Megz's VirMan Fantasy: Maanvi.vs.Murderer - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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well lemme tell u besharam is totally in!!!!!!!
loved it!..
but the SB-"hw can tr be BLOOD on my carpet!!!..ROFL😆
the best part ws obviously...Virat KISSIN manvi in front of evryone...awww...2 good!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love loved loved it! Whenever I read the words 'a bit besharam' in your stories I always laugh, and can I just say that we virman fans love it, we want more virman and their 'besharam content', haha..anyways, I loved the beginning, '(no Manvi, you must not let your eyes wander there) unbuttoned to allow distant gazers a peek into a perfectly bronzed chest. Cough cough. No do not focus on Virat's abs. Focus on…that creepy waiter guy…Yum, imagining Virat's abs, and the heavenly vision of it is making me drool…*goes back into reality*, err I mean…*coughcough* . Hehe, I doubt the sight of the creepy waiter guy/murderer/goon is better than the sight of Virat's abs…Okay and Swamini bua is worried bout blood on the carpet, even though she didn't actually say it, she was how you say 'eyeing the carpet in distaste'. And lastly, this is where the fangirl squeal comes ( I don't usually do this, but…) (Tries to:) *Squeals and jumps around in joy but can't because people will think I is crazy…* He kissed her, awww! Last line was awesome. Loved this and am looking forward to your future work, sorry I'm commenting now, months later you've actually posted this…

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