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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi...guys

I am Fizza...:)

This is for the first time , I am writting a FF...so plz tolerate my mistakes...

as I am a DMG lover so my ff is also based on DMG's famous characters Arman and riddhima

...:)



In love with you smile ❤️

is a story of arman and ridhima with lots of twists and turns...

how they fall in love...some secrets...some hidden facts...its not only a love story but a

Suspence love story...

hope you guys like my new ff...plz let me know if you like or don't like

Here ix the character xketch...:)

Arman Malik

Arman Malik is a 23 year old young and handsome hunk..

larkian jis pe marti hain n larke jisse darte hain...

he lives in Mumbai

he has done architecthural engineering

and now a days searching for job...

Ridhima



THE MYSTERY GIRL...

Rahul Garewal

Rahul Garewal is 25 year old CM of Garewal group of coompanies...he ix quite famoux becauxe of hix lookx nd achievmentx in xhort xpan of tym...

Kartick Garewal


The greatest buisness man in India and the owner of Bacon Group of Companies...highly professional and strict abt decipline in his companies...

rest of the cast will be introduced as the story proceeds...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm story looking nice
do update soon
thankx for pm
love
maria:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~PART 1~

Breaking newx flaxhed on television nd eyes of every employ of the company were stick on t.v...the newx reporter was saying...

Ek or kamiyabi Bacon Group of companies ki...Bacon group of companies ab dunya ki un das companies me se ek hai jo xb xe ziada munafa kamati hai...hm ap ko btate chale k Bacon group of companies ne apna xafarr 2000 me shuru kia tha or 11 saal k thore se same me unhon ne asman ki bulandion ko choo lia hai...jo baki ki companies 50 salon me na kar saki, Bacon Group of companies ne 11 sal me kar dikhaya...Bacon group of companies k mehnti employs or Mr. Rahul nd Mr.Kartick ki anthak mehnat ki waja se hi aj ye nam itni unchain tk pohncha hai...India k tmam bare xhehron me ye company apna nam bna chuki hai or ab to india xe bahar doosri countries me apna loha mnwa rai hai...

Hm koxhixh krte hain k Mr.Kartick ya Mr. Rahul xe contact hoxake or unse un ki company or ix jeet k bare me pooch xakain...

Nd their was clapping and cheering everywhere in the office...everyone at bacon group of company was delighted and very happy...they were congratulating eachother...then came Mr.Rahul with a bottle of champagne nd open it up nd celebrated their victory...

Next day

we see a taxi stops in front of BACON GROUP OF COMPANIES and a girl wearing simple office dress came out of the taxi...her hairs were left open... she gave the money to the taxi driver,as she was going inside she gets a call on his cell..she picked up the phone and one way conversation was something like this

Girl : hello Sir, yes Sir, I have reached here , yes Sir, Dont worry, No one will get to know about me...yes I will take care , Good Day Sir...bye

as she cut the call she look at the time and said

Girl: sh*t man !!! i am late .. I have to rush..

as she was moving really fast she didn't see around her and bumped into some one

Girl: I am... Iam sorry ... I was in a hurry...

as she step aside to see who it was, a handsome hunk was looking at her dreamingly...

both of them look at the clock at the same time and said

Boy & Girl: Sh*t ...I am late..

both look at each other and then rush towards the reception ...

Receptionist : Good Morning , Welcome to Bacon Group of companies...How may I help you?

Girl & Boy at the same time: I am here for the interview..

both of them again look at each other but soon came back to reality as they heard the receptionist

receptionist: Can I have your names please?

Girl : Ridhima Gupta

Boy : Aramn Malik

receptionist : you have to wait in the waiting room which is on the 3rd floor till some one calls you..

both nodded and went to the directed place...

as they reach there they saw few people sitting there

both of them sat on sofa facing each other...

Arman was feeling nervous but as her gaze went to Ridhima he forgot all his tensions and nervousness and start looking at her admiringly..

Arman (in his mind) : she is so beautiful...her Eyes they are just so pretty.. how she look beutiful when she moved the strand of her hair back...coming out of his dream ...Arman dude what is happening to you...have you lost it.?? you are here for an interview so concentrate on the interview and avoid her.

as he came out of his thoughts he heared some one calling him..he look to see a girl in her early twenties wearing an office dress and glasses calling him for the interview..he stands up composed hims self and then went after the girl

as he came out of the office he was confident that he will get the job

as he came out of the office he saw the same girl asking for Ridhima .

Ridhima also went behind the girl

arman wait their for some time to know the reaction of ridhima as he was little tensed that she might also get the job as she was so confident..

ridhima came out of the office smlling..she knew she will get the job...

she came and sit on the sofa as she was directed to do so...after some more interviews

same girl came in the waiting room and announce that the interview is over as we have already chosen the best one for this job..

you will be informed by tomorrow that who is appointed for this job.

Ridhima and Arman look and each other and then went out of the office to their respective homes

on the way to her home ridhima gets a call

the one way conversation was something like this...

Ridhima: hello Sir,

Ridhima: yes sir, don't worry sir I am sure I will get this Job...

Ridhima: Yes sir, I'll be careful...

Ridhima: bye...

as Iam a new writer so plz let me know the mistakes.. as my english is not so good so I am sure there'll be lots of mistakes...

but do tell me how was it Good or bad or just hit the like button if you like it...

love

Fizza..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update😊😊
waiting for ur next update:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Hey Fizza
How are you dear?
I'm really loving the story.
I would love to read more.
AR's first meeting was awesome.
Thanks a lot for the pm..
Plz update the next part soonest.
From noonwards I would comment from my another id-crazy4KASH_AR.
Plz send me pms on this id only.
Take care!
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NSDT_PM

Hey Fizza
How are you dear?
I'm really loving the story.
I would love to read more.
AR's first meeting was awesome.
Thanks a lot for the pm..
Plz update the next part soonest.
From noonwards I would comment from my another id-crazy4KASH_AR.
Plz send me pms on this id only.
Take care!
love ya

hey sw8i...m abxolutly f9...
how r u..??
may i know ur real name plz, itx awkward adressing u as crazy for kash😕
and thanx for loving the story, i'll update the next part really soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7


~PART 2~

Next day

Our handsome hunk was playing basket ball with other boys...he was dribbling the ball n other boys were all around him trying to get the ball from him but he was too fast for any of them ...so he just went on dribbling it and then basket...

There were little boys standing there, they were watching arman playing and was cheering for him...

Arman used to come here every day to play and also to teach little boys how to play...it was his favourite game...

As usual arman won the game against others...and then every one went from there as there was nothing to do there...this was their daily routine...they used to challenge arman and at the end they loose...

And then it was the time for the little kids to play basket ball with our hero...

Arman was playing basketball with the kids,

When a girl came, she was jogging in the park, her shoe lace untied and she sat near the the basketball court to tie them n then all of a sudden a ball came from behind and hit her head...

Arman: Bulls eye...

Ridhima pick up the ball without facing him and then turn around, both were surprised to see each other there...

Arman: tm to wohi ho na...wo jo kal office me mili thi...kia nam tha tmara...dhi...dhima...han dhima right..???

Ridhima(angry): its not dhima,

Ridhima: ye ball kis ki hai...???/

Arman: wo jo dooor wahan pe ek hotel hai na...

Ridhima: hunh...????

Arman: wahan se ur k ai hai...:p

Ridhima: what...???are you crazy...???

Arman: tmain yahan pe koi or ball se khelta hua nazar ara hai...???

Ridhima: nai..

Arman: and kia ye ball us hotel se asakti hai...???

Ridhima: obvisly not...

Arman: to...

Ridhima: to kia...???

Arman: tmara namm such me dhima hona chaie tha...it means k ye ball hmari hi hui na...

Ridhima: ohh...

Arman: dhima...can i have my ball back please...me in bachon ko sikha raha tha n tm hamara tym waste krrai ho...

Ridhima: its not dhima...i m telling u for the last tym its ridhima...

Ridhima: n tm in k coach ho...???

Arman: well yahan itna acha aim or kisi ka ho hi nai sakta...ri ght boys...???

He then high five with the boys..

Ridhima look at him with her eye brows lifting...

Ridhima: bht smart samajhte ho khud ko...???

Arman: no no sweetheart, samajhta nai hn...me hn...

Ridhima ran toward the basket while dribbling the ball and score a basket...

Arman was amazed to see that but when ridhima turn towards him he compose him self

Ridhima: hey boys...coach badal lo...faide me raho ge...

Arman: ye bin mangi advice dene ka shok hai ya adat...???

While dribbling the ball infront of her...

Arman: waise sweetheart ye jo game hai na...akele nai khela jata...

Best of three hojai...????

Ridhima after thinking for a second: DONE

The match begins, 1st the ball came to ridhima...she was dribbling it very quickly and elegantly and arman was trying to get the ball from her, at a point when arman was infront of her he winked at ridhima, and ridhima was shocked and stopped dribbling ball, arman take the advantage of this , get the ball from her and score a basket...

Now the ball is again in ridhima's hands...she is dribbling the ball, inspite of all the efforts of arman he was not able to get the ball from her and atlast she scored a basket...

Ridhima looks really happy,

Now the ball is in arman's hand, he is dribbling it when suddenly ridhima took the ball from him and started dribbling,

Suddenly ridhima's cell start ringing...

Ridhima checked her cell

Ridhima: oh no...i am late...tmain bad me harana pare ga...

Arman: heyyy...to is bar ka score equal na....

Ridhima pick up the ball and scored a basket...

Arman was amazed ...

Ridhima xtarted leaving again, when arman shouted from behind...

Arman: yo...basket dhima, apna asli nam to btati jao....

Ridhima looked at him, show him thumbs up and then thumbs down...

She then went away from there...

On her way she received a phone call

One way conversation was something like this

Ridhima: hello sir, sorry sir, i was stuck in a stupid game...sorry sir , i know i've much more important task to do...yes sir we succeeded in our 1st stage...sure sir...ok sir...i'll talk to you later...bye sir...

And that was the end of conversation...

and this is the end of this part...

tell me how was it...???

i know this part is a total copy of the 1st episode of dill mill gayye...but DMG is incomplete without fun and basket ball is something special for both arman and ridhima...

anyways, do let me know how was the part...and do tell me my mistakes...i'll really appreciate that....


love

Fizza

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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