Simply Magic - Spell # 3 - Rizreet OS - Page 19. - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
amazing os.

very nice.

continue soon.

thanks for th pem./
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
awww...it was such a cute, beautiful n adorable os...😳gosh u can turn a small n short scene into a romantic n adorable moment thru ur writing...😳pls write more on MN...pls start wid an ff soon...thanx 4 d pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
u r simply magical, Angel...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
itz really grt kinza...
want more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Okay so was missing MN like anything, so wrote a snippet of the track we all wished to see, but weren't shown ..

Priceless moments

Nupur was munching on the new flavor of chips, her current favorite. She lazily placed a chip in her mouth and frowned at the packets lying around her. Frowning, and too lazy to even move, she counted all of them, and before she could announce the number, a voice from behind did her work.

"10 packets and 11th in hand'

Nupur raised her head and it was Mayank who remarked casually, his head immersed in his books.

"Maaynnkkk!!", she shrieked childishly and Mayank placed his hands on his ear, "God Nupur! Calm down! The neighbors will come complaining", he giggled and concentrated back on his work, leaving a fuming Nupur.

"are you actually making fun of me?", she munched a handful of chips and throwing away the blanket, she stood up on the bed.

Sensing his wife had changed posture; Mayank raised his head and couldn't help giggling at the cute picture she was presenting. Munching a mouthful of chips and glaring him dangerously, looking as cute as a school going kid in her PJs.

"nai Nupur jeee, meri majal", he made a very scared face and held his ears, and Nupur who wasn't in any mood to give in his cuteness, frowned further, "jhoot!". Glaring him with teary eyes, she lied down again, and went under blanket, and that is where Mayank felt his heart caught in a fist.

"Nupur", he said breathless and quickly rushed to her and sitting beside her, he tried to remove blanket, which Nupur wasn't allowing, "Nupur", he whispered very softly, rubbing his hands over her fists clasping at the blanket, "meri Jhansi ki rani, meri film ki heroine", he smiled, whispering these endearments, kissing her fists and melting Nupur that she lowered blanket so that her eyes were visible.

For a moment Mayank sighed ' she had the world's most beautiful eyes, huge, deep and ocean like, inviting and full of love. On an impulse, he placed his hand over her eyes and she closed them as a reflex action and Mayank placed tender kisses on her eyes, "you are beautiful Nupur", he whispered and feeling breathless Nupur left the blanket, and Mayank pulled it away from her gorgeous face, which had evident signs of being overwhelmed on the sudden and unexpected romance, "kya hai"?, she whispered slowly, keeping her eyes lowered

"kuch bhi nahi hai is k ilawa k you are beautiful", he stroked her silky cheek with his rather rough masculine hands which made her feel ticklish and she bit her lower lip tightly, "phir jhoot!", she said, adjusting herself in his arms, and smiling he had started stroking, "ye tab yaad nai ata jab Mazak ura rahe they", she pouted and giggling Mayank hugged her tight, "arey us main mazak kya tha, I was just stating facts about my wife's chips consumption" he answered intellectually and failing to feign anger, she giggled and hugged him back, "very funny Mr Sadu Sharma", she showed her tongue to him and snuggled, while literally aww-ing, he pulled her close, "you know the extent of cuteness that is dropping out of you nowadays, I am so damn sure my kids are going to be the cutest kids on this world", he kissed her cheek and Nupur pondered, "hmmm, and the amount of saduness you project nowadays, that makes me feel that I should stay at a distance from you", she giggled and was about to move out of his arms, which Mayank didn't allow and adjusted blanket, "stop dreaming with open eyes, go to sleep so you have proper logical dreams", he kissed forehead and Nupur frowned, but the cuddled and closed eyes quietly, "logical dreams? Ye phrase bus tum hi use kar sakte ho Mayank", frowning she mumbled and yet again smiling at her cuteness, he stroked her softly, until she drifted into sleep, pouting and mumbling. <3

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
although tm naraz ho kr so gaye ho bt stl i must say kya OS hai jee! ❤️
it had innocense and beauty.. Smthng tht makes thr relation so special!
Loved the cute, tantrums throwng nupur and amazng handlng mayank! 😍
love u princess! ❤️
Edited by mulan. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Was missing dem Terribly!!!!!!! Sigh!
i think dis was much need at dis time for me...so...
Thank u sooo much API...🤗

Awww...That was sooo Damn Beautiful
dat u left me in tears still smiling rmmbr-ing dem...Sigh!!!!!
That was just sooo GR8!!!
i just hateee dos CVs n that channel agar aur kuch saal chal jata MJHT to kisi ka kya begar jata...
i jst want dem back!!!! plzzz
koi meri baat kyun nhi sunta!!! :'(
Sigh!!!!! Awesomest!!!!!
loved it sooo very much...
n i missed dis Caring Sadu Sharma n dis Adorable Nautanki Sharma our own Jhansi ki Rani...😉😳😍
loved it lodsss
loved it to d coreee
do write more n more n moreee plzzz
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
that was so sweet os..

very very sweet os...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
made me teary eyed!😭 Miss MN so badly!😒
aww... it ws sooo beautiful! <3😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
very very sweet and cute.lovelu update

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