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Guys im WRITING the next bit please dont comment because i might post it but might have to edit it so dont check it out yet! thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very good 😊
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Rajpreet Ka Milan

Preeto and Sonia have already arrived at the Tandoori Resturent...soon the birthday girl Gurmindar arrived and then Meenu,Maariyah and Aqeelah turned up also.Jessica and her sister sana also arrive. The girls introduce them self to each other and laugh...

Over at Rajbeers house...Rajbeer has just come out of the shower he is infront of his mirror singing ''Chandani oh meri Chandani'' he talks to him self in the mirror.

Rajbeer-Aaj miss Preeto ka special din agaya hai aur mein uska din begarne jara hu ...yeah baby!

He looks through the cuboard and takes out a pink shirt with matching pink tie and a white waist coat with matching suit...he has sparkly white shoes...quickly puts some spray on him self and rushes outside the Door...

Rajbeer- Raju gaddi nikalo
Raju- jee sahib...kaha le chalu
Rajbeer- Tandoori Resturent
Raju-mmm sahib aaj tandoori kane ka dil hai kya ha ha ha ha
Rajbeer- tumse matlab ...apni aukaad mein raho and drive fast...idiot!

Over at the resturent everything is well and the food has been ate and the cake has been cut by Gurmindar...
Meenu- khuch baki hai kya
Preeto- nehi sab khuch teek taak ho gaya
Maariyah- And thanks to preeto we are all full the food was amazing
Gurmindar- thanks you so much guys and many thanks to preeto for everything you finally made it up to me...


Rajbeer arrives at the Resturent he stands by the door and has a glance around he sees preeto and preeto also spotted him she hides her face behind sonia...

Sonia- whats up preeto
Preeto- ke matlab whats up tumne toh kaha tha tumhara boss yahan nehi dike ga
Sonia- ha kahan toh tha
Preeto-toh zara palat kar toh deko

Sonia sees him and Rajbeer comes close to the table and smiles and preeto... jess and sana talk to each other...
Jessica- umm who is this fit sexy handsome guy yaar
Sana- oy sharam karo tum har ladke ko dek ke yeh baat kehte ho shut up now

Rajbeer- Hi sonia...did you miss me baby..
Sonia- umm Rajbeer tum yahan meine kaha tha ke tum
Rajbeer- kya ke mein nehi asakta
Sonia-well tumne kise ne bulaya toh nehi
Rajbeer-tumhare preeto ne muhje nehi bulaya par meine bin bulaye mehmaan hu umm so may i?
Preeto- no you may NOT!
Jesscia-um sure you can join us
Sana-yh sure ...let him whats your problem preeto he such a nice guy
Sonia- tum dono ko sare kahane ka nehi pata (SONIA tells them everything)
Sana- oh tho Rajbeer ne pichle party bigare thi very naught of him
Sonia- meine tum dono ko isliye bataya kyu ke tum meri cousins ho ab apna mu band rako!

Rajbeer sits next to Sana and Jessica and they talk

Jessica- Rajbeer mein tumse ek baat poochu
Rajbeer- anything Darling
Jessica- kya tumhara uar preeto ka lafra chal raha hai

Rajbeer thinks hard and tries to make something up

Rajbeer- actually ha woh meri girlfriend hai she is a bit angry with me so you know...tell her to talk to me
Sana-(shouts across the table) yaar preeto realtionships mein toh lafre hote hai maaf kardo apne boyfriend ko i mean Rajbeer ko
Preeto- what yeh choot bolra hai yeh mera boyfriend nehi... Rajbeer ine kaun se pati parhare ho tum

Gurmindar, Maariyah and Aqeelah talk to each other

Gurmindar- yaar Aqeelah muhje lagta hai ke Rajbeer kuch na khuch begare ga aaj
Aqeelah- tumne toh mere dil ke baat par li mein bhi yehe soch rahein thi
Maariyah- ya dude i think he is gunna mash it up today!

Rajbeer gets up and goes on the stage and asks for a mike and he gets the audience attention they are all quiet to see what Rajbeer has to say...

Rajbeer- mein apko ek imrortant baat bata na chata hu ke meri girlfriend naraaz hai aur woh muhjse nehi baat kar rahein aur meine manane ke bohat koshash ke par woh nehi manre please aap sab khuch karye na

A Sardar stand up and says
Sardar Ji- kuriye manja munde neh maafe maangli hun tha manja
Preeto- AAP sab iske baat ka yakeen na karo yeh sirf muhjse badla lena chata hai

Rajbeer goes to Preeto and hold the mike up he says
Rajbeer- preeto ji sab ko batado humare beech kya chal raha hai yaad hai tum aur mein tumhare kamre mein ...us raat

Sardar ji- arey yeh to sir dillon ke beti hai che che yeh toh bole bale sirf dekte hai par hai nehi

Preeto SOBS

Preeto- please meri baat sunye yeh sirf badla le ra hai yeh baat sach nehi hai
Rajbeer- aur toh aur yeh mere bache ke ma bane wale hai yeh pregnent hai

Everyone talks about her and laughs at her but preeto cries and she doesnt know what to say and all the girls are just shocked on what Rajbeer is saying... soon eveyone goes out of the resturent and they give her looks while they go out...

Sneha and Anasuya didnt manage to come because they had to attend to their best friend Aneesah's Wedding they were going to go home but Gurmindar told them by phone what had happened they quickly came to see Preeto

Rajbeer goes and sits on a seperate table and gets two wines to drink


Sneha- hey preeto (she rushes in) are you okay (she hugs her)...
Anasuya- ha yaar yeh kese hua...look at the shamless man he is still here drinking didnt he go home he looked like such a nice guy but we guess he is not what he looks...dont worry Preeto..mein usko kehte hu ke tumse maafe mange
Preeto- ab maafe kya pure samaaj mein mera mazaak ban gaya tum sab gar jao

Gurmidar asks Preeto if she needs a lidt but she refuses and says that she will manage on her own... eveyone else is upset too and they hud Preeto and go home...

Gurmindar- acha agar lift nehi lene toh zara bach ke is se ghar jaldi pohanch jana
Preeto- haa teek hai

They all leave and Preeto is ready to leave and she picks her bag Rajbeers eyes are on her and he gets up and quickle trappes her in front of the door...he is drunk
Rajbeer- jaanu kaho toh mein chor deta hu
Preeto- Rajbeer tumne meri bohat bezati ki go away now
Rajbeer- agar tum ek raat meri saat beato toh meine jo stage par kaha woh sach ho jaye ga
Preeto- shut up muhje nehi pata tha ke tumhare itni gandi soch hai
Rajbeer makes a Baby face
Rajbeer- just Kiss me Preeto
He gets close to her and grabs her hand
Preeto-mera haat choro muhje ghar jana hai

He throws her bag and starts to dance around with her forcefully on the song Khuch kaas hai (From the movie Fashion)

Rajbeer is too drunk to handle him self she pushes him away and slaps him and he lies on the floor she picks her bag up and call the taxi...she sat in it and went home...Rajbeer lies there still singing to himself slowly slowly (khuc...h kaas ha..ii and laughs)

The End








Edited by PrincessAneesah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kk you can comment now i hope you like it i might not write FF's now so enjoy
Edited by PrincessAneesah - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what do u mean ur ending this. No ur too good. Plz dont end
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Posted: 12 years ago
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she cba ... and plus she won;t get much time to go on laptop !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What i didnt get the first part she is what
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Posted: 12 years ago
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she can't be asked lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the only reason i cant be asked now is because im starting college u see
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hehe Rajbeer is so stupid and naughty too...loved it aneesah...if u get time any day do write and continue:)

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