My Sun, My Sky, My Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Following "Poem" Sandhya is devoting to Sooraj and Jewelling value of Sooraj's in her life. ❤️

My Sun, My Sky, My Moon

* Sun strong aroha A appear
from him is as dazzling as the sun
As beautiful as his eyes
I fall myself in.


* A look from him is as
arrant as the crystal blue sky,
A smile from him is as
spine-tingling as the moon


* In every downfalls I takes
He is always there to make
A truce to stop the pain
One good troth you must attain


* Often trudge of being real
A tiff on what I should feel
Tidings of new beginnings
Lots of thwarts before endings


* I'd been not so good and good
And yet for me He just stood
Right next where I was in doom
Protect me despite the boom


* Dedicate this poem in hand
To the One that don't break bonds
My tears He wipe so eager
Because He's love shines so shimmer


* With Him I know I'm enough
Problems that will make me tough
With Him I've always felt loved
Destiny I didn't roved

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear sis... Its good...👍🏼 Aapko ithni achi poetry bhi aathi hai..
* In every downfalls I takes
He is always there to make
A truce to stop the pain
One good troth you must attain

i liked this part a lot...
wow.. great ami sis...👏 Ya online pyar ka assar horaha hai I can see that now...TnJ where are you?🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ami🤗, beautifully written!!😳. Sandys' poem is soo touching & lovely!❤️. Kudos to you gal👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely poem Ami Di.
Really glittering and glowing with eternal glory.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: apkavishwa

Dear sis... Its good...👍🏼 Aapko ithni achi poetry bhi aathi hai..
* In every downfalls I takes
He is always there to make
A truce to stop the pain
One good troth you must attain

i liked this part a lot...
wow.. great ami sis...👏 Ya online pyar ka assar horaha hai I can see that now...TnJ where are you?🤣

My beloved VishwaNathan Anna...🤗🤗🤗 Thank you so much for lovely compliment.⭐️. Whenever I'm in blissful state n surrounded by nature then I can write such a poem..I'm missing my "Baati" n will wait for her response. 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yaalini

Ami🤗, beautifully written!!😳. Sandys' poem is soo touching & lovely!❤️. Kudos to you gal👏

YaaaLiiiNiii🤗🤗🤗 Yeah poem is somehow turned very touchy against my nature..Isn't it?? 😍 Thanks a bunch for a lubly appreciation..⭐️

Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

Lovely poem Ami Di.
Really glittering and glowing with eternal glory.

Thanks a lot Sbulbul Da for a divine compliment. I'm izz overwhelmed. ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aah Ami that touched my heart. Bhare mohe naina! Kudos my multi talented niece!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deebz

aah Ami that touched my heart. Bhare mohe naina! Kudos my multi talented niece!

Thankoo Thankoo Deebz maasi.🤗 😉 😃

I'm glad that it touched to your heart only not elsewhere like stomach or limbs..😳 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyyy Amudi!!! Bahut accha likha tune, abhi matlab bhi samjha de😉

Bas abhi gusse se laal mat hona...U know that I like to taang-keech u...Bas aise hi mazak kar rahi thi 😃 Kya karu khud toh aisi poetry likh nahi sakti na🤢

Very nice lines and very deep meaning too!!! Loved it a lot...❤️

Next, I want to read Suraj's response to this poem, in the same style😃

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Originally posted by: Ruby13

Heyyy Amudi!!! Bahut accha likha tune, abhi matlab bhi samjha de😉


Bas abhi gusse se laal mat hona...U know that I like to taang-keech u...Bas aise hi mazak kar rahi thi 😃 Kya karu khud toh aisi poetry likh nahi sakti na🤢
Very nice lines and very deep meaning too!!! Loved it a lot...❤️
Next, I want to read Suraj's response to this poem, in the same style😃

Oh my Genius mecho brain...🤗
Are you sure you want me to understand you the meaning of poem???😍 I also enjoy your "body - pulling" from 360degree angle..⭐️ 😉 😆

Thank you so much for the lubly compliment. ❤️ Lub you... 🤗🤗🤗

Next time Pakka I'll write poem from Sooraj's end. 👍🏼
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