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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
nice...
poor Geet...
hope Maan tells her everything...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey gr8 part...
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was such an emotional part...
finally they confessed their feelings and geet is all safe with him... that was so nice,.,,
even though maan is suffering but he want his jaan to be fine... and he is so caring...
u wrote very well when geet fainted and maan was so tensed and took her to car...
finally geet opened her eyes and they both are in peace.. and she drifted to sleep...
dev and pinky came and they are taking geet to pinky's house...
aww maan is in so much pain, hedidnt tell geet about him and he is suffering...
wht will happen whn geet will come to knw abt maan...wht will her reaction...cant maan b cured?
continue nxt prt soon plz...
eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
GEET IS AN EMATIONAL WRECK
SO MAAN CANT TELL HER ABOUT HIS ILLNESS
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Posted: 13 years ago
updating...
anyone is here??? 😕
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago




PART-17

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Maan(st):isilye geet isiliye iam doing this..iam hiding my truth from u..i just want u out from that hell n stay with them who cares for u who loves u...apne maan ko maaf kardo geet I cant even tell u the truth atleast not so soon..u already left shattered with this small seperation if u come to know about me...no I don't have courage to see u breaking down but how long I can hide from u..god plz help me...

He kissed her forehead again...





Soon they reached pinky's home n maan carrried geet in his arms who is in semiconscious state..they fed her with juice on the way so that she could gain consciousness..but she is still weak due to lack of food...maan took her inside the room n placed her on bed..but geet's hold around his neck is so tight n it seemed that she wants him to hold tight so that he couldn't move an inch away from her...



Maan smiled n tried to free himself from her hold n when he tried he saw a frown on her face as if asking why u r doing this??maan caressed her cheek n said"geet...mein yahi hoon jaan...iam not going anywhere"..he pecked her forehead which brought a slight smile on her face...



Pinky asked dev to bring some food from outside so he left after witnessing the beautiful scene where maan sat on bed carressing her hair with his one palm n held her hand in his free hand...Pinky then remember that maan didn't had his medicine till now n went to bring them...





Maan sat caressing her hair lovingly n geet drifted to sleep as she is very much in stress also she didn't had a proper sleep since many days...but still she didn't leave his hand for a second she is very much scared even in her sleeping...what if she loses her maan again...she held his hand tight close to her heart not letting him go...maan understood her fear n took her in his embrace as if assuring her that he is with her n will not go anywhere...



Geet who was restless till now smiled in her sleep as she felt maan's warmth n snuggled more in to him.."maan.."she mumbled in her sleep..."ha jaan..mein yahi hoon..tumhara maan tumhare paas hai"he said to comfort her as he understood her state of mind..geet hugged him more tight by waist n hid her face in his neck...maan also took her more in to him to calm her to make her feel relieved from all the stress she was going through..she slowly slowly drifted to sleep again this time she slept very peacefully but she is attentive even now not to let her maan go away from her...




After some time maan felt dizzy n suffocated as he didn't had his medicine till now...he felt a pain in his head ..soon his pain increased more n more leaving him unbearable...he slowly placed geet on bed not disturbing her n moved out of the room...for his dismay he didn't find either dev or pinky outside..he is not able to understand what to do now..omg what if geet wakes up??What if she witness this condition of mine??kya jawab doonga use??omg what should I do now??maan thought holding his head in between his palms tight...for his luck pinky who went for his medicines came to him running n gave him his medicine..with in few minutes maan came to his normal state...




Here geet felt that maan's warmth is missing...she felt suffocated again..an unknown fear engulfed her..she opened her eyes n found no one...tears started rolling down her cheeks..she looked around with a hope that her maan is with her...she is praying to god at the same time not to turn her meeting with maan in to a dream again..she was sure that her maan is with her but the fear which engulfed her forcing her to think what if maan left her again???no I cant leave without him..no god not again..."she is about to scream his name but saw him entering the room with food plate.."maan.."she said in chocked voice while fresh tears escaped again from her eyes but this time the tears of happiness that it was not a dream her maan is really with her.




Maan saw her tears which gave him utmost pain,which peirced his heart...he is already feeling guilty for hiding his truth from her n now her tears increasing his guilt,his pain..he placed the food tray on the table n ran to her...geet instantly hugged him tight encircling her hands around his neck.




"maan...sob...maan...sob"this is only the word she could say between her sobs..she is happy that her maan is really with her..she was scared for a second thinking she lost her maan again,she left her again but she was wrong..she is not finding words to say but hugged him tight assuring herself that her maan is with her...maan also hugged her tight while his one hand rubbing her back to calm her"shhh geet..iam here jaan'mein tumhare paas hoon"..she smiled in tears n hugged him more tight...



After few minutes she broke the hug n took his hands in her's..she started kissing the back of his palms continously while tears in her eyes took no name to stop...maan smiled in tears..he knew that she was spending like life less soul without him but today he saw her love for him,her craving to have a glimpse of him,her wish to be in his arms where she felt secure,peace...he held her face in between his hands lovingly n wiped her tears with his thumb nodding in no...he kissed her forehead then her eyes...maan again took her in his embrace assuring her he is with her.




"maan.."geet spoke still hiding herself in his embrace.."hmm.."maan mumbled..."maan plz don't ever go away from me...even when I ask you to do.." she spoke lifting her face to meet his gaze while hugging him tight by his waist..maan looked at her with pain.."ha maan..plz don't leave me even if I ask u to do'I want u maan..i cant leave without u'u r my life'" she tighted her hold around his waist hugging him more tight n hiding her face in the crook of his neck..."pata hai maan jab aap chale gaye the I felt that I lost my life'I don't know how I spent these many days without u...but I cant live anymore if I loose u again..ha maan mein marjaungi aapke.." before geet could complete it "geet..."maan stopped her by closing her mouth'"don't u dare to talk like that again..agli baar marne ki baat ki na mujse bura koi nahi hoga samji tum"he said with teary eyes holding her nape lovingly...geet smiled in tears n said"agar aap bhi mujse door jaane ke bhare mein socha bhi na mujse bura koi nahi hoga..samje aap"she spoke leaving him chuckled..


Geet again held his hands in her tiny palms kissing it.."maan iam so sorry..i know mein ne aapka bahut dil dukhaya tha na...I said u to go away from me..i said I don't love u...but maan.."maan held her hand which was holding his n nodded to stop asking for sorry.."no geet you don't need to be sorry..i know u'u plz..."maan said not able to hear those words from his jaan..it's increasing his guilt more n more..when she came to him he was the one who ran away from her but what he can do.


Geet:maan plz muje bolne dijiye...geet said looking at him with pleading eyes...she wanted to speak her heart out today..."I said I don't love u...but maan sach toh ye hai ki I love u more than my own life..infact u r my life...I'll die for sure if I don't have u in my life..ha maan I'll.. before she could complete maan stopped her from further speaking by taking her lips in to his as if saying her that she don't need to explain anything to him..he knows her more than her...he is not at all angry on her n loves her the same way she loves him...




geet gasped with this sudden kiss but closed her eyes while a tear of happiness rolled down her cheek..her maan kissed her for the first time n she understood the meaning of this...her hand held his nape caressing it while other holding his collar from back of his neck in her tiny fists...



maan nibbled her lower lip gently n bit there..when she hissed in pain he sucked the the area to sooth her pain..he then kissed her gently taking her lips in to his again..geet too responded to him n both are kissing each other expressing their love for each other,their craving for to be with each other...soon their kissed turned in to a passonate one...maan entered her mouth when she gave her permission..he invaded her mouth collecting her sweet nectar...geet's tears faded away long back n she smiled in between the kiss also blushed seeing this side of her maan...soon her hand encirled his neck holding him tight n pulling him more towards her...while her other palm caressing his scalp...maan's one hand held her neck underneath her hair while other held her waist tight.



They broke the kiss when they felt the need for air..maan felt relieved as he finally saw the smile on her face..she looked totally relieved n happy now..geet still closed her eyes as she is shy to face maan after the kiss..maan smiled at his innocent mishty..he kissed on her forehead n took her in his embrace hugging her tight...geet smiled hugging him tight..






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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update maneet closeness and geet scared if maan leave maan consoling and



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part a lot..
he was not at all bothered abt his pain..
he was worrying only abt geet...
geet's words were so touching..

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update👏
Loved maaneet moment😳
Maaneet conversation superb..⭐️
Maan is worried for geet only and hided the truth..Great👏
Precap sound interesting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely maaneet moments.. pls save maan.. 😭geet ki babaji.. pls cont soon..

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