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Posted: 12 years ago

awww aa gayi!!
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Mel here you guys know the story about me getting permission.
PART 9
PAST
He squeezed her waist bringing her close yet burning with an unknown jealousy.
She squirmed feeling the unknown yet familiar touch.
She blabbered in her sleep. "Kiss! Ummm" She whispered. Maan felt a burning sensation in his throat. He couldnt speak anything lest she woke up and block him.
He snaked his arms around her waist tightly. Her eyes flew open as she felt something around her waist tightening.
She struggled to turn around as her back was plastered to his chest.
"Leave Me!" She whispered almost trembling.
"Please!" He couldnt stop himself from pleading her.
Geet had started hyperventilating but hearing his voice she froze in her tracks.
Maan had lost all his sense his intentions of meeting her Everything. All he could sense is her fragrance her smell.
"I...i...lll..ll..likk..." He stammered all nervous burrying his head into her neck.
Geet chuckled hearing some male all nervous. She was continuously feeling tickled ashe was digging his face into her neck more and more.
" Stop it... Please stop it..." She said in between of her chuckling.
Maan felt relaxed that she wasnt scared or apprehensive of him. He released her finally as both turned around sitting up.
His face illuminated in the moonlight. She was awestruck at his appearance.
'How can a good looking guy like him be so polite?' She wondered.
"Ehh uhhh ahh I am ss..sorryyy!!" He was again nervous.
Geet shifted inching towards him to comfort and relax him as she could see he was nervous.
Instead she stumbled on the spread and fell over him and rolled. He rolled along with her too landing in the middle of he large bed with him over her.
She blushed seeing him so close.
Maan was elated seeing her blush.
**********
Meera found Geet smiling in her sleep.
"How can she sleep happily inspite of all these things happenings all because of her?" She thought.
She called Geet to wake her up.
"Geet..."
Geet replied with a slow hmmm.
Meera shook her as Geet jerked up.
**********
Geet whispered hmmm as Maan realized someone intruding her sleep He felt she was backing out. As if she was going away. Each moment from the time he used DLBridge flashed back in his mind as she disappeared.
Maan was disappointed.
*******
"Master!!" Sordo called.
Maan jerked up.
"You are okay??" Sordo asked.
"Yy..yes I..i am" Maan Mars tried to compose himself though his disappointment was clearly visible in his voice.
*********
PRESENT
"Maan What is in there?" Geet was curious about the room.
"I dont know Geet!" Maan was confused too.
He entered inside the room.
Geet gasped and stood there shocked as Maan entered.
"These are absolutely what we need for the fight...!!" Maan thought.
***********
PAST
"WHY???????"
"Why did I loose myself to D"
"If I hadnt...!"
"Maan ! I am sorry Son!" KM was regretful.
"So I am..."
KM closed his eyes as he joined his hands.
He bent on his knees as he bent his head surrendering himself.
"Super Powers. I want to be...!!" He screamed. As glasses broke in the dark room.
His power dissipated out of his body in a white flame.
"Mars...Room...!!"He screamed.
*********
PRESENT
"Maan are we going to use those?" She asked.
"No we need to strengthen ourselves first!" Maan spoke with a stern face.
Both of them indulged themselves in vigorous practice again.
*********
"Supernova!!!" Maan screamed as he repeated his act again.
Geet was distressed to see him stressing himself.
"Maan!" Geet came near him
"Ice!" Geet whispered. Her hands turned ice cold. She hugged him from his back resting her face on his back.
"Please Dont Maan!" Geet spoke calming him.
Maan stopped in his movements.
Maan was extremely frustrated not finding whom to believe and whom not to.
"I want to protect you!" Maan spoke after his long silence.
"Why do you love me so much Maan?" Geet spoke almost sobbing.
Maan turned shocked.
"Geet...!" He spoke in pain.
"Because of me you are trapped here Maan...!!" She cried out her heart.
"Nooo!" Maan hugged her tightly.
"Dont love me so much Maan!" She whimpered.
"Calm down Geet!" Maan could feel a new determination inside him
.*********
Dev could feel an eerie calmness spreading inside him.
"Annie was a great device. You can not win!! I am going to conquer the galaxy!! He smirked.
**********
PRECAP:
What was actually in that room?
Glimpse of kind of 1st faceoff

This update is dedicated to Bday Girl Devil Sissy!
Roopali!!!
@Prafulla & DQ: Abb toh Maan jao! Ab toh maine update bhi kar diya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT
Maaneet 😳
Edited by lil.mizz.smexii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆TIA 😆
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wow geet want kissy wissy in sleep😆😆😆
nd maanu ho much it is difficult 4 my maanu to control..😉😉😉😆
bt ye kya hua.. romance ki band bj gyi.. meeraaa😆😆
it was a dream kya...😕😕
bt lvd it
superbb update..


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Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update wow raat mein parhon gi
then comment k baaray mein sochon gi
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh you Updated ...
comment lets see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ufff anu check ur PMs about ur dp quickly
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting one..
was that really a dream?ya phir it all happened DL bridge!!!
what was in that room?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marrrsss check ur PM yaar...about ur DP tell me b4 i go...i'll do it for u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the Update..Awesome
continue soon
thankx for pm


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