Attention to all fanfic writers of KS!

khoo thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The below pharses are just an example.. and it's restricted that members DO NOT post phrases like this!! Because many fanfic writers PMed me, so i have to present you with an example!!

Note: The highlighted part shows an extreme of R-rated imagery!

I have edited the content, and im just showing you the few phrases used below that are inappropriate in a fanfic!! so please do not use this kind of phrases that display inappropriate imagery

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om him and gentle moan from her he covered his
lips
with her ending all craving….
His hand caressed her back…loosening the threads which held her clothes
together...she moaned into his "no...not here"….

touching her bare back sending shivers down his own, he
loosened
never letting his lips leave hers…feeling
her groan, making her top fall further...
groan...pushing it further and further down…
her bare shoulder…pulling him as close as she could
wanting
to feel the heat of his lips still more…

all pleasure that

almost completely exposed

moaned as his warm making her open her mouth passion…kissing her long and hard, mouth to moan
and
move with more force…over hers

…ignoring her moaning
her bare back met his mouth…her kissed it
slowly
as if savouring every bit….. moan in pure bliss.

His lips kissed her neck and slowly
She moaned into his mouth…his
kiss
deepened his bare back…nails in….feeling him moan….feeling him push her deeper into the
wall…
pencil skirt, trying to find the hook…
her desperate moans and whimpers into his mouth, lavishly drank with his tongue. please himself……he touched it moving his fingers up and
down…he pulled on it a little bitHe coaxingly ran his tongue over her lips….
his mouth crushed upon her
forcing his tongue deep into her mouth drowning her pleas to
stop…moments
later his hand once again fingered the zip…he felt her stiffen and her
lips
soften yet his were so powerful she was already drunk on them…unable to
protest.

He broke away from her telling her all that he wanted with his
eyes…..she
blushed even more...understanding…her hands still nestling under his
shirt…she slowly caressed it watching his eyes close and his lips to
moan in
distress….oh such cruel torture…

With one swift movement and a sudden desire she pulled his shirt off….
Letting it fall…
His groans grew stronger…he crushed his mouth upon hers…letting their
bodies
touch and letting her do as she pleased as he roved her mouth with his
tongue….his hands rested on either side of her…he moaned into her…..

She gasped….his kiss…so profound so needy….she lost herself in
him...letting
her hands caressed his buckle….the
lift had started to move once again….only aware of one another's body
rocking back and forth in desperate pleasure…

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Noor.T thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG sick !
thanx for informing !
rhabia thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
YUK 🤢
man ppl shud really watch how they write FF ewe dat i coudl sense no love in dat FF
khoo thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OKay guys..... it's not a fanfic... just phrases that are in appropriate okay!!

NO need to get disgusted about it!! so just dont use these phrases as it is a request to all fanfic writers!
*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
I aint doing that right???

I hope not!!!

now i gotta go and read my FF!!!!! 😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok Khoo ,Thanks for informing , I was going to Pm u regarding our limits in Fanfics ...and Voila ... we Got This Post . like Dk Jaanu said I got to go read the Fanfic i have been posting .
so Groan , Moan and etc etc are out .... I shall Put this Post in My Favourites ... so I can use for Referral .
Klue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok VERY vErY X-ated stuff....i've never read it in a ....but 🤢 🤢 🤢 it grossed me OUT!!!! thnkxzz 4 informin
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG YUCK 🤢 🤢 🤢
Thanx alot for informing us Khoo...even I would never read that....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyzz plzzzzzzz dis s sik
man jai n bani luv each othr heartily....
dey need each othr n dis s nt love ....but lust man..........dis s sik......yukk man yukkkk
plzz dn write such sik fanficz .... 😡
hey anywaz thnx khooo..... 4 informin us...thnx alot
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Thanks for this khoo. This is indeed very groos and disturbing 🤢 🤢

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