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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys my take on how I would have liked the scene of the three kisses should have been played. Hope you like it!🤗


"Kuch Aur Ho jane do"


Arnav brown eyes looked intently at his bride to be dancing away merrily with his and her family members. A desire grew inside of him of wanting to be close. Damn these traditions he thought! He went and stood in front of his lady love and took her wrist. This time there was a touch of urgency in the way he grabbed her, yet the grip was firm but not hard.

Her eyes questioned what he was trying to do. "Khushi chalo mere saat" (Khushi come with me)

Looking back at her sister Payal dancing she frowned but then looked at her man. What a man she thought! So brave, bold and daring. He walked in front and she followed him without questioning him further.

"Why are you looking at me like that?" he asked irritated at the way she was ogling him.

"Nothing" she shyly answered.

Entering his room he took her to the very spot they were about to kiss on the diwali night. He gently pinned her against the wall.

"Arnavji what are you doing? Everyone will be wondering where we are gone".

Trapping his arms around her he made sure there was no way she could escape today.

"Shut up Khushi! Your always worried what others will think..what about me?"

Puzzled she looked into his eyes that began getting a naughty glint.

"What about you?"

"Khushi we will not be able to see each other after haldi..so this is our only chance"

"SO?"

Looking miffed he retorted. "So I wanted to see you properly...you know alone". He smiled a little.

Khushi began looking uncomfortable. "Arnavji let me go please..dadiji ne dekh liya ke hum unn ki baat sunane ki bajai 'kuch aur' kar rahe hain toh.."(if dadiji finds out instead of listening to her we are doing something else)

His lips reached for her and pressed against her forehead. He lingered the kiss while she fumbled. "Toh kuch aur hone do" (So let something else happen)

"But...naniji naraaz ho jaye gi"(Naniji will get angry)

His lips bent down to reach her right cheek and kissed her seductively there. Khushi pressed her eyes shut and then looked at his eyes that were getting darker with desire. "Naraaz ho jane do" (let her get angry)

"Arnavji Di bura mania gi"(Di will mind)

He put his hand on her neck and bent down to kiss her left cheek. Khushi's body began trembling.

"Let her mind Khushi"

Arnav rubbed her lips with his thumb and lowered his lips near her awaiting trembling ones. "Aman ka phone agaya toh?"(What if Aman rings?)

"Uss Aman ki aisi ki taisi...Khushi maine phone switch kar diya hain"(I have switched off my phone)

"Kya?"(what?) she asked with her eyes still shut with anticipation.

"Mmmh" he said huskily.

She took a shallow breath in and he began tilting his head towards her lips. "Arnavji.."

He kissed her lips gently and then looked at her with her eyes closed. Her body was trembling. He took her into his manly arms and kissed her senseless. It was Arnav in control with the kiss and Khushi taking in his passionate insults. Khushi had forgotten about everything. She did not care who came in now. It was about him and her and their special moment.

Press like and comments please.

Link to my FF: I Want You!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my gawwwd...m still in shock as i cant believe i am first in your work...wohooo..


wow awsuuum update dear...really loved it and would have de loved to see that on the show but i guess that was asking too much but wow really cute and thnx 4da pm dear...
Edited by kitzdoll - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Naddia! I loved it, but it was short!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Loved the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I want to see her now taking the initiative and kissing him... How. N u not when u have that gorgeous raizada in front of you...asking her in all possible ways to claim him as her husband...just remebering never once saw him doing or wanting to do anything with lavanya...how the hell was he even dating her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!! It was awesome!!!
LOL Aman ki to aisi ki taisi!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was really superb if only this had happen in the show it would have been fantastic but of course ur OS has fulfil the desire. Thanx for writing such a thought.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mahi, you were correct, your OS is how the scene should have be played. Wonderful, love it. Your writing is superb dear. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FINALLY MISSION ACCOMPLISHED !!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆 not in the show at least we are satisfied thru your creations ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely OS
awesome description
too good
I wished that the kisses would continue longer😃

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