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Shoe12

@Shoe12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

for a bit I thought payal had died. So sadness galore for NK. Akash can be a morkn who'll suddenly die? 😛 Yes, this does bring out the best in me. What happened to Khushi...Arnav's perspective seemed to show him wanting to give the whole him and Khushi thing a try, I'm guessing that conversation didn't go as planned. and NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN?! I want to know sooner this time! 😃

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Beautiful update!!

Liked Nk's story ..wonder what made Payal marry Akash...

You guys are such a tease ..we were waiting for Arnav and Khushi's reaction ...n you just gave us a new insight to NK's life...

N again another cliff hanger...

Continue soon...

Congratulations for winning the best FF of the week..👏

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blck234

@blck234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

Yay! what an amazing update! Never thought N.K would have such a tragic back story! hah! N.K and Payaliya! waiting for Arnav and Khushi's confrontation! Thank you for the pm!

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Ohh another love story within a love story. You guys are brilliant! Oh payalia.. And nk bhaiya.. Gosh that was deep and sad.. Cracked me up when he was thinking of his dad but it was coated with too much sadness.
Upps.. Khushi??? What happened? Did she walk out on Arnav without a conversation? Or did she give him an asr attitude? Oh what a cliffhanger!

Congrats on your winning the FF of the week! It was expected! You guys r brilliant!

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sunshine23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

Hi guys!
First off, I haven't commented here before, but i've kept up with the story, and all I have to say is that it's absolutly amazing..
Khushi and Arnavs relationship is just amazing..( Man I reeally hope they end up together soon)...Anjali and Shyam...and then NK.
This update really made me feel for the guy, and the way you two described Payal was just..wow!
And, I have to say..it was a bit surprising that you put them together haha.
Coming to the cliffhanger..oh man! I can't wait for the next update!!
Please PM me?...should I send you a buddy request??
P.S congratulations on the FF of the week..you totally deserved it!

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

great update...it was wonderful to have an insight into NK's past...though the last paragraph was a bit confusing...who was NK talking about when he realized that he made a mistake?? was it Khushi or Payal?? 😳

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adi.bi

@adi.bi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Girls girls girls!!! How I have missed your writing!! I was checking every single day and hoping/praying for an update.. almost whooped with joy when i saw the PM 😊

Its obviously a lovely update to the ff..

I loved seeing a serious side to NK.. Honestly sometimes I hate it that he is shown almost as a buffoon on the show... And the one in your writing seems to be the perfect guy..

The pain of sitting alone in that cafe and wondering 'why am i alone!!'.. Beautiful scene there.. Am sure anyone whose 'clock is ticking' and is still single can feel it too... lol

However still waiting to know the aftermath of the 'night activities' .. ahem ahem

So please please please update soon... Prettiest please EVVVERRR..

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Starting from the ending...Khushi's description makes my stomach go in to knots. What went wrong?!

Agh. I'm going to hyperventilate if they're having a fall out, though..I had a nagging feeling it was inevitable in the current situation.

As for NK's love/heart break, it made me upset. It really did. The attraction to Payal, the slow..bittersweet heartbreak of knowing her and losing her, all of it.

The way you described Payal made her seem much more beautiful than they depict in her the show. She is really beautiful, I wished they updated her style. She has a very alluring quality about her that you both used very well.

I can't wait for the next update darlings ! <3

- S <3

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#869

So NK and Payal, eh??

Poor thing. . . . Felt so bad for him. . . .

His pain, him trying to think that she had not really gone far away and was nearby. . . .

*sighs and wipes her eyes*

And Khushi in the end?!

OH MY f**kING GOD!!!

You had to stop there?! THERE??!!

Hope you continue soon. . . . .

Thanks for the PM!! 🤗

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#870

I wanna give NK a great big bear hug!!! How awful. A life in limbo.

And Khushi...I'm going to take an optimistic view!!..last night must have been incredible if she's got long sleeves, buttons up to the neck and sleep deprived dark circles under her eyes!! 😉 Though the aftermath may not have been so good if she's in a coffee shop with NK!!! 😕

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