Maaneet ff Envious Romance THREAD 1

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#661

nyc one...
Uff ye kunal aage jake koi prob na khadi kare
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm

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MonaSWrites

@MonaSWrites

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Posted: 13 years ago

#662

great update dear
so maan found her..hmm geet should not spend her money ...
waiting for next eagerly 😃

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keerthi90

@keerthi90

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#663

dadi ne toh geet keliye rehne ka aur job karne ka poora foolproof plan banaya...but maan ko phir bhi pata chala ke woh kahan hain...

ab kya hoga...kaise bach payegi geet maan se...

waiting for ur next update...

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#664

nice update...

so finally Maan has found geet...

awww what's gonna happen now...

can't wait for the next part...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#665

i know it is maan

but he is really rude wid her

nd ye karan toh geet ko dekhtey hi flat ho gya

waiting for more

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#666

maan found her!!!!!!!😲

awesome update

update next part soon!!!!!!!!!

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#667

wonderful part...
poor kunal😆😆😆...
msk 😲... so early..😕...😉...not bad...
waiting to know the next...

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P0K0

@P0K0

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#668

Eid Mubaraq to all my readers

Present

...But tilting her head a little she got the shock of her life... without thinking anything...she about turned and ran for her life... And the running sound made the person in geet's apartment to look out of the window...to see who made that sound...

MAAN SINGH KHURRANA rushed out from her apartment seeing geet running from back...

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10 hours ago...in delhi...

Maan's felt someone caressing his cheek with her soft hand... He smiled in his sleep...feeling geet's touch...he pulled her in his warm embrace...eyes still closed...

He felt her lips on his nape...kissing him lovingly...he shivered feeling her touching him and gave her more space tilting his head a little...maan pulled her more close...his hands slowly went under her dress and started to feel her bare back...his eyes were still closed...it's his deepest fantasy...he had never felt her like this... And geet had neither ever touched him before nor she ever let him touch her like that ... Every thing looks dreamy...IS THIS A DREAM ????!!!!

His eyes snapped open...panting...he was in the couch...alone...

''DAMN IT...!!!'' he screamed.He took the phone and called...''Do U WANT ME TO COME THERE..????''

''s...s...sorry sss...sir...but ma'm ko still track nehi kar paya...i think...she has'nt bought anything yet...''

''U GUYS R WORTHLESS...!!!'' He cut the call ...picked up his things...and went away from the hotel...giving a huge amount of money for damage...

He rushed to KM...SD wasn't there at that time...he rushed in her room and started to look for any clue...he looked at every single corner...he was getting mad...frustrated...helpless...but found nothing...being frustrated he threw away the bedsheets along with pillows...one pillow sounded strange when it fell on the ground...

He immediately went towards it and opened it to see some legal papers in it...it's about a studio apartment...he quickly wrote down the address and cleaned her room...just the way it was...

He quietly left the place...not getting seen by anyone...

He called someone...''hello...Adi...ek kaam karo...khurana empire ke security providing company ko bolo i personally want to meet them...in 1 hour...''

In half hour...they reached the office...he called them in his cabin...''u'r services really impresses me...so i have a special job for u...i have bought a new bungalow in delhi...i want u to enrich it with u'r best security systems...and all must be hidden...every room must have password protected lock...the main gate must be electrified...

''But sir electrified gate...!...isn't it a little inhumane...''

''did i give u the permission to speak??''

His one glare...and he gulped hard...!

''Get it done...in 6 hours...''

''But sir it will take at least 4 days!!!''

''7 hours...enough time...now get to work!''

''Right away sir,,,,''

He called Adi...he came in...

''J..j...ji...sir...''

''how much time will it take to reach xxx town...?''

''umm...umm...5 hours by train...''

''What about plane...??''

''Threre's no airport near about 15 towns...''

''Bus...or car...??''

''Sir puri din laag jayega...''

''Then get my helicopter...

''Go and get my body guards...suno...all of them...''

''a...aa...all of them????!!! Kya baat hain sir...kuch hua hain wahan??''

''nothing...and send my limo there with driver...make sure he reaches there fast...''

''Ok sir...''

He closed his eyes...finally some peace...he takes a deep breath...and kissed the address...

'' i'm coming jaan...daaro maat...'

In 2 hours...Maan Singh Khurrana reached the place with 20 guards...
His limo was still on the way...he ordered 15 guards to be there and and 5 of them to come if he calls them...

He took a jeep and went to the place...

It was locked ...he arranged someone who made him a spare key...cause he didn't want to ruin her things...

He opened the door and went in...very small...but very clean...he smiled...there's not much...but it had the 'home touch'...ye sirf geet ka hi ho sakta hai...he felt peace...finally...feeling her presence...scent...his heart filled with happiness...

He went to the wash room...took a bath...changed into T-shirt and tracks...which he brought with him...and slept on her bed...happily...he had a long sleep...after a long time...

He woke up at 8:45...abhi bhi geet nehi aayi...he got worried...he called...''Mohan...daadima ko koi shaaq to nehi hua na??''

''nehi sir...she is not back yet...''

He cut the call...just then his phone rang...'' SIR!!!...we've tracked ma'm...she is in xxx town...she has used a 1000 note in Pizza Hut...''

'' Good...''

''sir aap kahan ho...?''

'' I'm at xxx town...in geet's apartment...''

'' WHAT!!!!???''

''Don't worry...i'll send the check to u...''

''o...o...ok...s...sir...!''

The person ended the call and told his colleague...''i dont know how he did that but that was Awesome...!!''

Maan cut the call and went to the fridge...it was empty...''geet ne kuch khayi nehi...lekin mujhe bhi toh bhuk laaga...koi baat nehi...hum dono ne milker pizza hut se jo bhi layegi geet wo hi khayenge...''

He was getting very excited to be in this house...he felt like this is his real home...he happily started to look around the house...suddenly he heard someone running...

he immediately went to the window and saw geet running away...he immediately went out...but did'nt forget to lock the door of 'their home' before leaving...

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Precap : the ruthless, more passionate and obsessive MSK is back...

Continued on Thread 2

Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#669

wow...both nice updates😃
ab ye kunal kaha se aa gaya????
Maan geet tak pahoch hi gaya... nice
maan n geet will be in delhi alone😉
waiting for maaneet meeting n what next???

Edited by maanshi - 13 years ago