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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome prt...now geet too love him but ye sona ne kya krdia...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update!!
Loved it
Mel no MU btw Maaneet ..pls
Kicked that bitch shona asap😡
waiting for next..cont.soon
thankx for pm



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Posted: 13 years ago
S:Geet do you know how you you guys have to pretend
G:Huh eh woh just a few days more
S:Hmm great can life without my Maan anymore
G:Hmmm excuse me I need to go to work
Geet left her room walking outside in trance.Sona smirked she wiped the name of geet away from the coffee mug kissed Maan; s name and sipped the entire that coffee maan made for geet.Geet had left the room in trance but she stopped and the door and turned around she looked at sona in tears. Guess the coffee also only belongs to her Geet thought.Sona saw Geet still standing when Geet finally laughed she bursted out laughing. Sona texted someone kaam hogeya. Maan just entered KM.
M:geet Geeet
Sona ran downstairs.
S:Maan missed ya
M:Sona hey how are you
S:Maan how are you searching
M:Geet
S:She went to work
M:That' s great you know it' s her b-day kal want to give a huge party tonight at twelve
S:wah how romantic great I will help you
M:Great I will put a not that I am going out of town.and dadi is at a friend
S:Where will the party be
M:Outhouse she never comes there
S:great then lets start.
Geet had worked day in day out . Specially the last 6 months wher she worked at as a nanny and accounted. she had collected 1/2 crore. She went to the bank and rented another 1/2 crore on the ground of her job. She rememberd that where she worked like a nanny the had a empty appartment she decided to rent it. Geet went back to KM to pick her stuff and bid goodbye to Maan.She entered her room. he eyes went on the wall.
Tears formed in her eyes he left. She won' t be able to see him one last time. She packed her bags and left leaving a letter and suitcase for Maan behind.Maan was done this night would be so special just he and Geet. He would tell her how much he loves her. he looked around to see if everything was perfect.He just hoped that she will love it.
S:Maan I will go and get geet
M:Thanks
Sona entered the room to find a letter and suitcase. She looked around no Geet. She grabbed the letter.When she finshed reading she was in a shock.Shona informed dadi after that she ran to the outhouse.
M:Shona Geet kaha hai
She handed him the letter.
Dear Maan,
when you will be reading this I will be gone. I wiss I could have seen you one last time before leaving. So that I could thank you for everything personally. Thank you for every to thing Maan.
In this suitcase is one crore. I know this amount is nothing to what you did for me, but stil. Please Maan don' t mind. But I fellt I did owe you at least this much, specially after all you did.
May you and Shona have a wonderfull live a head.
Love,
Geet
Tears fell from Maan' s eyes he looked around.
This was supposed to be there the start of their love story.He opened the suitcase one crore hou could she. She tried to pay him off. She could never pay his love off, could she. Why couldn' t she see his love filled eyes. Did he miss read her eyes maybe she never loved him, just respected him for everything he did.Sona broke his thoughts.
S:I am sorry Maan
M:Why are you sorry and why did she write May you and Shona have a wonderfull live a head.
S:Woh
she narrated what she did in the morning
S:Dadi and I thought if we would make her feel jealous she would admitt her feelings. You know the jealous game
M:So you thought my Geet would try to steal someone else BF
S:Woh in that serial
Maan showed his hand
M:Please leave
Sona wanted to say something when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around she took a breath of relief and left. Maan felt a hand on his shoulder.
M:Shona I said leave
G:Maan don' t you regonize your Geet' s touch
Maan turned around to see his DD standing in front of him.He hugged her tightly.But then he realised something and let her go.
M:Why did you come back huh oh wait did you come to give some more money
G:Maan wo
M:I didn' t know my love had a price tag Geet
G:Sorry please forgive you wifey on her b-day
Maan melted hearing wifey.I carresed her face.
M:I thought I lost you Geet
G:I thought that you (stammering)
Maan put his finger on her lips.
M:Ssshhh I know
Geet looked around she was amazed by the arrangment
G:I love you Mr.Khurana
Maan suddenly went on his knees. He grabbed her hand.
M:Geet I love you more then life it self. This Maan singh Khurana can' t life whitout his dil ki dharkan his Ms dreamy will you marry me again.She nodded. He put the rings in her finger.
Geet carresed the ring tears of happeniss fell from her eyes.She went on her knees and hugged maan tightly.
G:two rings (between sobs)
M:Two time marrying so two rings
Geet giggled.
After ten years
R:How dreamy she is
Roshini said while looking tv.
G:Uff sab yeh Tia ka asar hai
V:Haan didn' t my ms dreamy make even you devil princess so dreamy
Geet smacked her head. maan came from behind.
M:Geet you look so dreamy when you fed up with vicky' s talks
Geet giggled while Vicky glared at him.Tia came from behind.
T:Are you making fun off us Mr.boring
M:I wouldn' t dare
Maan smirked
M:Chale Mrs. dreamy
G;Let' s go Mr,Dreamy. Bye Mr and Mrs boring your nanny must be coming and we will be back at 8
T:hawww you will go na agar mein tuijhe zinda choroe ghi Geet
Sona just entered the kitchen.
S:Geet you go Iss Tia ko mein dehk lu ghi
T:Aagi Maneet ki chamchi
S:No there wellwisher
Geet hugged Shona
G:Bye sweet take care of these three babies
Shona giggled.
Maneet left leaving a fuming Tia and Vicky behind😆
The End
Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
didn't expect last part so soon...but thank God she came back
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Posted: 13 years ago
CUTE ending
LOOOL you didn't forget Tia and Vicky LOOOL
you should start a new ff in the place of this story and my imperfection
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

loved it...

didnt expected to finish dis fast...but happy k both confessed deir love n r together with each other...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely ending n fr d pm also...


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Posted: 13 years ago
Why u ended dis ia hurry??
Hope u strt new ff on maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
OYYYEEE YEH KYA THA??????
Itni jaldi last part?
Thoda aur lamba karati! I was actually enjoying this story more than DR2!
Awesome part!!
Loved it!!
Awww it was a jealous game! Hain Geet laughed Sona laughed lol!!
OMG Geet tried to pay him off! Geet is an emotional wreck!
Awww Maan was planning bday party for his DD! He was so excited!!
OMG Geet left!! Poor Maan was so heart broken!!
Haaayyee Geet came back WOW!!! he he 2 marriages so 2 rings lol! Awesome one dear!!
uffo this vicky is still nautanki! lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago
he he boring dreamy nautanki ! I am confused with so many mr and mrs lol!!
Awww Sona is a sweetheart!!
he he 3 babies lol!!
Start another one soon!!
Absolutely loved it but was not expecting this sudden ending:(

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