RS: Dil ki baat..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's evening now.anant is in office.Navya is dusting her room.She opens almari nd starts dusting it.Suddenly a diary falls on her feet 4m d almari.She picks it up & opens it.Turns pages & cs something is written in d fews pages of middle.Hand writing is of anant's.She cs it was written on theire weeding day.She starts walking&starts reading it. .

anant bajpai...ek aam ladka.Jindegi chal raha tha baba ka rules,papa ka gussa,maa ki pyar k sath.Pata nahi isse khush tha k nahi.Kabhi u kisi se khas karke rab se sikayet nahi kiya.Pad unse har roj ek doa mangta tha mein. . .mere jindegi mei koi aci angel bhejo joh mere khusiya banegi,mere jine ka bajwa hogi,jis k liye mere dil dhadkega.Mujhe pata nahi rab mujhse kitna pyar karte hai.Pad itna pyar karte hai k...unhone apne banaye hua sabse khubsurat pari ko mere liye bhej diya.Aur woh hasin pari hai...mere navya. Navya mishra...ek asi pari jiski khubsurti mein toh kiya khud rab v sayed lafjon mei baya nahi kar payega.

Mujhe yaad hai woh din...jab mein uce pehli bar mila tha.Kace bhul sakta hoon?Keuke uci din pehli bar mein ucki akhon mei dekha tha.Uc din v yeh pata nahi tha..isi ladki meri jindegi banne wali hai.Dhire dhire ucki karib ana..dosti.Jab v ucki akhon mei dekhta tha aca lagta tha..jace khud ko ucki akhon mei kho raha hoon mein.Aur uske baad woh picnic..joh mere jindegi badal diya.Pata nahi jab ucne kahi thi..tumse milna acca lagta hai..tumse baatein karne ka maan hota hai...khud ko rokh nahi paya mein.Aca lag raha tha..agar mein abhi ucko apne bahon mei na loo toh..sayed mera dil ki dhadkan band ho jayega.Uce bahon mei leke aca lag raha tha..jindegi ki sari chahat mil chuka hai mujhe.Uske baad gadi mei woh khuli baal..aur jab woh mera hath pakdi thi..dhire dhire dil khone laga tha mein.Aur panchgini mei uc raat ko jab uce apni bahoon mei liya tha..mein yeh mehsus kiya tha k sayed yehi woh ladki hai jis ki doa mangta tha mein.Lekin parwarish ya pyar?yeh sawal se darne laga tha.Jab dil ko puch toh jawab diya..navya.Samajh geya..pyar ho geya hai mujhe.Jada der nahi kiya i love u bolne mei.Dil k andar yeh pata tha..woh v mujhse pyar karti hai.Intezar karta raha

Mein anant bajpai kabhi kisi ladki ki building ki pipe se chadunga woh v adhi raat ko..kabhi swapno mei v nahi socha tha.Lekin ucki pyar yeh karne mei majbur kiya.Woh din mere jindegi ka sabse anmol din hai.Navya mujhe i love u kahi thi.Aaj v jab ankh band karta hoon..woh tin lafz sunai deta hai

uc din se aaj tak bahot problems aya hum dono ki pyaar mei.Sayed mein har jata agar navya hamesh mere sath nahi hoti.Meri takat hai woh

i luv u se aaj shadi tak..hum dono ki bech mei thora gussa aur bahot sare pyar. Phir se jina suru kiya.Har taraf uce mehsus karne laga. Ek ek lamha uce milne ki chahat mei rahene lagag. Phir ek din shadi ka propose. Serf mujhe pata hai kitna muskil tha woh 24 ghante. Phir jab woh ha kehdi..jace puri dunia ka khusiya mil geya mujhe.

Aaj hum dono ka shadi hua hai. Lafz kam pad jayega agar batana chaha k kitna khush hoon mein. Aaj navya mishsra mrs. Anant bajpai bani. Yeh toh chata tha mein. Aaj navya apni sari jindegi mere naam kar di..mein ucki.

Lok kehte hai sath phere matlab saat janam ka sath. Pad mere aur navya ki pyar sow janam tak.

Aaj k baad tumhe sab navya mishra nahi mrs.Bajpai kehke bulagi. Mujhe pata hai tum v iss pehchan ki intezar kar rahe the.

Abhi mera patni soh rahi hai. Itna karib se mein uce kabhi nahi dekha. Sach mein aaj dil se rab ki sukriya karne ka man ho raha hai..unhone meri navya ko itna khubsurat joh banaya. Navya..sayed tumhe v nahi pata..kitna sundar ho tum. Hamesha iss khubsurti mei kho jana chata hoon mein.Ek ek pal tumhari aur v karib ana chata hoon.Sari jindegi tumhe apni bahon mei chupake jina chata hoon.Rahoge na..sari dunia bhula k mere bahoon mei?
Navya mein kabhi nahi tumhe samja paunga k kitna pyar karta hoon tumse.Agar mein sayer hota toh hayaron shayeri likhke yeh izhar karta..kitna chata hoon tumhe.

Jabse tum mere jindegi mei ayi ho..ek nayi chahat k sath mera dil dhadakne laga hai.Tumhari sath jindegi jine ka chahat.
I promise u mrs.Bajpai..dunia ka sari khusiya leke dunga tumhe.Lekin agar galth se v dukh diya toh pls maaf kar dena.Aur kabhi v rona maat.Yaar tumhe pata hai na..akhon mei ashu ati hai tumhari toh dil mei dard hota hai mera.Agar galti kiya toh jitna chaye punish karna.Lekin ek pal k liye v mujhse dur jane ki sochna v mat...mar jaunga mein.Tumhe bina mein ek pal v jina nahi chata hoon.Yeh jindegi, dil tumhari hai.Agar tum sath nahi rahoge toh yeh dil dhadakna band nahi kar dega?

Btw mrs.Bajpai..welcome to my life.I wish i will give u all happiness.I luv u so much.


few drops of tear falls on d diary.Sudeenly anant hugs navya 4m behind
N: sorry meine tumhari sari dil ki baat pad li
A: yeh dil tumhari hai. Tum nahi padoge toh kon padega?

Navya turns. Anant kisses her cheeks, lips..

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-Divya.S- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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O.M.G what to say about, am realy lacking words yar, i hav become ua fan yar, oh god d way to wrote abt anant's feelings its juz so touchy, u knw those words made my eyes wet.. and more than tht, i always wantd to knw tht what was anant thnking when he hugd navya for d first tym on bridge, but i culdnt find appropriate ans 4 tht, and today u gave me tht ans and believ it was juz perfect, thanq thanq thanq so much 4 d rs sagar, and a 🤗 4 d lovely and beautiful rs dea, waiting 4 ua next rs..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sooperbbb..nice awesomeee..i felt this is shaheer's diaryyy😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anamika_0

sooperbbb..nice awesomeee..i felt this is shaheer's diaryyy😳


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Parsh_shamya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsum update... the diary entry ws jus superb...:D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amaaazing yaaar:) loved it!!!!!!!! the way u wrote anantz thoghts ws superb :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was a beautiful RS...loved d way u described anant's thoughts in his dairy, his undying love for navya is described very deeply by u...will be waiting for ur next RS!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -diva-shamya-

O.M.G what to say about, am realy lacking words yar, i hav become ua fan yar, oh god d way to wrote abt anant's feelings its juz so touchy, u knw those words made my eyes wet.. and more than tht, i always wantd to knw tht what was anant thnking when he hugd navya for d first tym on bridge, but i culdnt find appropriate ans 4 tht, and today u gave me tht ans and believ it was juz perfect, thanq thanq thanq so much 4 d rs sagar, and a 🤗 4 d lovely and beautiful rs dea, waiting 4 ua next rs..


thanx a lot dear😛
crazzymoon thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. yeh dil tumhari hai. Tum nahi padoge toh kon padega? loved these lines very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mind blowing. Wish something like this happens with them in reality too. Wish we could see this in the serial

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