AbhiNikki FF-Your Journey with Me Completed - Page 14

thanks for the pm and i really liked the update :D

how long this mystery will go. Even i don't like them to be separated.
thnx for pm. loved ur ff.

I dont know Pra but you do it every time.. you tap into the emotions so well.. If you look from a far point really there is nothing wrong with A and N but then if you look closer their emotions and these incidences do create a little turbulence.. it doesn't affect the way they feel about each other but it does affect how they react and you have nailed that here
I was able to relate to N and actually to A also.. Being close person myself, I felt like you are reading into my thoughts that i might have had few times.. So really i liked this update a lot.

I like how A doesn't just go way because he is angry unlike how it is portrayed number of times, i do believe yes A is impulsive but that doesn't mean he has to do something just because he is angry and you showed that.. He hasn't forgotten N, her feelings for him and upto certain extent he does understand why she is acting like this... The thing that he wants to do is fix it but then doesn't know how to and doesn't want to just keep it in back of mind all the time..

And OMG, if your next update is going to be what i think.. ( which i think is about A going to talk to N's father) then i think he has just made bad move... Not sure if N is yet ready to see him go behind her back when she told him to let it go even if that is right thing or only option he has.. looking fwd to unfolding of these events and knowing what is wrong with N and her father

@Nikki , thanks sweetie . Glad you liked the update

@jyothi , thanks my dear

@Shale , hello and thanks . Sorry , but the mystery will go on for a little more . I know you dont like AN apart , but if its any consolation , AN's separation or being apart is a temporary matter 😊.

@Jibsi , thanks darling:)

@ruch, Trish, hemvb, Mitzi, Sheena , Muni , thanks guys

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

I dont know Pra but you do it every time.. you tap into the emotions so well.. If you look from a far point really there is nothing wrong with A and N but then if you look closer their emotions and these incidences do create a little turbulence.. it doesn't affect the way they feel about each other but it does affect how they react and you have nailed that here
I was able to relate to N and actually to A also.. Being close person myself, I felt like you are reading into my thoughts that i might have had few times.. So really i liked this update a lot.

I like how A doesn't just go way because he is angry unlike how it is portrayed number of times, i do believe yes A is impulsive but that doesn't mean he has to do something just because he is angry and you showed that.. He hasn't forgotten N, her feelings for him and upto certain extent he does understand why she is acting like this... The thing that he wants to do is fix it but then doesn't know how to and doesn't want to just keep it in back of mind all the time..

And OMG, if your next update is going to be what i think.. ( which i think is about A going to talk to N's father) then i think he has just made bad move... Not sure if N is yet ready to see him go behind her back when she told him to let it go even if that is right thing or only option he has.. looking fwd to unfolding of these events and knowing what is wrong with N and her father

Originally posted by: pra19

@Shale , hello and thanks . Sorry , but the mystery will go on for a little more . I know you dont like AN apart , but if its any consolation , AN's separation or being apart is a temporary matter 😊.

its not like that pra, i always like AN specially wen they fight. I don't like the koo-chii koo of couple but what attracted me more is more aggression, rash and raw feelings. Where they hav feelings but still fight to prove their point.😉

awesome update and thanks for the pm :D

nice part bt too much of suspense.

Originally posted by: ATfan

nice part bt too much of suspense.

Trish , really ? Interesting , because creating suspense was the last thing going on in my mind when writing this part . See , this is why comments make so much difference . Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

awesome update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3

Nikki , thanks sweetie 😊

@ruch ,hemvb , Mitzi, Muni thanks