Tum mile - Dil khile (VirMan OS) - Page 6

This is too cute please PM me when you continue

i luv that part where he sys i wont force u😳

nice os dear...

Aaww that was tremendous gosh i loved it especially the way virat kept on gazing at maanvi and the hot scene at the end jus blown my mind off amazing i loved it plsz continue hun the next part shoulf be the confession where they actually say the three magical words i love u...aawww *hugs and kisses*
amazing do pm me if u write any more or continue gr8 going buddy

Just read it. Beautiful! Loved it.

beautiful. just beautiful. in fact i can say the same for all of your stories and your work. how do you do this to everyone, we're all always at the edge of our seats reading them, lol i almost fell of my chair...i loved it! it was truly a brilliant a piece of work. and you've portrayed their clear attraction to each other really well, if only we could get a scene like this...*sigh*...a scene in the rain, well i can only dream, this was just dead romantic, see they didn't even kiss but you've really done such a good job with this that no one can comlain. overall, it was brilliant, beautiful and very well written...