AbhiNikki FF-Your Journey with Me Completed - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and i really liked the update :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
how long this mystery will go. Even i don't like them to be separated.
thnx for pm. loved ur ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I dont know Pra but you do it every time.. you tap into the emotions so well.. If you look from a far point really there is nothing wrong with A and N but then if you look closer their emotions and these incidences do create a little turbulence.. it doesn't affect the way they feel about each other but it does affect how they react and you have nailed that here
I was able to relate to N and actually to A also.. Being close person myself, I felt like you are reading into my thoughts that i might have had few times.. So really i liked this update a lot.

I like how A doesn't just go way because he is angry unlike how it is portrayed number of times, i do believe yes A is impulsive but that doesn't mean he has to do something just because he is angry and you showed that.. He hasn't forgotten N, her feelings for him and upto certain extent he does understand why she is acting like this... The thing that he wants to do is fix it but then doesn't know how to and doesn't want to just keep it in back of mind all the time..

And OMG, if your next update is going to be what i think.. ( which i think is about A going to talk to N's father) then i think he has just made bad move... Not sure if N is yet ready to see him go behind her back when she told him to let it go even if that is right thing or only option he has.. looking fwd to unfolding of these events and knowing what is wrong with N and her father

Edited by anotheranfan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

@Nikki , thanks sweetie . Glad you liked the update

@jyothi , thanks my dear

@Shale , hello and thanks . Sorry , but the mystery will go on for a little more . I know you dont like AN apart , but if its any consolation , AN's separation or being apart is a temporary matter 😊.

@Jibsi , thanks darling:)

@ruch, Trish, hemvb, Mitzi, Sheena , Muni , thanks guys

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

I dont know Pra but you do it every time.. you tap into the emotions so well.. If you look from a far point really there is nothing wrong with A and N but then if you look closer their emotions and these incidences do create a little turbulence.. it doesn't affect the way they feel about each other but it does affect how they react and you have nailed that here
I was able to relate to N and actually to A also.. Being close person myself, I felt like you are reading into my thoughts that i might have had few times.. So really i liked this update a lot.

I like how A doesn't just go way because he is angry unlike how it is portrayed number of times, i do believe yes A is impulsive but that doesn't mean he has to do something just because he is angry and you showed that.. He hasn't forgotten N, her feelings for him and upto certain extent he does understand why she is acting like this... The thing that he wants to do is fix it but then doesn't know how to and doesn't want to just keep it in back of mind all the time..

And OMG, if your next update is going to be what i think.. ( which i think is about A going to talk to N's father) then i think he has just made bad move... Not sure if N is yet ready to see him go behind her back when she told him to let it go even if that is right thing or only option he has.. looking fwd to unfolding of these events and knowing what is wrong with N and her father

Pri , thanks again . Another lovely comment and I have so much to say . But I am not feeling well and so not able to put across my thoughts coherently .
I promise I'll come back and edit the comment when I am feeling better and my brain's not so messed up. Thanks again dear . You are a writer's dream :)
*****Edit*** OK , so I am having an insomnia bout after spending most of the day sleeping :( . its pathetic and so logged in and read your comment again , its lovely :). and thought Ill edit it now itself. And this edit is from my cell phone .Hope it is readable. sory if it isnt :(. Pri , I like this part too because I could relate to A and N here and sometimes inadvertently some portions of these FFs borrow from my own experiences in life , the way I feel at a particular point . and tht is why A and N are such amazing characters , they are for most part very real people and thats why i love them so much. Glad I made you relate to A and Ns behavior here. And liked your observation on A's impusiveness . A isnt angry here . he is like "theek hai bol diya abt your dad . Now tell me what is it that makes you so mad abt it . let me help you with it." and that is obvious again somthing any person who loves his wife the way he does and the way he cares for her would feel like . abt the next part naa , hmm , well i hope you like the way things are presented . thanks again sweetie .
Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

@Shale , hello and thanks . Sorry , but the mystery will go on for a little more . I know you dont like AN apart , but if its any consolation , AN's separation or being apart is a temporary matter 😊.




its not like that pra, i always like AN specially wen they fight. I don't like the koo-chii koo of couple but what attracted me more is more aggression, rash and raw feelings. Where they hav feelings but still fight to prove their point.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part bt too much of suspense.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ATfan

nice part bt too much of suspense.


Trish , really ? Interesting , because creating suspense was the last thing going on in my mind when writing this part . See , this is why comments make so much difference . Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

awesome update and thanks for the pm :D


Nikki <3


Nikki , thanks sweetie 😊

@ruch ,hemvb , Mitzi, Muni thanks

Edited by pra19 - 13 years ago

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