||SS|| Never Forget || PanSh||Note. pg 20 - Page 7

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

Yeah i just finished it. But i'll put it up after updating Starting Anew. Or maybe before because it's a little related to the current track. Let's see where Monday's episode takes RaHi, after that.
Till then you better update!!

Oh wow! I can't wait to read it! But yeah, take your time! 😳 And I updated! KHUSH?! 😛

Okay read.
I'm a little taken aback. I was not hoping for such a reaction from KD. The impatience seemed a little off his character. And also maybe because i'm too much of the classic jodi fan that i see PanSh only as close friends or siblings. Liked the whole part with the hooligans.
Overall, nicely written. Brilliant piece of writing albeit everything...
I'm really waiting to see how it goes.

My OS is gonna come later i guess. I just had a nice idea for a KD-Kiya OS build up in my head.

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

Okay read.
I'm a little taken aback. I was not hoping for such a reaction from KD. The impatience seemed a little off his character. And also maybe because i'm too much of the classic jodi fan that i see PanSh only as close friends or siblings. Liked the whole part with the hooligans.
Overall, nicely written. Brilliant piece of writing albeit everything...
I'm really waiting to see how it goes.

My OS is gonna come later i guess. I just had a nice idea for a KD-Kiya OS build up in my head.

thanks for the honest feedback! The impatience was just his reaction to the sudden change of events. Ya know, when someone has these nervous thoughts of should I do it or should I ignore it? That kind of scenarios can make anyone impatient. KD wanted things to get it over with and done, that is why he was acting impatient and running. He wasnt fond of the idea of a sudden change out of nowhere. Hence, he just wanted to get there and shift the things back to his control before anything happened.

Baqi the hooligan part reaction, any person protective of his friends and family would've reacted that way! :D

but I agree, the characters are a bit OOC here in accordance to the show. I was just using my writer's liberty :) and trust me, things will shape up differently now. Their relationship isnt what you think it is. But that will be explained.

Thanks again! :D hope this lived up to your eagerness to read the update. Sorry if it didnt :)

OMG 😍

amazing update loved it tons

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

OMG 😍

SOOO CUTE!!

Mais as usual it was awesome!!! Normally i hate when ppl pair different couple ...but suprising iam loving PANSH <3 thanks my partner in crime haha

Please update soon. can't wait !! <3

Ps - your avi <3 HAYEEE ...piya did right..wow <3

Yaar Piyu! You are just too sweet! Blush karwa deti hai hamesha 😳 And I know! The avi is awesome na! Had to use it since I was updating 😳 Thanks yaar! Update will be soon! 😳

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing update loved it tons

Thank you! 😳

KD's dilemma was acceptable, after all he was not the best of chums in the school.
Also was his rection to the eveteasers.
That was a superb instance Mais.
To see KD so protective was heartening.
The dream sequence was cute!
After all day dreaming in class is one of the best memories of school life
Loved it Mais!
With [<3]
Nidha

Originally posted by: Eowyn

KD's dilemma was acceptable, after all he was not the best of chums in the school.
Also was his rection to the eveteasers.
That was a superb instance Mais.
To see KD so protective was heartening.
The dream sequence was cute!
After all day dreaming in class is one of the best memories of school life
Loved it Mais!
With [<3]
Nidha

Aww! Nidha! I am glad you liked it. KD wasn't day dreaming, it was a flashback. This SS is full of them. Won't be wrong to say that the base of the whole SS is a past memory 😳 but yeah! Day dreaming is the best part of school life after sleeping in class 😉

Lovely update.thanks for the pm

nice one enjoying pansh 🤗