel piece. Sameera too was there. replied Miss Sunidhi promptly.

"Do you think that the shots were fired blindly, or aimed carefully at one particular person?"

"You mean aimed at Pia? Its difficult to say. All I know is the lights went out, and that torch went whirling round dazzling us all, and then the shots were fired and I thought to myself, 'If that damned young fool Prateek is playing his jokes with a loaded revolver somebody will get hurt.'"

"You thought it was Prateek?"

"Well, it seemed likely. Anmol is intellectual and doesn't care for such cheap play, and old Mr. Suraj wouldn't think that sort of funny thing. But Prateek is a wild boy."

"Did your sister think it might be Prateek?"

"Suhasi? You'd better talk to her yourself. Not that you'll get any sense out of her."

Miss Sunidhi raised her voice and called her sister "Suha..."

"Coming..." responded back a thin cry.

"Hurry up its Police." Miss Suhasi arrived quickly.

"Is it CID?" she asked breathlessly. "I'd no idea. Or I wouldn't have been in the garden."

"I'm ACP Anand n he is SI Ayush."

"Well, that's very nice " said Miss Suhasi. "Have you found any clues?"

"Where were you at the time of the crime, that's what he wants to know, Suha?" said Miss Sunidhi.

"Oh, dear," gasped Miss Suhasi. "Let me see, I was just with everybody else."

"You weren't with me?" said Miss Sunidhi.

"Oh, dear, Di, wasn't I? No, of course, I'd been admiring the flowers. And then it all happened and all so awkward in the dark, and that dreadful screaming. I thought Maya was being murdered. I didn't even know there was a man. It was really just a voice, you know, saying, 'Put them up, please. It's so terrible to think that until Maya started screaming I was actually enjoying myself. Only being in the dark was very awkward. Is there anything more you want to know, Inspector?"

"No," said ACP Anand.

"I'm sure, Di," said Miss Suhasi, "that I'm only willing to say anything I can."

As they watched ACP Anand and Ayush leave, Suhasi said breathlessly: "Oh, Di, was I very awful?"

"Not at all." Miss Sunidhi smiled. "On the whole, I should say you did very well."


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Vaatsalya's Place

Sanskriti welcomed ACP Anand n Ayush with a big smile.

"I will try my best to help u in this regard sir."

"Thank u Mrs. Sanskriti. Just say what all u saw and where were u then?"

"I was beside Mrs. Bharti. Oh, my goodness. I was scared. There was plenty to hear in that dark. Doors opening and shutting, and people saying silly things and gasping and old Maya screaming like a steam engine - and poor Bunny squealing like a trapped rabbit. And everyone pushing and falling over everyone else. However, when there really didn't seem to be any more bangs coming, everyone was out in the hall with candles. And then the lights came on and suddenly it was all as usual I mean we were ourselves again."

"I think I know what you mean, Mrs. Sanskriti."

Mrs. Sanskriti smiled at him. "And there he was," she said. "All pink and surprised looking - lying there dead - with a revolver beside him. It didn't seem to make sense, somehow."

It did not make sense to ACP, either... The whole business worried him. They both left from there...

Edited by swethasyam08 - 12 years ago
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Looks like everyone has different opinions of the murder. Are the flowers important??? This mystery is definately intriguing. Pl do update soon:-)
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another great part Sweths.. FF becoming really interesting! anyway, update soon :))

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